VN Ren'Py Jamie [v0.10.3] [MoeMoeGames]

[SuperPerv96]

Right now, there is no incest in the game.

But is there incest content planned for the future? i dont mind waiting

 

[MoeMoeGames]

But is there incest content planned for the future? i dont mind waiting

Due to Patreons ToS there will be no incest in the game.

 

[muoto8900]

As much I have enjoyed this one I have to ask, how is this not tagged as a kinetic novel? The choices don't really seem to affect the overall situation other than minor details.

 

[rip-basium]

every day this game gets an update is a good day

 

[CutieLvr]

Thank you, MoeMoe, for this cute little update. I love Jamie as you know. I love that you are slowly easing Jamie into his true sissy self. My panties got so wet when the therapist was inserting her finger into his ass and telling him about fisting up to the elbow. I would love to see Jamie in something even skimpier, like a super short lacy, see-through top and either in super short shorts or even better a micro mini skirt that barely covers his little dicklett. Flashing my wet sticky panties (because it's your fault) at you, with love, baby. I wish I could take Jamie home with me.

 

[Rycharde's Realm]

Due to Patreons ToS there will be no incest in the game.

If it is just to Patreon's ToS that there is no incest, why do you support Patreon? Get a Subscribestar account instead. If, on the other hand, it is because you are not interested in including incest content, cool. It is your game.

 

[Master of Puppets]

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[SuperPerv96]

Due to Patreons ToS there will be no incest in the game.

Well thats a shame, i really wanted to try the game, but i really need a mom in a game . . . Good luck!

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

If it is just to Patreon's ToS that there is no incest, why do you support Patreon? Get a Subscribestar account instead. If, on the other hand, it is because you are not interested in including incest content, cool. It is your game.

I think it's because Patreon supports way more payment methods (more people use it to), SS only supports CC and only VISA/Mastercard at that, as I tried to use AMEX awhile back and it wasn't supported.

Also, they can do the route of "someone" making a patch then move it to

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or just random person post it here

I don't care either way, just this is what a lot do on Patreon or do the whole Landlady/Maid thingymabob.

 

[Malika1234]

love all the lesbian NTR. Havent finished the game yet, but thought i leave a comment. Please do add more lesbian relationships.. thank you!

Also loved the reverse pegging with strapon! more please!

 

[MoeMoeGames]

Master of Puppets

First, love your feedback !

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As always your feedback is amazing !

It´s so helping that you portray your experience with the game that makes me glimpse into the eyes of a player/reader.

Thanks for the layer tutorial, the typos(proofreading) and bug reports.

I really appreciate the effort and love you for this.

 

[Rycharde's Realm]

Maybe the finger to mouth thing was too much ? Its not scat in any way but also not casual/vanilla so I didn´t know where to put it. Maybe just on the humiliation option ?

ATM (ass-to-mouth) fetish does exist, and I'm a follower. And yes, the humiliation path is where it should be.

 

[MoeMoeGames]

ATM (ass-to-mouth) fetish does exist, and I'm a follower. And yes, the humiliation path is where it should be.

I really thought about all of this. And it does make sense, but I always have to draw a line.
In this case I choose to include it into the "casual" path since it often occurs in porn, but yea it seems to be a bit too hardcoe.

I really have to balance all of this so much it makes it hard to develop. Every fetish or kink I make optional makes it harder to develop the game further.

But I am still trying. And all of the feedback I get, gets me further to developing some kind of a fetish choice driven game.

Since this is my first game and I´m not familiar with Renpy or Python at all, it is a miracle I came this far.

 

[Master of Puppets]

Yeah the whole purpose of that position was to cum on his face.

Yeah, I'm just not a big fan of deliberately making him cum on his face. Fucking a trap missionary style and when he cums some ends up on his face? Hot, doing it deliberately? Eh, it isn't inherently a problem, but I most frequently see it combined with humiliation, which makes me leery of it.

I changed repeated empty lines with pauses ? Maybe this will help with "immersion" .
The main thing I used empty lines was to keep the transition from Sarah to Jamie (vice versa) to not dissapear right away.

And some times to have a silent moment between characters. I have the feeling it really does work better with pause. Thanks.

Yeah, that's what the pause statement is for, shouldn't use empty strings for that. pause to have it wait for the player to click, or pause 1 to have it wait for one second, etc. Having pauses is fine, just don't have two of them directly in a row without any dialogue or image changes. When the player clicks or hits space, they are saying "I'm ready to move on now, show me something new". There's basically no scenario where it's a good idea to frustrate the player by ignoring that. Likewise, it's technically possible to make a hard pause that the player can't click past, and has to wait out, but you should almost never use those.

For the apostrophe ( " )? I didn´t know how to use it in Renpy because it was always just splitting my texts.

Apostrophe is single quote ('). Double quote is used for strings. (If you do need to put double quotes in a string, you escape them with backslash like jamie "You ask \"How am I?\" I'm good." The ones immediately preceded by a backslash don't end the string)
The issue is that for some reason, you aren't using apostrophe characters (Unicode 0x27), you're using "acute accent" characters (Unicode 0xB4). They don't look right at all, to me. (Screenshots with the acute accent you've got right now, with the ASCII apostrophe character, and just for fun with the Unicode "fancy" apostrophe character (0x2019):

I don't know what keyboard layout you use, so I can't say what the right key to use is. (For the ASCII apostrophe, I doubt any keyboard has a key for a fancy Unicode apostrophe) On my UK keyboard it's on the @ key on the right of the letters, but it will be different for other English keymaps, let alone foreign ones.

Having no space between a word and a question mark or exclamation mark feels so wrong, I´m sorry but I can´t do that at all.
Maybe its a habit, maybe just my first language influence, but no

I don't know about other languages, but in English it's definitely wrong.

 

[Rycharde's Realm]

Since this is my first game and I´m not familiar with Renpy or Python at all, it is a miracle I came this far.

FULLY understand that. I've been working on a story-rich game with extreme fetishes some optional, a new world from the ground up (pun intended), and MULTIPLE races. Using Ren'Py and Daz3D, both with little to no experience. That was a couple of years ago. Now I have a better grasp on Daz; the basics of coding. Have a world set up... sorta. I continually add new races, new characters, the works. Soon I will have to knuckle down and get the game started. REAL nervous about that though.

 

[Action-B4stard]

I loved the new scene with the fingering, and self facial, "making" Jamie lick it up using the finger to tease his ass was just so good, I'd love to see some full-on rimming scenes, and more AtM, too few games do that. Can't wait to see more of Jamie getting his boy-hole stretched out in general though, so thanks for making the game!

 

[Mist.]

No bad reviews here:

I like the characters.​

I like the story.​

Even if the updates are short, they are frequent. This works very well because it keeps the game fresh in our minds (like waiting for the new episode of your TV show every week).​

The only drawback is that the dialog box does not disappear when there is no text. So you have to hide it manually with "Hide". (It's a bit annoying when, for example, you have to choose Jamie's new outfit, but it's not a major problem. I just hope it will be fixed in the next updates.)

I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope Jamie will get a hairstyle more in line with his new personality. I have to admit that the last scene with Val (v0.8.3) made me really happy. I can't wait to see Jamie swallow a real dick and get his anus stretched. And even if it's only a finger this time, the ass-to-mouth is pretty exciting.

 

[MoeMoeGames]

No bad reviews here:

I like the characters.​

I like the story.​

Even if the updates are short, they are frequent. This works very well because it keeps the game fresh in our minds (like waiting for the new episode of your TV show every week).​

First of all, thank you very much.

The only drawback is that the dialog box does not disappear when there is no text. So you have to hide it manually with "Hide". (It's a bit annoying when, for example, you have to choose Jamie's new outfit, but it's not a major problem. I just hope it will be fixed in the next updates.)

I wanted to fix this for ages, (Since the bikini update), but always forgot about this somehow. Now I fixed it for the next update.
Thanks for reminding me.

If you don´t want a textbox at all you can use the opacity slider in the options menu.

I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope Jamie will get a hairstyle more in line with his new personality.

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[MoeMoeGames]

I don't know what keyboard layout you use, so I can't say what the right key to use is. (For the ASCII apostrophe, I doubt any keyboard has a key for a fancy Unicode apostrophe) On my UK keyboard it's on the @ key on the right of the letters, but it will be different for other English keymaps, let alone foreign ones.

Fixed for the next update.

 

[soma7x]

>mastrubate furiously

It's the little things that make me love these games. I've not heard 'mastrubate' since high school.
No offense meant to dev, I jst nostalgia'd for a bit and almost choked to death on my beer. Job well done. Keep it up.