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bsjfan69

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Alright I just played this. I have to say, for an RPG maker game, this was really REALLY good, far above what I expected! The renders are great and the story is dumb but doesn't waste your time which is appreciated. Also has a decent amount of content. Even though it's in RPG maker you don't have to spend hours walking around, the objectives are clear as daylight, you can skip text, it might as well be renpy... which makes me wonder why it's not in renpy in the first place, the fact that it's rpg maker means most people won't even give it a shot, and I can't blame them. If it was renpy it would probably be 10x more popular.

However it also has some glaring issues. The most important one being the grammar. It's terrible. Seriously... it's so bad. Typos, lack of punctuation, emoticons in sentences, fourth wall broken constantly for no reason, it's just bad. Apart from that, some minor issues: I had some issues with walking around the map, like moving through walls and stuff, but nothing gamebreaking. The 3d sprite looks terrible, use chibis. And finally my game crashed during the mom movie night, not sure why.

I'm being nitpicky but that's because I think this game has some real potential. I will be following its development for sure. Good luck!
 
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oldboy_dude

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Hi, I am stuck after conversation with her mother about dorms. Kendra goes out and there is text 'next stop - Jessica'. But Jessica is not at home
 

Mimz

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Alright I just played this. I have to say, for an RPG maker game, this was really REALLY good, far above what I expected! The renders are great and the story is dumb but doesn't waste your time which is appreciated. Also has a decent amount of content. Even though it's in RPG maker you don't have to spend hours walking around, the objectives are clear as daylight, you can skip text, it might as well be renpy... which makes me wonder why it's not in renpy in the first place, the fact that it's rpg maker means most people won't even give it a shot, and I can't blame them. If it was renpy it would probably be 10x more popular.

However it also has some glaring issues. The most important one being the grammar. It's terrible. Seriously... it's so bad. Typos, lack of punctuation, emoticons in sentences, fourth wall broken constantly for no reason, it's just bad. Apart from that, some minor issues: I had some issues with walking around the map, like moving through walls and stuff, but nothing gamebreaking. The 3d sprite looks terrible, use chibis. And finally my game crashed during the mom movie night, not sure why.

I'm being nitpicky but that's because I think this game has some real potential. I will be following its development for sure. Good luck!
Thanx... bad grammer? I do noth onderstand ^^ ok.. Yeah.. caught me.. I know.. I'm not the best at it.. I'm trying to become better at it also, and maybe I should get someone else to go over the dialouges before a new release. I will take a look at the movie night with mum and see what it could be. (first time I have heard about that so) I did not like the 3d sprite either so it will be burned! And renpy, I might actualy consider to try that out soon.
Thank you for your feedbacks, much appreciated!
:)
 

Mimz

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not sure what the day it is, but I only know that I shoud find Jessica in order to look for dorm
uhm... dident expect this.. you took the innocent road at the toilet? right? so.. uhm... I'm really sorry... I dident finish that one :eek: I feel so bad right now... I just checked the project.. I had forgot to make an entry at that route.. I will fix this ofcourse.. I dont know if you are on the reese route aswell?
 

oldboy_dude

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uhm... dident expect this.. you took the innocent road at the toilet? right? so.. uhm... I'm really sorry... I dident finish that one :eek: I feel so bad right now... I just checked the project.. I had forgot to make an entry at that route.. I will fix this ofcourse.. I dont know if you are on the reese route aswell?
no problem, but what I shoud do to prvent this route?
 

Mimz

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no problem, but what I shoud do to prvent this route?
dont run out of the toilet.. just stay the course and be bad.. I will work on the route you started on aswell ofcourse!
but the reese route will be going abit slower then the others aswell
 

Tanatoswrath

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Dialogues are hilarious, Kendra and her friend are so perverted, it's like a light comedy :)
There are some weird bugs when you choose not to change clothes (and something else later, don't remember exactly) and it breaks continuation - highlighted biom disappears, have to load save before the choice.
 
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Mimz

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Dialogues are hilarious, Kendra and her friend are so perverted, it's like a light comedy :)
There are some weird bugs when you choose not to change clothes (and something else later, don't remember exactly) and it breaks continuation - highlighted biom disappears, have to load save before the choice.
To continue you have to say yes to change clothes. Weird option... I know.. ^^ let me know where it breaks and I will take a look at it :)biom?
 
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