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VN Ren'Py Abandoned Kingdoms: Origins [v0.5b] [M.C Games]

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Ok so... the song that plays at the main screen of the game... thats the opening song to the anime Blue Exorcist (Ao no Exorcist). Was that intentional or should i more ask, why that particular song?
 

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Intriguing story, I like it. (y)
Aww, I like Ina. She seems to like the MC and is helping him so far getting him out.^^
But MC's attitude is a bit weird, caring, annoyed and behaves like a douchebag.
Is this because of his lack of sleep? Will his behavior change?

I don't mind the quality of the video. A picture would have been good too.
Maybe first learning how to make animations and replace the pictures later when you are ok with them.
Either way, for me the story is important. Pics to round the story up and to look at something nice.
Animations would be a bonus.
Thanks. And yeah, his behavior will change. He is just edgy at the moment, not to worry.

Glad you like the story tho!

And the dark blue hair one looks like Freya from Danmachi.
Yes, yes and yes! Babes, hot babes everywhere.
 
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Ok so... the song that plays at the main screen of the game... thats the opening song to the anime Blue Exorcist (Ao no Exorcist). Was that intentional or should i more ask, why that particular song?
Yes.

1st. Cause I like it.

2nd. Cause it somewhat fits the theme.
 

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Hmmm... I realy do not love this 3D Art Style...
But if Game be have Fart UpDate every time like "HS Tutor" when ok...
 

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Is that free for usage btw? Otherwise I'd imagine you'll soon have a remove request from an overbearing Japanese company.
I doubt it will be a problem. They don't track every single game out there tbh.
 
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It was incredibly short for a 0.3... Why not name it 0.03 instead?
To you, yes, perhaps so. To me? Not really. That was pain in the ass to make just so you know.
 

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I doubt it will be a problem. They don't track every single game out there tbh.
Just asking because it's enough if there's only one butthurt fella that doesn't feels it right and decides to ratt the game out. In many cases, incest games got the short end of the stick on Patreon not because the site cares the games about that much but because there's someone reporting it.
 
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Just asking because it's enough if there's only one butthurt fella that doesn't feels it right and decides to ratt the game out. In many cases, incest games got the short end of the stick on Patreon not because the site cares the games about that much but because there's someone reporting it.
I don't post anything on Patreon that has anything to do with that, nor hints it in any sort really. But yeah, I've heard the same myself.
 
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GAME UPDATED TO v0.4a

First post updated, MEGA link provided.

IMPORTANT: Due to some changes old save files won't work anymore, so be sure to delete your save files to avoid a ton of errors, when deleting the save files be sure to remember that RenPy saves save files at:

AppData > Roaming > RenPy >
 
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I'll put this on my watch list then just play this when it reaches 0.6 or 0.7 since there'll be tons of problems along the way when it involves save files, but the game does look good, it's the outcome and results is what I'm worried about, hopefully this game can be fleshed out and improved by then.
 
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so shouldn't this game be Kinetic atm cause no choices in the game seem to matter at all. after realizing this i ended just holding down CTRL and skipped the story further along to see if there were any actual choices...doesnt seem like anything matters as the respons is the same. also my only actual suggestion. maybe make the sex scenes where every click transitions from one pose to the other rather then let it all play in a single go. (idk maybe thats just me).
 
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The Freya look-alike now has a suit similar to Freya in the main menu screen, I'm content :love:
 
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The Freya look-alike now has a suit similar to Freya in the main menu screen, I'm content :love:
Priorities 11/10.

so shouldn't this game be Kinetic atm cause no choices in the game seem to matter at all. after realizing this i ended just holding down CTRL and skipped the story further along to see if there were any actual choices...doesnt seem like anything matters as the respons is the same. also my only actual suggestion. maybe make the sex scenes where every click transitions from one pose to the other rather then let it all play in a single go. (idk maybe thats just me).
Those scenes are usually in video format tbh. As for choices, patience first. I always focus first on world-building and characters.

I'll put this on my watch list then just play this when it reaches 0.6 or 0.7 since there'll be tons of problems along the way when it involves save files, but the game does look good, it's the outcome and results is what I'm worried about, hopefully this game can be fleshed out and improved by then.
No need to be worried about that, just will take a bit of time.
 
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Those scenes are usually in video format tbh. As for choices, patience first. I always focus first on world-building and characters.
eh no worries i fully think you should do what you want. reason i mention choices is so i can be more invested in the game early on. usually in these types of games is whether or not i want to get involved with a certain character or not. forced relationships always annoyed me but if thats the way dev decides to go my only choices are usually play as is or not at all.

but yeah the reason i mentioned the sex scenes is they felt too long at some point.... "like ok i had enough of this position for so long already skip to the next one? no? oh ok then guess i'll just wait then:whistle:. ah look at that next pose nice...ummm how long is this gonna last?" dont get me wrong in a porno its ok but in a vn it helps to set the pace i guess.

Edit: no idea how i feel about the Akame ga Kill chick yet(blue-haired girl in white clothes). like i said after a while had to skim through it.
 
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eh no worries i fully think you should do what you want. reason i mention choices is so i can be more invested in the game early on. usually in these types of games is whether or not i want to get involved with a certain character or not. forced relationships always annoyed me but if thats the way dev decides to go my only choices are usually play as is or not at all.

but yeah the reason i mentioned the sex scenes is they felt too long at some point.... "like ok i had enough of this position for so long already skip to the next one? no? oh ok then guess i'll just wait then:whistle:. ah look at that next pose nice...ummm how long is this gonna last?" dont get me wrong in a porno its ok but in a vn it helps to set the pace i guess.

Edit: no idea how i feel about the Akame ga Kill chick yet(blue-haired girl in white clothes). like i said after a while had to skim through it.
Naturally, I understand. I am simply saying that I have a priority list and focuses. I can't offer you choices if there is nothing there to back that choice up with, hence I make sure to create that first.

"Sex scenes felt too long at some point." Honestly, I understand your point of view as much as I understand the opposite point of view, but if there is one thing I've learned here...you simply can't please everyone. Different people will tell you different things, people will say "Oh this is too short." or "Oh this is too long."

Honestly, I can't seem to find a way to balance things out...though I do tend to keep all the sex scenes up to a maximum of 2 minutes video.

But I'll see what I can do to change things up.

Also, I don't understand you "no idea how I feel about the akame ga kill chick yet". Care to elaborate that a bit for me?
As an avid Danmachi fan, here how it is to me.

Freya > everything else :D
Seal of approval granted.
 
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Isn't the opening "My Dearest" by Animenz, the opening to Guilty Crown? It doesn't sound like any of ao no exocist's 3 openings
 
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