Seanthiar
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- Jun 18, 2020
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Does not change that the MC is NOT JEN and it still puts me off the game. You can fulfill his 'plot ideas' better making the idiot a side character and tell everything out of Jen's view and her telling how she experiences everything out of her view..... The story should be named little shits fantasies or something like that.
Sadly this kind of idea to have a title that implies a female MC only to have a male MC where the female is just a part of the story is common in the stories and something I do not like.
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