Well, what can I say: for version 0.4 it’s already much better with content and transitions, it remains to add the same menu as in glamor or similar, fill the game with locations and events in them, otherwise now all events are only a house, college, park, whose neighbor there are not even animations, and even little things. it's time to add locations such as: a beach, a cosmetics store, clothes, equipment, a sex shop and others. the character also grows hair and not only on the head, so you probably need to add the ability to shave or depelite them. also go for a massage, visit a beautician and other salons and procedures, as well as invite to the house. and if you get training, then work in this area as a part-time job
This game is a hot mess. In many instances the words have nothing to do with the images, and are pure gibberish. Yes, the girls are hot, but this is almost unplayable. And then, you get stuck in an endless loop in the principal's office which does make this unplayable:
1 Kate "Called?"
2 Karen - "What are we waiting for?"
3 Kate-"???"
4 Karen "Undress completely!"
5 Karen "Now to the table!"
6 Kate's thoughts "Why does it hurt and feel good at the same time?"
7 Karen "Free!"
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1 Kate "Called?"
2 Karen - "What are we waiting for?"
3 Kate-"???"
4 Karen "Undress completely!"
5 Karen "Now to the table!"
6 Kate's thoughts "Why does it hurt and feel good at the same time?"
7 Karen "Free!"
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A proofreader is needed. That starts with the names - Some time the MC is Kate, another time Katya. Same with her friend Julia who is often named Yulka and other chars That sometime text and image does not fit is another thing and the story is not always logical.
Then why change the menu - 'to return' 'A pass' 'B.save' 'B.Uploaded' 'Download' .... ? Why not leave the standard names as they are. The girls standard pose looks like they have back pain and a lordosis and they are trying to distance themselves from something.
What the hell does some of the sentences mean? - Is it to weak to bare your chest <- what does that mean????? Use deepl.com to get a translation for that what you want to say in your native language and translate it there to English or ask someone who has a good knowledge of our language and English
Then why change the menu - 'to return' 'A pass' 'B.save' 'B.Uploaded' 'Download' .... ? Why not leave the standard names as they are. The girls standard pose looks like they have back pain and a lordosis and they are trying to distance themselves from something.
What the hell does some of the sentences mean? - Is it to weak to bare your chest <- what does that mean????? Use deepl.com to get a translation for that what you want to say in your native language and translate it there to English or ask someone who has a good knowledge of our language and English
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version 0.41
Fixed some bugs, in particular a loop with a call to Nicholas' office
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You seriously need a proofreader for the English version. The Russian version may be much better, for those who speak/read it but the English version is pretty bad. Also, on her second day, she went from stressing out about getting undressed to change into a swimsuit, the female teacher shows up, tells her to go for a "physical". I guess she is in the nurses or doctor's office. Suddenly the resevered girl starts masturbating to porn and begging a stranger to fuck her and he instead jerks off on her face. This game is a mess. There is the framework for what could be a good corruption game but it is far too broken, as it currently stands.
Need. I'm not arguing. I just can't find someone who would do it for free yet. And English is not my native language. And I understand only technical texts satisfactorily
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I would have helped, if I were not already proofreading a couple of other games plus writing my own. If you have not already, put a request thread in the recruiting section of the forums here with the tags of proofreader and unpaid. I found someone to do the daz3d and Ren'py coding for me that way. Some will do it for just recognition or promotion of their own game(s).
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Yeah, writing the script is far more work than proofreading. Proofreading can make it a little better but if the story is bad, it won't fix that. It will make it better but won't fix it if you make too many mistakes in story.
And I think you should look for someone that speaks your native language and english.. because maybe your storyline is okay in the original.. but the english version is pure trash ^^ sorry.. but I can't enjoy the game.. too weird english
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i love Kate! 
too much lesbian scene but luckily the girls who fuck Kate are often equipped with strapons.
I suggest the dev to use a double strap-on
like this
is better for the mutual pleasure
Thanks to the dev Konstantin
this game is unplayable in the original version
Great Job
(and please forget smooth corruption.. fast corruption is better)
too much lesbian scene but luckily the girls who fuck Kate are often equipped with strapons.
I suggest the dev to use a double strap-on
like this
is better for the mutual pleasure
Thanks to the dev Konstantin
this game is unplayable in the original version
Great Job
(and please forget smooth corruption.. fast corruption is better
)You are the first and only one who said such a thing.
I can try, but I need a link to download a free Daz model
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Thanks for your work in Kate story I have try a lot of time to play Glamour just for Kate model and story
your work is a dream that comes true for me.
Are you sure that I'm the only one?
I have version 0.3 and i will try to compare to understand better the peoplethat was complain for this "too fast" corruption
I think you are remake the Kate story so I do not see how you can go slower than the Glamour Kate story
that is just an idea but if this makes delay in the story progression... forget it!
The game is really nice as is.
Thanks
Good luck with your project!
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You deserve supporters and I will try to support you.. for now I'm short in money but in the next 1 or 2 months i will!
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Dialogues are not written by me, but by my companion and assistant. I make graphics and write code. And I'm a pure tech guy, I don't even have enough imagination for such dialogues. Like all engineers, I'm used to writing briefly and to the point, but as for literary Russian in a porn game, it's just ridiculous
Диалоги пишу не я, а мой компаньон и помощник. Я делаю графику и пишу код. И я чистый технарь, у меня даже на такие диалоги не хватает фантазии. Как все инженеры я привык писать кратко и по делу Ну а насчет литературного русского в порно-игре это просто смешно
Dialogues are not written by me, but by my companion and assistant. I make graphics and write code. And I'm a pure tech guy, I don't even have enough imagination for such dialogues. Like all engineers, I'm used to writing briefly and to the point, but as for literary Russian in a porn game, it's just ridiculous
Диалоги пишу не я, а мой компаньон и помощник. Я делаю графику и пишу код. И я чистый технарь, у меня даже на такие диалоги не хватает фантазии. Как все инженеры я привык писать кратко и по делу Ну а насчет литературного русского в порно-игре это просто смешно
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Stan5851
Dialogues are not written by me, but by my companion and assistant. I make graphics and write code. And I'm a pure tech guy, I don't even have enough imagination for such dialogues. Like all engineers, I'm used to writing briefly and to the point, but as for literary Russian in a porn game, it's just ridiculous
Диалоги пишу не я, а мой компаньон и помощник. Я делаю графику и пишу код. И я чистый технарь, у меня даже на такие диалоги не хватает фантазии. Как все инженеры я привык писать кратко и по делу Ну а насчет литературного русского в порно-игре это просто смешно
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The fact that the author of the dialogues is most likely a semi-literate teenager, I myself assume. I found it on the Internet, but there is simply no other one. None of the normal dialogue writers agree to work for free. And the project is still non-commercial, it is designed only for voluntary donations
То, что автор диалогов, скорее всего, полуграмотный подросток, я сам предполагаю. Я нашел его в Интернете, но другого просто нет. Ни один из нормальных авторов диалогов не соглашается работать бесплатно. И проект пока некоммерческий, он рассчитан только на добровольное пожертвования
The fact that the author of the dialogues is most likely a semi-literate teenager, I myself assume. I found it on the Internet, but there is simply no other one. None of the normal dialogue writers agree to work for free. And the project is still non-commercial, it is designed only for voluntary donations
То, что автор диалогов, скорее всего, полуграмотный подросток, я сам предполагаю. Я нашел его в Интернете, но другого просто нет. Ни один из нормальных авторов диалогов не соглашается работать бесплатно. И проект пока некоммерческий, он рассчитан только на добровольное пожертвования