You’re clearly NOT doing your homework correctly, honey. 
1: No fast travel? Cute. There’s bus, taxi, subway, recall bracelet, shoes of speed, plenty of ways to move faster if you actually played.
2: Open your little eyes, the map button is written in the escape menu, and you can access it anytime.
3: Read the damn tags before playing. Memory game is listed, and yes, there’s a TRANS tag too, just in case you planned to cry about that next.
4: Is this your first game ever? Lots of games do this. Please don’t try Elden Ring, you’d melt. Just so you know, the work place is the very first screen on your right, under ten seconds away. Blink and you’ll miss it.
5: Yeah, you should stop there, you clearly played less than three minutes and didn’t bother reading anything.
Conclusion: None of your points are really valid.
1. Fast travel, as in, call up the map with target locations (which you can't), click on a location, and you're there. Yes, I know there are a few quicker traversal methods, but it's still a lot of running around from point A > B > A > C > Etc..
2. Map is there. Could be implemented better.
3a. Memory game? Yes. See my comments on copious notes / eidetic memory / 1980's
3b. Trans? Did I say a single word about kinks in the game? ...or is your trigger finger twitching and you're just waiting to pounce on a hater? ..imagined or not? Maybe get more comfortable with your own life choices and stop assuming everyone is out to attack you for those choices.. ..honey.
4. First game? Hardly. Remember my mention of Sierra Games? I've been playing computer games since their inception. Sierra, Microprose, Infocom, etc.. Ever play a game across multiple 5.25 discs? I'm been gaming on a computer for 4+ decades, so spare me your condescending attitude. And yes, I've played Elden Ring, as well as most AAA titles. This game (Kink Maker) is no Elden Ring. It's a fap game in it's infancy. Now, there's nothing wrong with fap games in development. They're meant to be problematic and riddled with 'could have' and 'should have' aspects. The point of these forums is feedback, right? Apparently offering mine is a problem for you.
5. I played enough to realize the grind and the slog are not worth the payout. Take a look around F95. Hundreds of games, all offering a fap-worthy experience. If you read my post fully, then you'd have notice I started with. "There is a truly great game at the core of "Kink Maker", but it is buried under a pile of poor mechanics and design choices.". Meaning, I didn't fully write it off as a total loss. The game has "good bones". I did, however, state that if it maintains the same pointless "go to A, then B, then back to A" over and over and over, then yeah.. ..I'll probably never get back to it.
In short, if a game makes you work very hard to get to the reward, it better be one hell of a reward. Understand your audience when you try to make a game that you want them to enjoy. I'm one of the audience; or am I?