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@Mimz just tried the game and really liked it. The girls are hot and so is the story, and I loved the sense of humor. As someone who's also raided my parent's liquor cabinet back in the day, that brought out a chuckle. The game started a bit slow, but picked up its pace with version 0.2 and I love that each update was bigger and better than the last. I was genuinely sad as it ended as I really wanted to see more and see what's gonna happen, so that's a good thing. Will definitely consider supporting this once I'm not broke as fuck.
My one note is that the game doesn't seem to be proof-read very well and has a few spelling and grammar errors. If you need any proof-reading help, I'd be happy to help out (for free, obviously). So shoot me a PM if you need any help with that. Anyway, bra jobbet!
My one note is that the game doesn't seem to be proof-read very well and has a few spelling and grammar errors. If you need any proof-reading help, I'd be happy to help out (for free, obviously). So shoot me a PM if you need any help with that. Anyway, bra jobbet!
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Tusen takk 
I'm gonna let you know about the proof reading later.. atm I have never had time for it.. had an offer earlier aswell for that... it's like I'm wondering on the voice part of the game.. if it's something I should add more in later because of the time it takes to do it.. not sure yet tho.. (or maybe my confidence in myself trying to sound sexy that got a dent when one complained about the accent of my voice x'D hahah) proof Reader? og du er norsk? første gang for meg med det da ahhh du tok jomfru hinna mi på den delen!
I'm gonna let you know about the proof reading later.. atm I have never had time for it.. had an offer earlier aswell for that... it's like I'm wondering on the voice part of the game.. if it's something I should add more in later because of the time it takes to do it.. not sure yet tho.. (or maybe my confidence in myself trying to sound sexy that got a dent when one complained about the accent of my voice x'D hahah) proof Reader? og du er norsk? første gang for meg med det da ahhh du tok jomfru hinna mi på den delen!
- Jun 7, 2017
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Haha ja, er norsk, men studerer for å bli engelsklærer så jeg bør være brukbar i engelsk. And I'm not the right person to speak about the voice acting. I listened to it a little bit and it sounded fine to me, but I generally play these games with the sound down and avoid the voice acting, so I'm not the right person to give advice about that. But in my experience in general, many Americans seem to love a good accent, but a few absolutely hate it. At least American girls seem to love a good Norwegian accent haha
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uhm.. hi.. not sure what to do atm...
I've been making this game since the summer.. around juni the first release came... my concern now when I lost a big contributer is that I only earn 13 dollars more then I did the month after the first release.. so now I'm abit unsure about the whole game... in around 4 months... the game will be a year old.. and I know not to compare to much to other games.. but I can easily see that the income for Kendra's world is really low... so abit unsure on the interest in my game at all right now... because it takes alot of time to make it.. (my time where I could do other things if not since this is my main income) so I'm abit unsure what ppl want... those Things I heard that ppl wanted changed so far is...
dont use voice I've gotten.. (some wanted more) and that my English are not good enough.. (but I've seen games with worse English suriving better) so I could need some better pointers now.. so far each update I've made have been bigger then the previous.. and I'm kinda loosing abit moral right now since I'm doing alot of work for little Income..
I know that not everyone cant help financialy.. but there is other way to support if you really like a game.. like advertising it.. helping to get it out.. because right now.. I got almost the same Income I had the month after first release... (sorry for beeing abit down when posting this)
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Deamoness
I've been making this game since the summer.. around juni the first release came... my concern now when I lost a big contributer is that I only earn 13 dollars more then I did the month after the first release.. so now I'm abit unsure about the whole game... in around 4 months... the game will be a year old.. and I know not to compare to much to other games.. but I can easily see that the income for Kendra's world is really low... so abit unsure on the interest in my game at all right now... because it takes alot of time to make it.. (my time where I could do other things if not since this is my main income) so I'm abit unsure what ppl want... those Things I heard that ppl wanted changed so far is...
dont use voice I've gotten.. (some wanted more) and that my English are not good enough.. (but I've seen games with worse English suriving better) so I could need some better pointers now.. so far each update I've made have been bigger then the previous.. and I'm kinda loosing abit moral right now since I'm doing alot of work for little Income..
I know that not everyone cant help financialy.. but there is other way to support if you really like a game.. like advertising it.. helping to get it out.. because right now.. I got almost the same Income I had the month after first release... (sorry for beeing abit down when posting this)
xoxoxo
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As the prototype of poor student I'm not able to support you financially until my side job decides to give me more shifts. However as said before I'd be happy to help with the spelling and grammar of the script and if there is something I can do to help spread the word or advertise the game, I'd be happy to do that.
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Some new locations will be seen in v0.4.
but most important is.. that tomorrow the game will be released for my game tester.. I guess that will happend around night time that the tester will get the game...
after that.. it will be out soon enough for the others aswell
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Kendra's World v0.4
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Can she become a 100% lesbian? I know the game has some lesbian scenes but I don't want to click through 358 scenes where the protagonist sucks some guy's cock to reach one or two lesbian scenes, so I'd be glad to know if this game really deserves the lesbian tag before downloading.
- Sep 11, 2017
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No need to apologize. The lesbian tag is used quite lenient on this forum. Way too lenient for my taste, so basically all games that feature one or the other lesbian scenes get the tag.I never gave it the lesbian tab sorry... so it's not a lesbian game... the tags are updated at my patreon site
the game also misses few EXTREMLY IMPORTANT stuff, such as hints for walkthought.
for instance - i missed a text - how would i know where to go ?
another thing that i suggest is to add saves for releases, for isntance - save 1 - release 1, save 5 - release 5 etc, so people dont have to keep looking for the rest of the stuff.
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about the text - reading - its called text to speech. there are site and programs like
feel free to check it out etc
for instance - i missed a text - how would i know where to go ?
another thing that i suggest is to add saves for releases, for isntance - save 1 - release 1, save 5 - release 5 etc, so people dont have to keep looking for the rest of the stuff.
looking better
about the text - reading - its called text to speech. there are site and programs like
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feel free to check it out etc
I've seen this happen to many devs who use rpgm, personally I hate it since it's so slow and it forces the player to replay from the start way too often, it's hard to skip text you have already read, games tend to be confusing and if you miss something you can fuck your entire save if the dev likes bad game design like that.(Makes the game need a walkthrough to actually be played, which is very bad game design. You should be able to figure out what to do by playing the game not guessing what hidden triggers might exist to do stuff.)
Many stay away from rpgm altogether even if the game is good or have potential. I play anything that seems good, but I can say that rpgm drags down any game coded on it's platform. Can't say I've seen any other gamemaking platforms share most of these issues.
Many stay away from rpgm altogether even if the game is good or have potential. I play anything that seems good, but I can say that rpgm drags down any game coded on it's platform. Can't say I've seen any other gamemaking platforms share most of these issues.
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here's Your walkthru... me.. almost 24/7
there you can ask as much as you want.. but I might put in something that might explain where to go for those
that managed to skip a text to much (shouldent skip text.. the Clue is in there... haha)
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(discord)there you can ask as much as you want.. but I might put in something that might explain where to go for those
that managed to skip a text to much (shouldent skip text.. the Clue is in there... haha)
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Are you in fear about it's future just because it's not making you any money? Or because you think money = interest? Or because you are not getting enough interest in general, regardless if makes money or not?
Is your goal to just make money off it? Or is it a passion that isn't effected by money?
I can recommend a couple things to increase interest... First, get a properly translated/interpreted manuscript... 9 times out of 10, for any English speaking consumer, they are going to see the broken English and run for the hills... If you want to cater to the English speaking market, that has to be a high priority... Secondly, if this is supposed to be a Visual Novel, then people expect to have some decent story telling on some level... Visual Novels are text based stories where the Visuals are there to support the narrative, not the other way around... If this game is standing only on it's visuals, and not the story, then you might as well remove the Visual Novel part from it's description and just make it a game with some story elements... I know when I see VN/Visual Novel, I expect at a minimum that half the experience is the story text, otherwise it's not really a Visual Novel...
Some other folks mention earlier in the thread some other things, that since this is an RPGM game, and uses it's sprite and map functions, the character sprites need to somewhat match up with the character 3D visuals... Things like that add polish to the game, knowing the developer took the time to work on the small details that add to the Immersion... Stuff like that... Be careful about over doing it on the RPGM mini-games... Most players who play RPGM Visual Novels don't want to be continuously distracted by meaningless mini-games over and over and over again... I'm sure there are some folks who love that, but again they tend to distract from the story...
Another issue you may run into, is that a lot of folks see RPGM and don't even bother trying it out... This typically is because so many RPGM games put so much focus on running around a map and mini-games, that people don't want to spend half their game day doing meaningless navigation and pointless mini-games, so they see RPGM and skip to the next game... Not that there are not a lot of fans of RPGM games, don't get me wrong... But I just needed to point that factor out...
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one is ofcourse the interest of the game in general.. and ofcourse.. With Money Income on this I can Call this my job.. (my hubby will not like if I use countless hours infront of the computer making this when I dont pull my weight on the family life thru this) so ofcourse.. some money will help and allow me to have more time to make this game..
I would most likely make games without income also... since I enjoy it at the same time.. but then it would be some time before each release ofcourse.. get a better translator is something I will try to get (thanx for letting me know that my English suck... I can promise you I suck better then my speach^^ hahah )
I would most likely make games without income also... since I enjoy it at the same time.. but then it would be some time before each release ofcourse.. get a better translator is something I will try to get
(thanx for letting me know that my English suck... I can promise you I suck better then my speach^^ hahah )