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. Downloading issues? Look here.I managed to permanently delete my old save. Has anyone got one with high stats from 0.50 or higher?
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Updated my compressed Android port of Just One More Chance to v0.57.
Please let me know if you encounter any issues with the port and I'll see what I can do to get them sorted.
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It could be because the commands are wrong. Try again without 'active' in the lines.
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A minor QoL suggestion: A third filter for achievements, only showing newly gain achievements
as in those with the yellow !
as in those with the yellow !
Suggestion: the new "Code" button is a nice QoL improvement, but I think that the screen that is displayed when you finish coding should either default to returning you to your room, or at least have an option to turn off the laptop and return to your room instead of returning you to the laptop navigation screen. That way I can go Room -> Code -> Room instead of Room -> Code -> Laptop -> Room.
I have noticed a general improvement to new dialogue. I particularly like the "Girl Stats" page for some of the newer characters:
I also took note of the interactions with Francine. Whatever your process is, it's producing better writing. I've been impressed with the speed of development (this game frequently shows up whenever I filter for "Top rated games updated in the last week") and I think that focusing on new content is definitely the right call.
At some point though, I think another pass updating old scenes and content to the new standard of quality and grammar would greatly benefit the game. My attraction to older characters like Rose/Susan is limited by the simple writing despite them having a lot going for them on paper. Rose is the sex-starved cougar on campus with confusing feelings of maternal concern and sexual desire for a young man. Susan is the nerdy girl with little to no experience who gives herself an entire makeover just to please her (first?) partner. Both archetypes are characterized by desperation and have strong emotional tropes; Susan is a vehicle for "first love" stories and Rose is a similar diving board into "forbidden love" and pseudo-incestuous fantasies. I should be all over these two... but at the end of the day, their actual characters don't quite shine through yet. I tend to think of Rose not as a character but as a stepping board to grind Sex Control. Susan is a landmine that will claim your virginity too early if you're careless. Carol is like Rose, but worse; I can't remember anything about her character and just think of her as a reliable stat-grinder. This is really unfortunate! I think that Just One More Chance is uniquely gameplay focused compared to other Twine harem games and so there is probably less community focus on the girls themselves, but at the end of the day the primary products that will reel people in is memorable women and sexual situations.
Some more character-specific dialogue across the board would help in this regard. I'll point out two characters in particular that I think have obvious places they could be improved: Francine and Carol. Francine is new and I don't think I've exhausted her content yet, and as I mentioned I think that her dialogue is a step up in quality already. However, when you choose the generic "Talk" option, you get this blurb:
Of course, these additions don't need to be complicated. There could be a single dialogue with Ms. Bloom that is displayed everytime the player discusses the last lecture with her where her love for her profession shines through, capped off with her glancing at the player character with less-than-academic interest if her attraction is high enough. Anything that can reinforce their personality with a variety of traits to appeal to players will be an upgrade.
Edit: I remembered that I wrote similar critique in this post back in October.
carsexstart1.mp4 has a cursor in it lol
I have noticed a general improvement to new dialogue. I particularly like the "Girl Stats" page for some of the newer characters:
This is great! It makes sense, it's cleverly written, and it informs her character.Danielle's Stat Page said:
I also took note of the interactions with Francine. Whatever your process is, it's producing better writing. I've been impressed with the speed of development (this game frequently shows up whenever I filter for "Top rated games updated in the last week") and I think that focusing on new content is definitely the right call.
At some point though, I think another pass updating old scenes and content to the new standard of quality and grammar would greatly benefit the game. My attraction to older characters like Rose/Susan is limited by the simple writing despite them having a lot going for them on paper. Rose is the sex-starved cougar on campus with confusing feelings of maternal concern and sexual desire for a young man. Susan is the nerdy girl with little to no experience who gives herself an entire makeover just to please her (first?) partner. Both archetypes are characterized by desperation and have strong emotional tropes; Susan is a vehicle for "first love" stories and Rose is a similar diving board into "forbidden love" and pseudo-incestuous fantasies. I should be all over these two... but at the end of the day, their actual characters don't quite shine through yet. I tend to think of Rose not as a character but as a stepping board to grind Sex Control. Susan is a landmine that will claim your virginity too early if you're careless. Carol is like Rose, but worse; I can't remember anything about her character and just think of her as a reliable stat-grinder. This is really unfortunate! I think that Just One More Chance is uniquely gameplay focused compared to other Twine harem games and so there is probably less community focus on the girls themselves, but at the end of the day the primary products that will reel people in is memorable women and sexual situations.
Some more character-specific dialogue across the board would help in this regard. I'll point out two characters in particular that I think have obvious places they could be improved: Francine and Carol. Francine is new and I don't think I've exhausted her content yet, and as I mentioned I think that her dialogue is a step up in quality already. However, when you choose the generic "Talk" option, you get this blurb:
A collection of cyclical or random dialogues should replace that last line. Francine's archetype is supposed to be "fun," sure, but I only see glimpses of that in her "Flirt" dialogue chain. Replace that last line with even a brief back-and-forth conversation about the university, about pop culture, about the library, or most importantly, about Francine herself.Talk to Francine said:
Player said:
Francine (mocking offense) said:
Player said:
Short, but it implies backstory to the character that the player can fill in for themselves. Carol also has an obvious place to add such a rotational dialogue system, which is immediately after tutoring her but before picking your compensation.Francine (scowling) said:
Of course, these additions don't need to be complicated. There could be a single dialogue with Ms. Bloom that is displayed everytime the player discusses the last lecture with her where her love for her profession shines through, capped off with her glancing at the player character with less-than-academic interest if her attraction is high enough. Anything that can reinforce their personality with a variety of traits to appeal to players will be an upgrade.
Edit: I remembered that I wrote similar critique in this post back in October.
carsexstart1.mp4 has a cursor in it lol
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Should be "didn't"Zoe said:
Should be "She seems to become horny pretty fast"Zoe said:
Should be "your jizz over her face"Scene with Olivia said:
Not a typo, but there needs to be a line break after this. It flows right into the "Danielle's love for you increased by X" text.Scene with Danielle said:
Should be "reward your endurance"Scene with Jane said:
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