Couple of things to say, for starters I love the quality of your renders and the amount of work that went into like, actually posing the heroines and setting scenes, all too many people just waggle their static renders like sock puppets and then use stock animations. All in all, solid.
The actual gameplay suffers from a nasty case of like...stagnation. At the start of the game, there were several days where literally no progress could be made, no events could be done, etc. I think part of the issue is that the Sunday news thing does slow down running into other people. I would suggest tying unlocking certain things through events with the girls. The office only unlocks when you're taken there, but perhaps the beach can be unlocked through the "fake date" and the bar can be unlocked through running into the barmaid on the beach. Whatever checks run between events could probably be fine tuned to prevent what feels like errant faffing about. I've spent a lot of time looking at the hint and doing two or three days to try and trigger progress. This might work better when there are more women, but at the moment it just feels...janky.
Also, I've consistently managed to crash the game going from the Changing room at the beach, back to the beach, no clue why that's doing that lmao, but it's got a 100% crash rate that has bricked a lot of time off me lmao.