Wow, i was on holiday when that came out therefore i totally missed this. I really liked it, the renders were great, the story was fun to read and it had interracial lesbian sex :winkytongue: Great job. Thank you to
@othello for helping.
I have a question though; in some scenes, (for example at the bathroom) Katie's model looks different. Am i correct or blind?
Oh, one more thing, Brian's change of character seems to be so sudden, in the game, he was more supportive and in your story he becomes a stupid boyfriend. Maybe, wouldn't it be more sense to turn the story to an open relationship?
Glad you enjoyed it, Amanda & thanks for the comments.
Regarding the Katie model, it's the same one in every render. I'm not entirely sure why she might look different. Maybe it's the different hair or the lighting, maybe.
As for Brian. In 3D's game, he just seemed to me to be a passive lump of flesh who didn't really do anything or just seemed to accept whatever Katie did.
Like when Katie goes out, dressed like a hooker, doesn't come home & ignores his messages & calls, & he barely even questions that when he sees her again?
For me, I don't think any guy would react in that way IRL. Surely there's only so much support one can give when faced with such behaviour?
So I wanted him to at least have some sort of reaction to Katie's infidelity & maybe start doing something similar himself.
Obviously, this is just my personal take on it & I appreciate that no matter what one does, some people on here will say that's it's out of character or doesn't fit in with the story & I totally get that.
All I can say in reply is that I'm not 3Diddly & this is most definitely not '3Diddly's World'.
I can only relate the story from the thoughts & ideas in my head & the ideas & inspirations I have gotten from my F95 buddies
@othello &
@Ignatz .
I really have no clue what's in 3Diddly's mind, or how he would have move the storyline on(other than the pregnancy scenario).
Anyway, I'm probably rambling aimlessly, so I'll end here.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me.