VN Ren'Py Jinxed Mark [v0.01.1] [ALEXIDUNCAN]

[CallMeHuff]

Sigh, of course there r background stories to b unfolded for the senior girls, eg natsuki's spouse issue, that i didnt plan to unveil on their 1st encounter
N wanted to make Alycia looks like a bxxch so tat mc can prank on her in near future

maybe my marketing strategy sux as i reserved the privilege of revealing some of the personalities of the girls in vip ver.

And plan to release the limit to all on 2nd playthrough

N as the title implies, some jinx is at work

It has nothing to do with the story. It has everything to do with all the women being fucked. These scenes are just fuel for people to hate Walter and all the girls involved immediately. My first reaction isn't, I need to steal them from him, it's wtf am I doing in this house, I need to leave and go form my own harem with me as the Alpha of the house. Walter has a Harem and he uses them all. The MC is a Beta cuck just trying to get scraps. I'm legit scared of what your "Backstories" will be, but I'm sure it's going to be a lot of scenes again without the MC. Delete the MC and make Walter the MC. He seems to be the head of the harem. Fing all the women, corrupting all the women, capturing all the women. OR add NTR tag and just go that route since your writing seems to cater to that crowd anyway.

 

[Adhdclassic]

WTF did I play. Mint though is now in the category of Kim(Yesterdays Crossroads)

 

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks for the share

 

[Sterkh90]

OR add NTR tag and just go that route since your writing seems to cater to that crowd anyway.

Judging by the five-star review, you're right.

 

[Mrsexoo3]

It has nothing to do with the story. It has everything to do with all the women being fucked. These scenes are just fuel for people to hate Walter and all the girls involved immediately. My first reaction isn't, I need to steal them from him, it's wtf am I doing in this house, I need to leave and go form my own harem with me as the Alpha of the house. Walter has a Harem and he uses them all. The MC is a Beta cuck just trying to get scraps. I'm legit scared of what your "Backstories" will be, but I'm sure it's going to be a lot of scenes again without the MC. Delete the MC and make Walter the MC. He seems to be the head of the harem. Fing all the women, corrupting all the women, capturing all the women. OR add NTR tag and just go that route since your writing seems to cater to that crowd anyway.

Fr, just make Walter the MC and be fone with it, who would want to get his leftovers . I can never understand these devs, maybe they trolling just for fun? Like dude goes around screaming NO NTR then has his game full of "technically not ntr" stuff that people who don't like ntr would not like either, like, bro, just make a cuck game, why be disingenuous like that.

 

[ThatGregGuy]

I stopped during the flashback sequence where the teacher stands up for MC because why would you have a CHILD whip out their genitals in front of a grown adult, or in general?

 

[Onimori]

->20% upscale for daz3d dicktator model
I found that not all ppl likes it, so just give a warning. There are some side/partial views on the spa/basketball/bed groping pic
Try preventing too explicit pics to prevent patreon lockdown

I highly recommend you open a subscibestar account, patreon is on the path of self destruction blocking various content creators...

Also looking forward to trying out your game~

 

[Raziel_8]

hehehe, same old same old, its like the mc sharing his magic book ability to his friend in "Dreams of Desire" (not that this is a bad game, its just one of the few games i didnt skip nowadays )

A fan of lucky mark, bab bobby saga, amnesia, bad bro , snd more ;D

I would ask if the game will have choices, like which LI's you want. Personally i already have no interest in the maid, Walters gf, nor Mint.

But seeing the list of games you mentioned, i really don't think that's the game for me, i dislike every one of those, including the MC and LI's. As for Dreams of Desire, i played it long ago, but also not a really good game imo, dumb creep MC, forced girls, forced lesbian, almost kinetic from what i remember.

 

[alexiddd]

Bruh the first picture the girl face is gone!

wow! thanks for the notice! didnt notice tat

 

[alexiddd]

I highly recommend you open a subscibestar account, patreon is on the path of self destruction blocking various content creators...

Also looking forward to trying out your game~

thanks for the advice, will see to tat
i m excluding many lewd scenes bcoz patreon wont let me publish my page

 

[alexiddd]

I would ask if the game will have choices, like which LI's you want. Personally i already have no interest in the maid, Walters gf, nor Mint.

But seeing the list of games you mentioned, i really don't think that's the game for me, i dislike every one of those, including the MC and LI's. As for Dreams of Desire, i played it long ago, but also not a really good game imo, dumb creep MC, forced girls, forced lesbian, almost kinetic from what i remember.

i do wish to do a multiple choice game, but its like out of my reach,
atm i am a 1 man army. n got this decision-making phobia issue
picking up the girls' model already took me months of decision making (rendering, hair fitting, etc
then the revenues, then the guys model etc
n i began with just a 8gb gpu n 32gb ram, tatz a pain in the asre to do the rendering and model previews
a linear game is wat i can do at the moment
maybe will see to other options when i got some teammates later

 

[alexiddd]

WTF did I play. Mint though is now in the category of Kim(Yesterdays Crossroads)

didnt play the game b4, so dunno if she is the type u r referring,
but fyi, i set mint as the so called "pure love" path
her introvert trait is a defensive shield to prevent others from touching her

 

[Raziel_8]

didnt play the game b4, so dunno if she is the type u r referring,

The most disliked character there, which most would like to tell to 'fuck off'
She left the MC without any notice after years of relationship and came back with a dumb excuse.

 

[Onimori]

thanks for the advice, will see to tat
i m excluding many lewd scenes bcoz patreon wont let me publish my page

Bro what do you mean you're "excluding many lewd scenes because patreon won't let me publish my page"??
Did you cut out actual finished scenes from the game?!

 

[alexiddd]

Bro what do you mean you're "excluding many lewd scenes because patreon won't let me publish my page"??
Did you cut out actual finished scenes from the game?!

no, i tried some lewd scenes/screenshots to post on patreon, but failed to get pass the TnC check to get published, event if i was putting it on paid posts

e.g. something like this

 

[alexiddd]

sigh, i think the biggest issue i m facing now is the lack of knowledge of how this thread shld be functioning
as a beneficiary of the forum itself, i played games shared by heroes uploaded to the forum.
therefore, i was expecting some hereos to share the vip version of the game here as well (i dont mind that, yet i cant share it myself to reserve the vip privilege), which will reveal some hidden message of the story

but seeing so much of misunderstanding here and there clogs my mind with lotsa negative energy that i cant focus on the game development atm
so, to clarify why i use the tags, here are some FAQs that will spoil the plots fyi, (will compensate the vip tiers with other spoilers soon)

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well, thats all i had to say

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i hope i did made it clear atm

 

[CallMeHuff]

sigh, i think the biggest issue i m facing now is the lack of knowledge of how this thread shld be functioning
as a beneficiary of the forum itself, i played games shared by heroes uploaded to the forum.
therefore, i was expecting some hereos to share the vip version of the game here as well (i dont mind that, yet i cant share it myself to reserve the vip privilege), which will reveal some hidden message of the story

but seeing so much of misunderstanding here and there clogs my mind with lotsa negative energy that i cant focus on the game development atm
so, to clarify why i use the tags, here are some FAQs that will spoil the plots fyi, (will compensate the vip tiers with other spoilers soon)

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well, thats all i had to say

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i hope i did made it clear atm

I've read all of this. It's obvious that you're unfamiliar with what harem enjoyers are after and even what NTR enjoyers are after. The 5-star review you received is obviously from an NTR enjoyer, and from your entire explanation here, you mention that you don't intend for any of the content to be NTR; it's obvious you don't understand what people are looking for.
Since I think you are truly trying to understand where the outrage is coming from, I will try to explain.

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Now that we went through that, the reason why people say Walter is the MC or he should be the MC is because he's capable of getting the women and corrupting them and banging them, regardless of "how" he got them. He's a dominator and not a simp like the MC. It's really just a way to get the point across that the MC is a pathetic loser undeserving of a harem. Also, the beginning scene of the "trainer" getting some is also unenjoyable. This isn't fan service as you think. Maybe to NTR enjoyers it is. Anyway, you have a decision to make because, as you can see in the responses I made, you are very much catering to a completely different audience than you want to be, and that's okay if you mean it that way, but you don't. Good luck, bud.

 

[Onimori]

no, i tried some lewd scenes/screenshots to post on patreon, but failed to get pass the TnC check to get published, event if i was putting it on paid posts

e.g. something like this
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Haha, got me worried for a second~ xD
Have a nice day mate~

Edit:
Ah, btw read some parts of the reviews and make 2 recommendations
1. Whatever you do, do not shrink the mc's dong it's the selling point! (Saw many games die because of those shrimp pp lovers spamming creators with "make it smaller, make it smaller" till the creators listen and the game gets ruined... and abandoned... better just ignore those people.)
2. It's your game, honestly I never played lucky mark and will probably never, but yours I will try out, so just have fun creating "your" game~ (But you should really add a naming function for the mc~ )

 

[odbpm]

not knowing forced mc name is an annoying choice as i had the bad habit of skipping the game dialogues and hate naming them (names n relationship etc)
will see to this on the next update
thanks for the comment

does not matter anymore, gl with your cuckold game. even just a text shoving that walter fucks mc Future Li's = im gonna ignore...

 

[soemantri9]

Damn every room is Walter sex scene, even as the MC why would i need to steal girl? I better overthrown him and throw the girls to garbage and find a new girls myself lmao or maybe make a new Corp urserlf and we don't touch Walter harem at all