VN Ren'Py Completed King of the Raft - A LitRPG Visual Novel Apocalypse Adventure [Final] [Royal Guard Publishing]

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Overview:
Florida Man gets Isekaied.

King of the Raft is a visual novel game.
You can click through the story, select options, and hear immersive dialogue that matches the story.
The story is about: Atlantis existed and the faction from our legends loved Earthlings.
They departed, forgetting about Earth. A new faction sees our inferior species destroying the planet.
They claim Earth as theirs, opening portals to flood the oceans to above 7000'. Zack is jet skiing in Florida when the apocalypse happens.
He saves a damsel in distress, discovers freaky sea monsters, and creates a raft city.
Zack must save the desperate, improve his base, and use the overlords reward system to bide his time.​

Thread Updated: 2021-10-12
Release Date: 2021-10-10
Developer: Royal Guard Publishing -
Censored: No
Version: Final
OS: Windows
Language: English
Voiced: English
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Just played Chapter One.

The story is interesting so far, and the fact that it's entirely voice acted (so far?) is impressive. You've clearly spent a lot of effort on this!

However, some criticisms:

* Having separate windows for phrases like "he said" is annoying as a player. Maybe just keep "he said" in the spoken message but remove from the written one. Examples include one slide saying just "Jesus" and another simply saying "I exclaimed" or "You-you left me," followed by "she shouted". (from the beginning of Chapter 2). These don't need to be two slides!

* There wasn't a single choice in all of chapter one and only one in chapter 2! I get that it's a visual novel and that you're setting the backstory up, but choices really help to give players a sense of agency. What about having a few forced choices? You could choose to follow the tour boats (it wouldn't make much difference, would it?). You could choose to scoop up the water bottles or look at the other debris. You could choose to turn back to shore when you get the alert on your phone (again, it wouldn't accomplish anything). You could have a conversation with the girl to try and get around the rule of two tickets.

* There's a habit of the game describing a sight without actually showing it to you (or before showing it to you), like the man on the phone in chapter 2. It would be nice to have a picture to go along with it.
 
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sanahtlig

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Was the writing in this created by a machine learning, since seems very off.
You mean lines like "I slammed my spear down in a swing"? To be fair, humans are just as capable of spewing out nonsense when cornered and forced to produce.
 

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Apparently, her organs have dislodged from their normal resting place and are now bunched up somewhere near her pelvis, or this man has found a way to tap into the ether to increase the size of his erection astronomically. Either way, this girl is going to require hospitalization afterwards.
 

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King of the Raft - Stuufff [Final] [Royal Guard Publishing] – Compressed

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Caveat emptor.
 

jxd

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finished? There is practically no difference between the decisions: Yes, I thought it would lead to different paths and it only serves to hide scenes: D.
 

SkepSyS

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I fell the story is nice but it seems to have been written more for a sandbox management game (would have been awesome btw)... when it got interesting it ended... so why does it say complete then? Or are we talking about this version... It has huge potential for management type game! But if it takes them 5 years to make... I will forget about it...
 
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