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i hope there are going to be some non sex related (i know, blasphemy) conversations from the girls, so that we can see the mind control in effect when their out and about.
something that shows your in control of them without your dick in them, if you know what i mean?
something that shows your in control of them without your dick in them, if you know what i mean?
- Jun 6, 2017
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Checked the Patreon now as well, it really does look good. I am bad with words, but I have one suggestion:
The symbols for the stats, etc. in the top left might be a bit too small or at least the transition to the background isn't that good (e.g. the pink female symbol and the green forest don't match in my opinion (2D vs 3D, + colors), or the scroll has a small white part on the right which connects with the clouds), maybe they could be somehow adjusted or a background could be done for that area.
The symbols for the stats, etc. in the top left might be a bit too small or at least the transition to the background isn't that good (e.g. the pink female symbol and the green forest don't match in my opinion (2D vs 3D, + colors), or the scroll has a small white part on the right which connects with the clouds), maybe they could be somehow adjusted or a background could be done for that area.
- Jan 13, 2017
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Oh, yeah, it was mostly a joke tbh, I'm really not into traps or gender bending.
Glad you liked the map! I spent so much time and resources trying to get a decent one, it was almost frustrating. The update will be out in about two weeks for Patrons and in about 1 month for the public.
Dfinitely will do that and completely get what you mean. If you only want sex scenes might as well go watch porn amirite? Haha, I'll get working on it and if you have any specific situations you wanna see, do let me know or drop it in the suggestions folder!
I understand, I'll work on improving the design! Hopefully it looks better after I'm done!
As usual, let me know if you guys have anymore questions problems or suggestions yeah!
Its probably already been decided but im just wondering if xray scenes when cumming inside the characters will be ingame? Just curious ^_^
- Jan 13, 2017
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Hmm, don't know about that, I'll check out how much it cost to get that made.
On a side note, new UI for the girls menu is in the works.
Let me know what you all think.
And this could be used for something I think, but I dunno what that something is yet lol.
pretty sure this could be a quest marker... like not specific but lets you know which girls are "swayed" in favor to you? id say it either as conquests to do or yeah in love something like a "quest complete" tab lol
if i can suggest a scene then maybe something with hinata and her crush on naruto, i mean if there is one thing were would be influencing it would be that.
or maybe the rivalry between ino and sakura in regards to sasuke.
I think the mc should gain control of the Kyuubi. Imagine the possibilities of controlling Kurama or there being a female Kyuubi instead of a male one.
can't say I'm into it. I think not touching the tailed beasts would be for the best. I prefer a character who has to be careful the whole time and not attract too much attention to ourselves.
I have to agree on this one,perhaps in the long future, but atleast for Act 1, or maybe even Act 2 i dont think he should possess the Kyubi or anything related to Tailed Beast, at most be in control of Tsunade and hence controlling some of Naruto actions.
- Jan 13, 2017
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Yeap, I'm thinking I'll add in a quest log. Hopefully I finish it on time haha.
Oooh, yeah I have something that would work really well for Hinata regarding that.
Yeap, got something like that designed!
Like this would be for when you met the girl but haven't controlled them.
Level 1:
Level 2:
Level 3:
Level 4-5:
Might be a bit too unrealistic for the mc to be able to control something that a demi-god dude person was only able to control for a while. And it would also affect the timeline way too much I think.
Quick question:
Anything you all wanna see in the status page for the girls?
Like this part in particular? I'll try my best to fulfill whatever request I can!
- Jul 10, 2017
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As this is a very early build ...
there has to be something to show how much training there is to go to get some content - like "she will do X action or do Y action if she has 900 sub or 500 lust as a stat"
(those numbers are huge and judging by the ryo you need to start with just to play this early build - the grind progression looks monstrous ... Monstrous I tell you... )
Maybe some pointers like: You have 4000 ryo to go in order for MC to buy her clothes ... then MC will work like a maniac and get there...
You have 3000 sub to go for MC to make her enjoy our games ...
MC will train her like there was no tomorrow to get her stats up...
3 quests to go to level up! - this is very useful as 3 lines of texts could be helpful -
train sa up to 3000 sub level and get +1 control ... or something to resemble progression.
Some hints as to where the path goes with her : go see Hokage once she has 1900+ sub ... (again ... the grind progression looks monstrous ... Monstrous I tell you)
Happy gaming!
there has to be something to show how much training there is to go to get some content - like "she will do X action or do Y action if she has 900 sub or 500 lust as a stat"
(those numbers are huge and judging by the ryo you need to start with just to play this early build - the grind progression looks monstrous ... Monstrous I tell you... )
Maybe some pointers like: You have 4000 ryo to go in order for MC to buy her clothes ... then MC will work like a maniac and get there...
You have 3000 sub to go for MC to make her enjoy our games ...
MC will train her like there was no tomorrow to get her stats up...
3 quests to go to level up! - this is very useful as 3 lines of texts could be helpful -
train sa up to 3000 sub level and get +1 control ... or something to resemble progression.
Some hints as to where the path goes with her : go see Hokage once she has 1900+ sub ... (again ... the grind progression looks monstrous ... Monstrous I tell you)
Happy gaming!
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Ah I see, yeah, would be pretty useful info!
The amount of Ryo you get from basic missions would be more than enough to buy most things though... I actually got feedback that there was no use for Ryo:
As for the submission, you basically just need to do the actions 3-4 times to move on the the next upgrade event and considering that you get two actions to start with, it's pretty much doing each action twice, I really tried to make grind minimal in the game to be honest.
What are the parts that you found to be grindy btw? I'll try to improve on it!
- Jul 10, 2017
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Thank you for the kind response Mr. Speedy Apple - here is hope for the apple of my eye.
I do agree on the ryo front ... I used it to suggest that getting girls' sub in the hundreds just does not seem to do anything, therefore as ryo is 50000 - just imagine what humongous grind it must be for other stats.
Thank you for clearing that up - > ryo is easy to come by and thus MC has to chill.
I just cannot seem to progress any lust ... just seems there is no possibility in the game for it. I also cannot seem to be able to up the level of control.
I did train both ino and sa multiple times and lust is still 0 and control has no increase what so ever. Talking to girls during the day does not seem to go anywhere.
Following the hints in the Opening Post did get the girls over to MC house ... and there it all stagnates. Train girls over and over ... there seems to be no end to it.
On 1st play-through I genuinely did not even know there was any possibility to get sakura as the stat increase appears to be infinite and if one just goes to train and gets no damage he cannot even trigger sakura healing.
Then there is the order of things ... go fight the bears - which is the biggest and hardest mission available ... so that you either win or run away and then you have to talk to sakura on the same day.
I guess this is ok ... we get the girls following the walk through and just wait for the scenes to get rendered and put into the game.
Some last suggestions ... maybe state how many times MC trained / talked to each of the girls so as to suggest the player that doing those activities over and over is not a pointless endeavor.
I do agree on the ryo front ... I used it to suggest that getting girls' sub in the hundreds just does not seem to do anything, therefore as ryo is 50000 - just imagine what humongous grind it must be for other stats.
Thank you for clearing that up - > ryo is easy to come by and thus MC has to chill.
I just cannot seem to progress any lust ... just seems there is no possibility in the game for it. I also cannot seem to be able to up the level of control.
I did train both ino and sa multiple times and lust is still 0 and control has no increase what so ever. Talking to girls during the day does not seem to go anywhere.
Following the hints in the Opening Post did get the girls over to MC house ... and there it all stagnates. Train girls over and over ... there seems to be no end to it.
On 1st play-through I genuinely did not even know there was any possibility to get sakura as the stat increase appears to be infinite and if one just goes to train and gets no damage he cannot even trigger sakura healing.
Then there is the order of things ... go fight the bears - which is the biggest and hardest mission available ... so that you either win or run away and then you have to talk to sakura on the same day.
I guess this is ok ... we get the girls following the walk through and just wait for the scenes to get rendered and put into the game.
Some last suggestions ... maybe state how many times MC trained / talked to each of the girls so as to suggest the player that doing those activities over and over is not a pointless endeavor.
for a not to serious suggestion, maybe inner thoughts from the girls in regards to the mc.Quick question:
Anything you all wanna see in the status page for the girls?
Like this part in particular? I'll try my best to fulfill whatever request I can!
or maybe their current occupation if that is at all changeable.
and i also thought that the grind for ryo was a bit to easy, maybe you should include rent or something like that.
Something I would like to see on the status screen for the girls is whether or not they are pregnant, preferred fetishes and gifts, and possibly combat moves.
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