VN Ren'Py Jessica O'Neil's Hard News [v0.60] [stoperArt]

[Gxzero]

I haven't played the last 2 updates but I have to agree with the people saying it was a golden opportunity with the parker car scene. You know say how she was half-drunk/dizzy while she said no to accidentally slip it and while he tries to back off to leg lock him in there would be insanely hot the way that scene played out. I like the idea of happenstance more than it being heavily foreshadowed.

stoper 2D concept artist here. Consider changing that heart in your logo like that having the pen making a little paper crack when it passes inside. Just helping since you went in the trouble to think about the newspaper title font and the heart and pen look kinda lazy compared to the rest.

 

[Yougiblack]

how long till 0.35 full ?

 

[omarsayed]

BeastMaster59 hm, but wouldn't it be satisfying when things happen one day? I mean, I understand the frustration, trust me. I was reading a lewd comics the other day, and things are moving at a really steady pace there, which I enjoy. But the pages are released so damn slow. But if I have to chose between that and the usual stuff, I get that any day. Quick porn is everywhere. Type a random site in the address bar and the chance is you're going to find some fast porn.

lucifer1988 check the previous pages.

I have no problem at all with a slow reasonable story that gets hotter and hotter as its move on with slow burn.

MY problem is,

how come jess by now allowed other girls to touch kiss lick feel her in every day..yet when it comes to parker mayor and other male characters suddenly she feels she got so far and she remembers she has a bf then the scene cut with her running away.

this doesn't make sense at all ..you are doing it just bec the lesbian sex have no penetration in it and you know that's what most of us want.
I wouldn't mind if the slow pace was done well between all characters ..but seeing her having sex with heather then knowing in the next day jess will b the same with other male characters does not make any sense at all.

 

[Higurashika]

Is there any way to have a date with Blake?

 

[omarsayed]

That's highly subjective. About the only think I'd commend is that at least you stated that its just your opinion.

Starting in the middle of a faithful relationship about to break down in the coming arc is a common dramatic tactic, and for good reason. It creates layers of emotion and allows us to peer into the inner complexities of a character. It heightens the impression of sex as something more than a biological act to get out of the way. I can understand a preference for games that "get the first time out of the way" immediately (especially for those players looking for quick gratification), but those games are asking different questions of its characters and have different narrative uses for the sexual payouts. Some of your examples don't even do it that well. "Seeds of Chaos" for example, is writing itself in emotional circles that get blander with each rotation. Dr. Pinkcake is good, but he and stoper are not writing the same kinds of stories, and not with the same narrative intentions. If you prefer Dr. Pinkcake's storytelling to stoper's, then fine. But your attempt at invalidating stoper's style is shortsighted and immature.

As for this update, I like it. Sure, I'm all about the intimacy between two women, but I do love how Jessica's life is more layered and contains more than just a sexual neuroses. I can appreciate being made to wait for what I want, provided the journey is worth it. Our Red String, for example, barely even hints at its lesbian potential, but I'm there for the ride anyway. Stoper is trying something worthwhile in the adult gaming space, and I can appreciate both the attempt and the results.

you just want more lesbian scene bec you like it that all hun.

if it was the opposite with jess jumping around on other guy dicks you would b like wtf there is no build at all the story moving too fast bla bla....

but since its the lesbo are getting the action you are yeah this is completely normal and well-paced story like WHAT really now ?
its like the lesbian sex doesn't count or it's not cheating or something
at least b honest with yourself pls.

 

[Jack-ish]

Waste of time

 

[AL.d]

Last time I played this was a year ago and I have to say...wow. I mean I get slow burn but the meat on this is still bloody raw.

The game (and its protag) is literally in the exact same state as I left it a year ago. She is still the same cocktease, appearing hesitant but teasing everybody. Maybe a hard tease here and there, a handjob, some lesbian scenes (same as a year ago), no progression at all. Just lots and lots of rubbing, I imagine characters in this game must be getting friction burns all the time.

 

[Jashmyne]

I have no problem at all with a slow reasonable story that gets hotter and hotter as its move on with slow burn.

MY problem is,

how come jess by now allowed other girls to touch kiss lick feel her in every day..yet when it comes to parker mayor and other male characters suddenly she feels she got so far and she remembers she has a bf then the scene cut with her running away.

this doesn't make sense at all ..you are doing it just bec the lesbian sex have no penetration in it and you know that's what most of us want.
I wouldn't mind if the slow pace was done well between all characters ..but seeing her having sex with heather then knowing in the next day jess will b the same with other male characters does not make any sense at all.

I do have to agree with this. It is very strange that she is so worried about cheating with other men when she is already cheating with other women. It's cheating regardless. And infact she cheated with other women rather quickly even.
Since it being compared to it, A Wife and Mother which is also about slow burn the MC Sofia hasn't cheated yet. Sofia is getting there but it's about on a equal level(if you go down those routes) between the sexes. So it feels like atleast once Sofia crosses that line then it will be crossed for both sexes. Not her cheating with say other men but other women is a big no no since that would be wrong or vice versa.
So Sofia is atleast more consistent while Jessica isn't. Parker is having a nice build up and I think the payoff will be very good, same with Tommy but Heather was rather rushed to the detriment of Jessica's character.

 

[omega_rugal]

again 5 minute play for the last update. really boring

 

[endriux]

Waiting a long of time and ... eh. I'm pass.

 

[baka]

how come jess by now allowed other girls to touch kiss lick feel her in every day..yet when it comes to parker mayor and other male characters suddenly she feels she got so far and she remembers she has a bf then the scene cut with her running away.

this doesn't make sense at all ..you are doing it just bec the lesbian sex have no penetration in it and you know that's what most of us want.
I wouldn't mind if the slow pace was done well between all characters ..but seeing her having sex with heather then knowing in the next day jess will b the same with other male characters does not make any sense at all.

for me it makes sense. its much easier to "cheat" with a girl than a boy.
I believe Jessica is curious about other girls, while boys are a more "serious" thing. its hardcore cheating when she allows a dude to penetrate her, while a girl she can just rationalize, no matter how many lesbian encounters, theres only one man for her, and a girl can not replace him. but when she starts to have affairs with other dudes, it will be harder for her to rationalize. Are her escapades with other dudes because her boyfriend is not enough for her? will this change her relationship and eventually brake them apart? its serious shit and that takes effort to brake that barrier.

 

[maern]

the last version i have is 0.30. is it worth downloading this update or should i wait?

ps: loving the game very much and in my opinion not having sexscenes leaves something to the imagination.
better to have a great game with only innuendo/teasing than having a great game with bad sexscenes.

 

[FightmeLaiLai]

Well I know a few woman who left their family / man for another chick . So its not exactly dick proof that a girl can not replace a man.

No one is disputing the art quality , plot wise as a news journal is refreshing and makes sense. This whole non stop rotation of heather however plus his interest in developing other games plus the unfortunate infrequent delays just makes it very tiresome especially when we have this much anticipation.

Yes we all get the slow burn tease and how fruitful our hands will be when M/F sex outside of her partner finally happens one day. There is also quick sex porn anywhere indeed like Anna.

But must it be so extreme like black and white? Cant it be somewhere nearer towards the middle?
We probably have another JOHN update towards middle of Dec 2020. Which Stopper will then continue on with Paola 0.2 , promising it wont take too much of his time but releases it around March 2021 anyway and we go on a time loop till happyly ever after.

 

[pregspermtank69]

please add vaginal and/or humiliating sex with the mayor in an update, like the next one

most sincerely,
everyone

 

[stoper]

how come jess by now allowed other girls to touch kiss lick feel her in every day..yet when it comes to parker mayor and other male characters suddenly she feels she got so far and she remembers she has a bf then the scene cut with her running away.

this doesn't make sense at all ..you are doing it just bec the lesbian sex have no penetration in it and you know that's what most of us want.
I wouldn't mind if the slow pace was done well between all characters ..but seeing her having sex with heather then knowing in the next day jess will b the same with other male characters does not make any sense at all.

My idea is that the fact that she's cheating with Heather, doesn't mean that she would cheat with everyone else. Heather is very easy going, and takes all of it in a very playful manner so far. Which makes Jessica buy into that narrative as well. Depending on your choices they can do it right in front of Conner, without him complaining (or even involve him as well).

 

[Priappus]

I see Jessica having sex with her husband again I will do hara-kiri

 

[Higurashika]

again 5 minute play for the last update.

What are you talking about? It's pretty big piece of the story.

 

[AL.d]

for me it makes sense. its much easier to "cheat" with a girl than a boy.
I believe Jessica is curious about other girls, while boys are a more "serious" thing. its hardcore cheating when she allows a dude to penetrate her, while a girl she can just rationalize, no matter how many lesbian encounters, theres only one man for her, and a girl can not replace him. but when she starts to have affairs with other dudes, it will be harder for her to rationalize. Are her escapades with other dudes because her boyfriend is not enough for her? will this change her relationship and eventually brake them apart? its serious shit and that takes effort to brake that barrier.

That's not how it works I'm afraid. At least not irl.

A woman who has been in predominantly hetero relationships, will be inclined to seek the same in a relationship outside her current. Doing the opposite would have her internally struggling, not only with the ethics of cheating, but also with the unknowns of a homosexual fling.

To make it simpler, if a woman is used to having dick in her relationships, whenever she feels tempted to cheat she will unsurprisingly look for...dick.

 

[BellaSouth]

again 5 minute play for the last update. really boring

 

[baka]

well, my experience it the reverse, both a couple exes and a few girl friends did tell me they fantasies about it, and a few even tried it. most of the times they did say it was exciting but never as good to be with a dude.