Tbh Jamie's naïveté is starting to get frustrating. It's at the point where he should be more or less conscious of what is happening around him, but it still feels like over half his dialogue is just reacting to other characters' statement with "Huh, what could they mean?" or "Oh no, I can't do that!"
I think we would all really enjoy if he started being more proactive, as in actively choosing to do things rather than have girls say "Let's do X" and he replies with "Oh, ok I guess". And show a bit of enthusiasm and self-awareness. This whole story started with him being caught with cuck porn and in the latest update he doesn't even know what "POV" means.
You could've said this a lot more constructive? I like how you do this and that, and the turn of this made me feel the story ended up here, while you did that good and all, you could've done this or that? I like how you did this, but I feel he should've known what that means? etc etc?
Just an example, but yeah? Also I think you should use the word "I" more, because you aren't speaking for all of us.
It feels, I feel.
I think we all would.. No! Just say I think because you don't speak for all of us.
Take this to heart or not, but if you want to be a cool person, and helpful, and help building more than destroying, then "I" think you should.
