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as for me i love the update, jess is getting more corrupted on each day, the principal and the bj scene with parker damn. the question is who will be the first man to lick her pussy? i'm getting excited. hahaha! kudos to you stoper, keep up the good work. till the next update. *salute*
The path to corruption is still slow and i'm always frustrated there isn't more, but i guess that's what makes a good story, and the graphics are always on point. Another few month to wait :x
you are so blind...but is not your guilty . I'm not against the game, i play it since the first release. You are free to think and express yourself so let me express my feeling, you know where is the truth as you know that there is not in your words.
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My english is very bad and poor to explain, but I'll try... Stoper is doing a great job. Like I said before - I love how the relationship between Jess and the Mayor evolve. In the fundraising event I was expecting something to happens, but the fingering scene surpassed my expectations. Probably I was thinking about some voyeur scene with Jess watching something between mayor, Senator, Shani or something else, but that development was beyond my imagination.
And new update, same feelings - I was convinced about some kinky stuff with the principal, but Stoper is suprise me again - he satisfied my hunger for dirty stuff, but stil leave the door open for many things to happen. Like dharween said - who will lick her pussy, who will fuck her, threesome with two guys...swing.
There are so many interesting characters - Mr. Birch (favorite one), Blake, Rosa... Next update (unfortunately) will be a great Christmass gift for everyone, who like stoper's work!
And new update, same feelings - I was convinced about some kinky stuff with the principal, but Stoper is suprise me again - he satisfied my hunger for dirty stuff, but stil leave the door open for many things to happen. Like dharween said - who will lick her pussy, who will fuck her, threesome with two guys...swing.
There are so many interesting characters - Mr. Birch (favorite one), Blake, Rosa... Next update (unfortunately) will be a great Christmass gift for everyone, who like stoper's work!
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I think it's a little disappointing how the branching we got for Heather early on doesn't matter anymore. Like, I expected a little more from the latest scene with her, if Jessica and Connor had a full on threesome with her before.
I actually struggled a bit to go all the way with Heather, when I went through the earlier scenes this time around and when I finally managed it, I was a little disappointed, when that didn't change anything for the latest scene with Heather and Connor.
I actually struggled a bit to go all the way with Heather, when I went through the earlier scenes this time around and when I finally managed it, I was a little disappointed, when that didn't change anything for the latest scene with Heather and Connor.
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Aight, so.. Solid update when it comes to the quality of renders, as always. Is it enough content for a 7 month wait? Barely.
Now, one thing I'm really struggling with is to understand how Amanda, the "writer", was able to screw up so badly. According to some of the posts and links in this thread, Amanda apparently is more or less professional with it, working on several projects with years of experience.
But why in the world would you hire a writer who's messing up so many lines of text? The amount of grammatical errors and misspellings is simply too much to call yourself a "writer", if you ask me. One quick example would be the principal's event. Him referring to Jessica as "Mr. O'neil' multiple times within a few lines of text is just dumb. Even a 4th grader would probably be able to catch those mistakes.
I wouldn't mind it at all if it wasn't for the fact that Amanda is from the US (or any other English speaking country, if that was the case). Also, the amount of times Stoper's told us that they are doing some "testing, editing" and whatnot makes this even worse. One would think that after going through the game a couple times, the developer and especially the writer would be able to see atleast some of these mistakes.
Anyway, I myself am from a European country and my spelling aint perfect either, so y'all can call me a "grammarnazi" if you want. I'd simply expect more from a professional writer coming from an English speaking country is all. Stoper could find someone better for his money (if he's paying for it that is).
Now, one thing I'm really struggling with is to understand how Amanda, the "writer", was able to screw up so badly. According to some of the posts and links in this thread, Amanda apparently is more or less professional with it, working on several projects with years of experience.
But why in the world would you hire a writer who's messing up so many lines of text? The amount of grammatical errors and misspellings is simply too much to call yourself a "writer", if you ask me. One quick example would be the principal's event. Him referring to Jessica as "Mr. O'neil' multiple times within a few lines of text is just dumb. Even a 4th grader would probably be able to catch those mistakes.
I wouldn't mind it at all if it wasn't for the fact that Amanda is from the US (or any other English speaking country, if that was the case). Also, the amount of times Stoper's told us that they are doing some "testing, editing" and whatnot makes this even worse. One would think that after going through the game a couple times, the developer and especially the writer would be able to see atleast some of these mistakes.
Anyway, I myself am from a European country and my spelling aint perfect either, so y'all can call me a "grammarnazi" if you want. I'd simply expect more from a professional writer coming from an English speaking country is all. Stoper could find someone better for his money (if he's paying for it that is).
damn this game is hot, everything is great about the game. The choices, the scenes. I need MOOOORE.
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Yes there is, and it was a very good game too. I don't remember the name but it was made by tlaero and mortze.