- Mar 16, 2021
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Hello Tess, your game is a unique masterpiece.
I'm only criticizing her because you asked for it.
I haven't played to the end of the episode yet, so far I've only found a couple of things at the beginning of the game that I would change.
1. I didn’t attach a screenshot, but you will understand what I mean, at the beginning of the game there is a menu of 5 choices, Kane answers Olivia’s question ( location - abandoned ruins ) who would he save, this menu is too pulled up to the top, I would center his.
2. I will attach screenshots, I think they have a problem with rendering, very strong overexposure, because of this Kiyomi looks like a cut and pasted 2D drawing in a 3D render. And Olivia seemed to be photographed unsuccessfully, forgetting to turn off the flash (only her red eyes are enough).
And yes, I'm sure that you know this without me, just a reminder - bright and harsh light is sometimes very good, for example, if you make "perfect" shots like on fashion shoots, for example,
But in 90% of cases, diffused light will look better. Thank you. And good luck!
I'm only criticizing her because you asked for it.
I haven't played to the end of the episode yet, so far I've only found a couple of things at the beginning of the game that I would change.
1. I didn’t attach a screenshot, but you will understand what I mean, at the beginning of the game there is a menu of 5 choices, Kane answers Olivia’s question ( location - abandoned ruins ) who would he save, this menu is too pulled up to the top, I would center his.
2. I will attach screenshots, I think they have a problem with rendering, very strong overexposure, because of this Kiyomi looks like a cut and pasted 2D drawing in a 3D render. And Olivia seemed to be photographed unsuccessfully, forgetting to turn off the flash (only her red eyes are enough).
And yes, I'm sure that you know this without me, just a reminder - bright and harsh light is sometimes very good, for example, if you make "perfect" shots like on fashion shoots, for example,
But in 90% of cases, diffused light will look better. Thank you. And good luck!