VN Ren'Py Abandoned Jezebels Curse [v0.25] [DVM]

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

First impressions my dude... Grammar is really, really bad!

Clothing is bad, the bodies are clipping through in a lot of cases.

No sound, no music at all, not sure since when this is even acceptable... Barebones ren'py with minimal work done to it.

This whole project feels like someone had fun in Daz and made a decent female model and decided to put a 'game' around it later on with zero -or at the most: minimal- knowledge about coding, project management.

The fact that your versioning doesn't follow any standards also says a lot.

Finally, and just to point out the problems with incorrect grammar... my favorite sentence from the demo:

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I honestly did a quick mirriam search to see if the Grape as the fruit could be used as an adjective/verb... and to my surprise it could, but probably not what you wanted to convey...

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ofc its a verb!

 

[M3lly]

Will comment to track this thread and play this few versions later.

 

[zeus04]

:Amore:

 

[Rauko001]

Thx for the upload .. and them are some huge mammas!

 

[hoborg]

JFC this is terrible.
Started to type out why but it looks like I was just echoing everything AntiVeraX said.
This VN is Graping the English language.

 

[loikl]

This is another one of those where the dev tries to please everyone. I'm not interested in half stories, because usually if NTR is optional, the non-NTR side is completely dull and I'm not even interested in exploring it. If the game wasn't NTR oriented, then that shit wouldn't be put in the game. So the non-NTR side rarely gets the same level of events as the NTR side. And I don't trust any of the devs who try to push it, when at some point it usually leaks and shit spills over to the non-NTR side too. Or the shit is just skippable.

Thanks, you saved me from wasting my time on this, apparently this is another cuckfest disguised as a "possible harem" and that being the case, the best thing the dev could do is focus his development on the ntr, not making "paths", if he does it well It will have a good niche audience, otherwise it will have a pointless war like everyone else who has tried this.

Good luck, the dev is going to need it.

 

[Ᏸ ᏞᎯ ᏨᏦ_ᎻᏫᏞᎬ]

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Overview:
[MCNAME] or John (default) is a young man living in japan/ studying abroad until one day his beautiful [lilytomc] named Lily comes to visit him. Little does he know is not just a random visit...

Lily's goal all along was to find and defeat an evil entity residing in the same area John stays; her powers? telekinesis from mana {sexual energy}.
Will Lily reach her goal? or will she fall?
NTR is avoidable.​

Thread Updated: 2024-03-13
Release Date: 2024-03-13
Developer: DVM

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I'll give it a try

 

[Pogo123]

so ntr but no sex with that old homeless?

 

[Doctor Doom]

Looking forward on this. btw any more ntr with the same proportion like lily?

 

[Chrathrard]

"NTR is avoidable."
Everyone sees her naked. Everyone else gets to grope her. Everyone's talking about her body. Only choices are to watch NTR or nothing.
NTR is not avoidable.

 

[OhGodNotAgain]

"NTR is avoidable."
Everyone sees her naked. Everyone else gets to grope her. Everyone's talking about her body. Only choices are to watch NTR or nothing.
NTR is not avoidable.

This seems like the kind of vn where the male mc will spend all his time babysitting the non playable fmc so she won't be constantly getting fucked because of how stupid and naive she is.

 

[th3n]

"NTR is avoidable."
Everyone sees her naked. Everyone else gets to grope her. Everyone's talking about her body. Only choices are to watch NTR or nothing.
NTR is not avoidable.

I dont understand why this type of dev try to lie to people. If you want to do a ntr game just do it and appeal to your audience, why try to appeal to an audience that is not going to like your game? Why make ntr avoidable if you just gonna go full ntr game with a bit of content with not? Like, just go full what you want and don't deceive people that doesn't like the content you are doing into trying it. You can save a lot of discussion.

 

[Firaxius]

Overall, the concept is nice love it, but the sentences are poorly written, especialy when you can choose what Lilly will be you, it still refers her as your sister in many sentences. I kinda wanted to make a more NTR feel and made her my girlfriend, but it was annoying to see her often referenced as your sister. So you all those sister sentences should be fixed to whatever people choose her to be to the mc as relationship. at this point I would say the VN is only a 2 star VN, but with some fixing and rewriting it could be a 4 star VN.

 

[Hfap5]

It looks interesting. But it didn't show any scenes, that gives me a bad feeling, maybe they are one of those games with little content and an update every 100 years. I'm only interested in the NTR content, the FMc has a good design

 

[DVM_]

"F95 NTR" will no longer be avoidable in coming updates... real NTR is avoidable.

 

[th3n]

NTR will no longer be avoidable in coming updates.

And that is why we wait. Thanks for clarify, and (if you want to avoid talk) put NTR is not avoidable. in the title. Bye for good.

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

Funny dev name, DVM = Doctor of Veterinary Medicine

 

[Antoon]

NTR will no longer be avoidable in coming updates.

'NTR' as in real NTR where the love interest is being fucked by other guys, while MC can't do nothing about it. Or the F95 'NTR' where a vanilla-only-guy goes like: "oh no! somebody other than the MC saw the love interest naked and now she's not pure anymore!"

 

[Overlord070]

NTR will no longer be avoidable in coming updates.

Not gonna lie, that is hilarious.
No shame and honestly this is why people give devs that try to do both the shifty eye look.

 

[dayumson922]

Dude has a 2cm dick, NTR being unavoidable is obvious...