VN Ren'Py Completed Kimberly's Life [v0.13] [SpaceBall1]

[The Sailor Man]

The only problem I see with this game is this being a Kinetic Novel, not being able to avoid the shit and being forced corruption and constant rape.

Oh, man i think you are on the wrong tab maybe you'll probably be much happier in another tab game with fetishes you like, why are you wasting time here to tell us that this game is not to your liking? Do you think your opinion about the content of the game is interesting? Are you an erotic game guru? You should probably think that not all people are like you and appreciate what you like, probably some people like tomato soup with hargraven toes made by Serana, what would be your problem? Why does every game need to have some decisions to be a good game? Especially when it's free and you don't pay anything for it to be pretentious.

 

[Temper Six]

I'd love to know the assets you used for Kimberly.

 

[tharsheblows]

I would have to be shown specific images to understand what you mean. There are two sex scenes where its her laying down on a desk and the man standing up...can't be on top of each other in that sense. The DP scene with her and the Yoshi's was pretty intwined. Also her first sex with Tyler was pretty close. Some images are made for you guys to see her whole body as she is being banged.

Don't get me wrong, I take no offense to your post. I just feel that "better" is objective and I would need to be shown exact examples of this to understand you. But I will say that positioning sex is the hardest thing to do in development. Legs go into legs if they are too close. The cock needs to be moved for it to look like it's inside. And more. It really is challenging.

So, here are two shots, one from another game and one from this one. The bodies are posed approximatley the same, but you can see the sensual twining of limbs in the first image. The styles are different, but I would still like to see the bodies in the second in a more sensual and intimate embrace.

Again, not sure what all is involved, and enjoy your story, but would love to see closer, more natural positioning.

 

[SpaceBall1]

So, here are two shots, one from another game and one from this one. The bodies are posed approximatley the same, but you can see the sensual twining of limbs in the first image. The styles are different, but I would still like to see the bodies in the second in a more sensual and intimate embrace.

Again, not sure what all is involved, and enjoy your story, but would love to see closer, more natural positioning.

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Oh, you mean like these that are already in the game...




There is a reason for that image above...she does not want this, she is pushing him away as much as she can. And as I said, some images are meant to be not as close because of the position.

This is an amazing image and one of the best sex images I have ever done.

 

[tharsheblows]

Oh, you mean like these that are already in the game...

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There is a reason for that image above...she does not want this, she is pushing him away as much as she can. And as I said, some images are meant to be not as close because of the position.
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This is an amazing image and one of the best sex images I have ever done.

I appreciate the explanation and, the first one is meh, okay, the one with Jethro is nice, but the third is unrealistic in that Kim's back is way to straight. She'd have to have incredible back muscles to maintain that, especially with her elbows up off the desk as it is. Also, in the pic I provided, Hayleigh doesn't appear to be pushing Albert away at all. In fact her legs are semi wrapped around his ass. I also really don't think she could keep Albert propped up like that whle he's bearing down on her anyway, nor could he maintain that position himself.

It appears you're somewhat offended. I don't mean to offend. Just making some constructive remarks that might help as you consider posing your models in the future. I know they weren't invited, but this is a discussion board.

 

[SpaceBall1]

I appreciate the explanation and, the first one is meh, okay, the one with Jethro is nice, but the third is unrealistic in that Kim's back is way to straight. She'd have to have incredible back muscles to maintain that, especially with her elbows up off the desk as it is. Also, in the pic I provided, Hayleigh doesn't appear to be pushing Albert away at all and I really don't think she could keep Albert propped up like that whle he's bearing down on her anyway, nor could he maintain that position himself.

It appears you're somewhat offended. I don't mean to offend. Just making some constructive remarks that might help as you consider posing your models in the future. I know they weren't invited, but this is a discussion board.

I'm not offended, I just disagree. The first one is great and just as good as your example. The one with Kimberly and Finn is a still image, obviously they would be moving. The one with Jethro is the worst of the 3. I do appreciate the attempt for helping, but I don't see the need for the help.

 

[tharsheblows]

I'm not offended, I just disagree. The first one is great and just as good as your example. The one with Kimberly and Finn is a still image, obviously they would be moving. The one with Jethro is the worst of the 3. I do appreciate the attempt for helping, but I don't see the need for the help.

As I figured.
Best of luck, my friend!

 

[SpaceBall1]

I appreciate the explanation and, the first one is meh, okay, the one with Jethro is nice, but the third is unrealistic in that Kim's back is way to straight. She'd have to have incredible back muscles to maintain that, especially with her elbows up off the desk as it is. Also, in the pic I provided, Hayleigh doesn't appear to be pushing Albert away at all. In fact her legs are semi wrapped around his ass. I also really don't think she could keep Albert propped up like that whle he's bearing down on her anyway, nor could he maintain that position himself.

It appears you're somewhat offended. I don't mean to offend. Just making some constructive remarks that might help as you consider posing your models in the future. I know they weren't invited, but this is a discussion board.

The very next image her elbow is on the desk...then after that her shoulders are on the desk. Again it's a still image but the people are in motion.

 

[tharsheblows]

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The very next image her elbow is on the desk...then after that her shoulders are on the desk. Again it's a still image but the people are in motion.

Got it.
Again, just mentioning it in case you're open to it. You be you. I'll survive with what you provide.

 

[SpaceBall1]

Got it.
Again, just mentioning it in case you're open to it. You be you. I'll survive with what you provide.

Thanks. And trust me, I do remember what people say. I do see your point in some instances, but not all of them. And there is a reason for them, as I discussed. I will keep it in mind when I make the images though. We're always learning and I know I have come a long way, but still have a long way to go. Everyone does have their own opinions, that's why not every attempt for help is seen as help or that there is a need(I don't mean that about you, just in general). A well respected player who has helped a lot of devs told me that scene with Finn in the office was the best I had done yet, and was top notch. So I take his word for it.

 

[tharsheblows]

Thanks. And trust me, I do remember what people say. I do see your point in some instances, but not all of them. And there is a reason for them, as I discussed. I will keep it in mind when I make the images though. We're always learning and I know I have come a long way, but still have a long way to go. Everyone does have their own opinions, that's why not every attempt for help is seen as help or that there is a need(I don't mean that about you, just in general). A well respected player who has helped a lot of devs told me that scene with Finn in the office was the best I had done yet, and was top notch. So I take his word for it.

Honestly, I think the scene with Jethro and Kim was your best work so far, though I do like the emotional aspects of the later episodes where the girls are beginning to get the feels. It's usually the final level of degradation and corruption, but they only like it and roll with it in the moment and regret it after, which keeps this reader's interest.

 

[audidiablo]

Keep getting data errors trying to unzip with 7zip (Workupload). Does anyone know how to remedy that? Have a feeling the unzip method might be an issue.

 

[Temper Six]

Keep getting data errors trying to unzip with 7zip (Workupload). Does anyone know how to remedy that? Have a feeling the unzip method might be an issue.

I used 7zip to unzip so it might just be your copy. Maybe try and redownload it?

 

[audidiablo]

I used 7zip to unzip so it might just be your copy. Maybe try and redownload it?

It worked. Thank you for the advice.

 

[Deleted Member 69]

Is there compatibility with previous savegames? Thanks

 

[Dbbballs]

man why do all the males have to be so fucking ugly :/

 

[MAD6999]

You’re still not getting it. I don’t give a fuck about you or your ideals. I’m not asking for your support. I don’t want your support. I’m writing what I want to write. I’m not making choices. I don’t care about your opinion or your desires. Go fuck your self you stupid son of a bitch. Your example means nothing to me because I don’t care. If it’s not what you want, please move on and find some other DEV to try and push your stupid ideals on and harass. Go to hell man!

damn how aggressive XD

 

[SpaceBall1]

Just a Kimberly's ass appreciation post! Version 0.12 is making progress. May the Schwartz be with you! ~SB1

 

[Toxictitan]

Just a Kimberly's ass appreciation post! Version 0.12 is making progress. May the Schwartz be with you! ~SB1 View attachment 3730927

My small contribution for her ASS fans.

 

[wildride69]

My small contribution for her ASS fans. View attachment 3733230

You sir are a gentleman and a scholar and your work is greatly appreciated.

Thank You