VN Ren'Py Completed Kimberly's Life [v0.13] [SpaceBall1]

[hans2014frans]

Why does Rose, pardon Renee, have such an unnatural "duck beak" ... while she sucks Finn's cock? (she looked better in the HometownTrap scene) ... and isn't it about time Doug finally shaved?
... by the way ... may the Schwartz or something be with you

 

[Deleted member 5606666]

Her 10 year old brother? Fuck off, a 10 year old doesn't look like it needs to shave his face. That's grown up dwarf..

Kimberly is very beautiful, but the rest....

 

[BeastMaster59]

Love the Game, Love the characters.....The best are the Hillbillies, reminds me of back home, or the series "trailer park boys", Great Job Dev.....and for the folks that don`t like it.....SCREW THEM is all I can say..........That's why like misfits also, you have other characters that you don`t see in other Games.

 

[hectorvartor]

¿En algun momento podremos ver a Rayanne o manejarla nuevamente?

 

[EdgeOfShadow]

I will probably play this eventually, but for me the kinetic novel tag is a turnoff: even meaningless choices that would simply gave a game over on a wrong choice helps me stay focused on what actually is happening.
With limited free time I find myself just skipping though kinetic novels, maybe this one will be an exception.

 

[Shizusan]

This game is like the unlikely people meets hot girl, something that is often impossible and rare in real life, unless your loaded with cash lol.

 

[m3nic]

I wish someday granpa Jetro man who the first take Kimberly virgininty.
But I bet it would be need a year until it can be realized still far away to the storyline.

 

[Ursus4321]

I've always liked female mc games that get corrupted. But in this case, at least it would give her the opportunity that since they corrupt her, they give her the power to take revenge on the stupid classmates who laugh at her. Whore yes, but at least with the power to take revenge on those chicks

 

[88stanford88]

Hope the dev is not too much slow as the old guys in the game .
Kimberly is a young girl and deserves to know the carnal pleasures of sex-life before meeting a dumb boy who takes her away in a pointless romance ...

too much slow-burn would be a non sense because old guys can die easily

After a while... when she's well trained she can try to fall in love with some dumb guy!
But she will have the experience to choose the best for herself and decide if a single jealous guy romance is right for her or if it's better to stay with the old men who (when they will die) leave their economic inheritance to her... maybe she will get married 6/7 times or more but by this way she will become a rich lady for sure (of course she can have fun with all the young guys she likes when married)

 

[88stanford88]

unless your loaded with cash lol.

Fast cash is not a good way to care about Kimberly future
I think she will be more smart than what you are talking about and she will stay focused in becoming the owner of the assets and finances of her old men partners in order to build a stable future for her.

 

[Tzuri]

I wish someday granpa Jetro man who the first take Kimberly virgininty.
But I bet it would be need a year until it can be realized still far away to the storyline.

yea i hope jethro gets the prize and not some random dude like in the other game.

 

[SpaceBall1]

yea i hope jethro gets the prize and not some random dude like in the other game.

I’m a little confused. The chief was not random. He was actually the guy controlling the whole thing. He was the main male character.

However, every older male character that has been shown is going to fuck Kimberly at some point in the story.

 

[77cacalavaca77]

However, every older male character that has been shown is going to fuck Kimberly at some point in the story.

You are my hero !

 

[Deleted member 5606666]

However, every older male character that has been shown is going to fuck Kimberly at some point in the story.

But why do they all have to be so damn ugly, in comparison with kimberly...

 

[SpaceBall1]

But why do they all have to be so damn ugly, in comparison with kimberly...

That’s the theme and point of the game. However, not all of them are ugly. Just because they are old, doesn’t make them ugly…ie Skroob, Mr. Cameron, Vanessa’s dad. But young, muscular, model types are not something I want to see.

 

[Weiss123]

Excellent game, the female protagonist is very pretty. Will there be a pregnancy tag in the future? Just asking.

 

[ifss]

Can you please tone down the 'gross', 'yuck', 'ugly' kind of reactions from Kimberly? We get it - I feel it is just too much to read her think those thoughts but she is still there looking and behaving the same. Just does not fit between thoughts and artwork.

 

[berny]

Nice game so far. It's rare to find a game with a female MC that doesn't follow the usual corruption route and instead focuses on blackmail and humiliation. And I like the story. Obviously it's nothing special and very simple (imo that's actually a big plus in this case) and if you look hard enough you could probably find a lot of plotholes but it serves its purpose and enhances the kinks and that's the most important part.
Kimberly is also really hot, I like that she has reasonable sized boobs and ass, the other girl in the bar too.
I could also live with a little (or a lot) less monologues both from the MC and the NPCs (mainly NPCs), I'm a big fan of "show, don't tell". IMO these constant "I can't wait to fuck her" etc. make the game more trashy than it needs to be and it makes the men look like immature teenagers who have never seen a naked woman before rather than threatening blackmailers.

I just read what EdgeOfShadow wrote about how choices can help with staying focused. I never thought about that but that's an interesting point that I kind of agree with. I don't really know what to do about that though. If you add fake choices people (heck, I would probably do it myself ) will complain about them making no difference, so keeping it a kinetic novel so you know what to expect might be the better way.

PS: that the review section hasn't been overrun by people attacking the game for its genre is a nice surprise.

 

[genteis]

I personally don't understand the problem if game is a kinetic novel. One of my recent favorites has been "A promise best left unkept". Yes, that example is not 100% KN, because it has has choices and different endings. But you get the first choice after 2 or 3 hours of gameplay I think? In total, one ending has 10 choices throughout the game, where maybe 1-3 actually matter and change the path.

Sure, in ideal world choices would make any game better, but these games quite often are made by 1 man dev teams. I would much rather see a game being finished in a few years and have them move onto another one. So many games get abandoned or seem to never get finished because they started too ambitious and end up getting burned out.

 

[Deleted member 4995612]

I personally don't understand the problem if game is a kinetic novel. One of my recent favorites has been "A promise best left unkept". Yes, that example is not 100% KN, because it has has choices and different endings. But you get the first choice after 2 or 3 hours of gameplay I think? In total, one ending has 10 choices throughout the game, where maybe 1-3 actually matter and change the path.

Sure, in ideal world choices would make any game better, but these games quite often are made by 1 man dev teams. I would much rather see a game being finished in a few years and have them move onto another one. So many games get abandoned or seem to never get finished because they started too ambitious and end up getting burned out.

I addressed this issue in another post a day or two ago. There are many of us who prefer KN versus grind-n-find. Good storytellers are few and far between. Your typical porndog often convinces themself that, somehow, they are in charge of the story if they're given a half-dozen preplanned, predetermined choices to click on. I prefer to follow a storyline that a developer believes in and wants to share with the world. The illusion that somehow I am personally manipulating the outcome and determining someone's fate by following a path already designed and tucked in among a few others is just that, an illusion.

A good storyteller captures their reader's imagination and leads them into another realm where they become caught up in a work of art. Now, some art is better than others, but, the difference between being told a good story and getting lost in a maze of point-and-click, is like the the difference between appreciating van Gogh's "The Starry Night" and doing a paint by number. We don't all have to try to be van Gogh with our storytelling, but a good story is a good story, you can't diminish that.

This story is not "The Starry Night" but it is one man's vision and his best effort to tell a story that resonates with him, and clearly others. Personally, I'd love to see more and more kinetic novels like this on this site. Tell me a good story and leave the scavenger hunts to those who think that stuff matters.