inkalicious if you are writing the incest patch, please add more little chat topic like; MCs father, MCs childhood, MCs puberty, dont get me wrong, you are doing pretty good job on this but i think you could add more stuff into it. (if you can)
Example
When he sucking Megan's tits she could say
"You know, your intentions were different back then but... when you were a baby you used to love my tits more than Sam (or a normal baby) , i think my tits efects on you is permanent"
I know, it is a very basic example but you understand what i'm saying.
Game is very gud, even tho this concept used so many times it's still enjoyable. But There's still nuisance about games with incest patch. I know not everybody into these kind of shit but in that kind of games you can see the developer's struggle to make it seem like a family for people playing it with patch and not so much like that for people playing it unpatched and they end up having something in between in dialog and story, which is not quite nice. I mean it's not a big deal but during most of the game i felt like i'm playing it unpatched, as i said game still cool tho would gibe 5 stars.
I think I can answer both with the same explanation. Let's see...
I wrote the VN with the intention of it showing the personal trials of a family group
or an unrelated group.
The family group is pretty straightforward on why the girls wouldn't be into swapping body fluids with their son/brother. Whether that's finding them attractive in the first place, over-familiarity, old-world morals or just plain ewwww.
The unrelated group are just as close as a family would be, though without the lifelong familiarity. So their issues could be one of attractiveness, creepy behavior, negatively affecting the winning group dynamic and it being a bit weird exiting the friend-zone.
Dialogue is the thing that truly sets both groups apart and I'm to blame for a liking subtlety in my stories and a slow burn on some things.
Incest stories can overuse the forbidden relationships in dialogue and inner thoughts. Like you need reminded every three lines that the son is the brother of the sister who is spying on her mom that's screaming "Penetrate me my first born! In the place from whence you and your bi-curious voyeuristic sibling were birthed!"
And I'm all for that. Sometimes. But I usually dial down the continual references, as the characters don't need to remind each other of their connection or shared past.
But it's also a porn game, so it's there but my approach is character-led.
Megan likes to talk dirty. She loves the power it holds. However she rarely touched on their relationship when trying to get him off. Maybe that'll change now.
Sam is terrible at dirty talk and it doesn't interest her. She's a girl of action, but her situation is about to change.
I really don't think I'd change a thing if it was a straight-up incest porn game, but hopefully you'll see (subtle) changes in language as the story progresses.
