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Thanks for the feedback! I think it was when he enter in classroom "Ladies, Always a pleasure.". Fixed
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Ah yes, that was the one!Thanks for the feedback! I think it was when he enter in classrom "Ladies, Always a pleasure.". Fixed
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It has...potential for sure...but could be immeasurably better.
Grammar itself is good for a change, but a lot of the phrasing is terrible. Always an indicator of a non fluent English speaker. I'd be happy to test for you going forward and fix what is currently there. I do it for others for free already.
The first animation, really not sure what's going on there but honestly, none of them are very good. This may come down to personal preference but for me, if you are unable to do them properly, don't have the hardware or time, then just don't bother. Three or four more static renders are better than simple back and forth animations (if you can even call them that). Others may be fine with that, but the AVN world has moved on over the last 10 years.
There are already far too many tropes here that have been used (and abused) a thousand times already and probably better. There is nothing inherantly unique here at all. The final silly pointlessness? Small tiny waifs of a girl do not knock over six foot hunks of a man. It's just....why? It's nonsensical and plain stupid. Locker boy jocks? Jeeesh...where have we seen those before. Man of the house should have a vehicle...oh btw leaving mine? Makes sense.
The circular cursor is just more annoying to see than being edgy or unique. Mileage may vary with it I guess. The renders are very good but I do hope half the VN is not wasted on a girl who is no longer alive. Why do we even get points with her, for what purpose? Let's the hope the MC does as she says and moves on...sooner rather than later. To add to this, GF killed in motorcycle accident, everyone over the moon he gets a new....motorcycle. Riiiiggghhhht...sure.
You haven't put the sandbox in yet...my advice? Just don't bother at all. Not worth your effort. It never helps, never improves and just wastes your time, coding it when you could be making more renders, doing more writing and advancing the actual story. You do you, but expect a lot of disinterest the minute you add it to a VN that does not currently have it. Learn from other devs who made this mistake.
Again, it has a lot of potential, depending on how you proceed from here. I did enjoy it (mostly Vic if being honest), despite perhaps being overly critical. Best of luck.
Grammar itself is good for a change, but a lot of the phrasing is terrible. Always an indicator of a non fluent English speaker. I'd be happy to test for you going forward and fix what is currently there. I do it for others for free already.
The first animation, really not sure what's going on there but honestly, none of them are very good. This may come down to personal preference but for me, if you are unable to do them properly, don't have the hardware or time, then just don't bother. Three or four more static renders are better than simple back and forth animations (if you can even call them that). Others may be fine with that, but the AVN world has moved on over the last 10 years.
There are already far too many tropes here that have been used (and abused) a thousand times already and probably better. There is nothing inherantly unique here at all. The final silly pointlessness? Small tiny waifs of a girl do not knock over six foot hunks of a man. It's just....why? It's nonsensical and plain stupid. Locker boy jocks? Jeeesh...where have we seen those before. Man of the house should have a vehicle...oh btw leaving mine? Makes sense.
The circular cursor is just more annoying to see than being edgy or unique. Mileage may vary with it I guess. The renders are very good but I do hope half the VN is not wasted on a girl who is no longer alive. Why do we even get points with her, for what purpose? Let's the hope the MC does as she says and moves on...sooner rather than later. To add to this, GF killed in motorcycle accident, everyone over the moon he gets a new....motorcycle. Riiiiggghhhht...sure.
You haven't put the sandbox in yet...my advice? Just don't bother at all. Not worth your effort. It never helps, never improves and just wastes your time, coding it when you could be making more renders, doing more writing and advancing the actual story. You do you, but expect a lot of disinterest the minute you add it to a VN that does not currently have it. Learn from other devs who made this mistake.
Again, it has a lot of potential, depending on how you proceed from here. I did enjoy it (mostly Vic if being honest), despite perhaps being overly critical. Best of luck.
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Ok so not sure why comment from a few days ago got deleted, wasn't off topic at all, but I will mention part of it again for those in thread, cause it could be interesting theory if true and the dev does decide to go this direction.
The dev said he might bring vampires, which could mean other supernatural elements, so if that is the case, it could open other aspects like a possible Emma return.
Not sure how I would feel about it, I do like grounded aspect, and moving on, plus a Emma return would shake everything up, like then, I woukd have a tough time choosing other girls, unless Emma would be OK sharing a bit.
So just thoughts, I think it could be cool, but also not totally sold on idea yet, mainly because the grounded normal relaity does appeal to me, but I am very open minded.
The dev said he might bring vampires, which could mean other supernatural elements, so if that is the case, it could open other aspects like a possible Emma return.
Not sure how I would feel about it, I do like grounded aspect, and moving on, plus a Emma return would shake everything up, like then, I woukd have a tough time choosing other girls, unless Emma would be OK sharing a bit.
So just thoughts, I think it could be cool, but also not totally sold on idea yet, mainly because the grounded normal relaity does appeal to me, but I am very open minded.
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Well, we got a good one here, bois. Very promising start, very likable characters, except the usual college dickhead trope ones, a gorgeous cast of female characters, a sweet blonde (finally) sis character and an MC that doesn't look like your average porn game four-eyed virgin dork or spineless loser MC blessed by the plot with a nuclear missile in his pants is always greatly appreciated to see, since for some weird reason they're a very rare breed...
Was sad to find out what happened to MC's GF, even more so after those two idiots insulted him for it, but it is what is. Sadly, you never truly mentally recover from something so tragic, you just learn to live with the pain and hope she's in a better place being proud of who you became/will eventually become.
Here's hoping there'll be an intricate plot twist in which Emma's shown to be alive and well and they end up together again in one of the next updates, but will have to wait patiently and see if this is doable storywise.
On a more funny note, what's up with our sexy (milfy??) teach ?? Is she supposed to be a thirsty vampire ready to sample MC's "goods", or is it just a harmless mistake or joke to lighten up the mood ??
Both Nat and Vic seem like sweet girls, needless to say hot asf too. Hope there's a sweet threesome planned for those two down the line... seeing how they get along so well, they could also share the MC. There's enough of him for ALL women in the game.
Letting the players choose what happens with tags like these will spare you a lot of unnecessary headaches as the story progresses and reaches its conclusion also allowing you to get the attention of a larger audience in the process, a pretty good business idea, IMO.
Best of luck with the project !!
Was sad to find out what happened to MC's GF, even more so after those two idiots insulted him for it, but it is what is. Sadly, you never truly mentally recover from something so tragic, you just learn to live with the pain and hope she's in a better place being proud of who you became/will eventually become.
Here's hoping there'll be an intricate plot twist in which Emma's shown to be alive and well and they end up together again in one of the next updates, but will have to wait patiently and see if this is doable storywise.
On a more funny note, what's up with our sexy (milfy??) teach ?? Is she supposed to be a thirsty vampire ready to sample MC's "goods", or is it just a harmless mistake or joke to lighten up the mood ??
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Couldn't agree more. Only thing better than a blonde is two of them.
Both Nat and Vic seem like sweet girls, needless to say hot asf too. Hope there's a sweet threesome planned for those two down the line... seeing how they get along so well, they could also share the MC. There's enough of him for ALL women in the game.
Planned tags added.
Sounds good, tho keep in mind that the more divisive ones, like femdom, group sex (assuming it's MMF/MMFF content) and voyeurism, need to be completely optional and easily avoidable so anyone can choose to see the exact type of content they're into and want in their playthrough.
Letting the players choose what happens with tags like these will spare you a lot of unnecessary headaches as the story progresses and reaches its conclusion also allowing you to get the attention of a larger audience in the process, a pretty good business idea, IMO.
Best of luck with the project !!
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Makes perfect sense: after MC’s girlfriend dies, the only logical next step is obviously to build a harem and fuck every girl on the planet.
Yeah u forget that it is u who u killed her lolMakes perfect sense: after MC’s girlfriend dies, the only logical next step is obviously to build a harem and fuck every girl on the planet.
Makes sense to me because harem is my number one kink, and I don't have the time to play every game multiple times.Makes perfect sense: after MC’s girlfriend dies, the only logical next step is obviously to build a harem and fuck every girl on the planet.
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I understand your point; Personally, in general, I don't mind harems. But that's not what I want for this story and its plot. I hope you'll give it a try one day.
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I had already mentioned it in the previous status update, but in this post we’ll go into more detail. And since is the first official Status Update I decided to release it as Free access to everyone! Let's start:
As you may have seen on my Discord group, with the release of Part 2, the Main Menu will get a restyle, and I’m very happy with the result:
I’ve also fixed several visual bugs and typos related to Part 1.
Based on your feedbacks, I’ve added a new option in the "OPTIONS" section: "Extra: Show/Hide Quick Menu". As the name suggests, starting from the next version you’ll be able to hide the Quick Menu at the bottom of the screen during gameplay, allowing for a cleaner view if you wish:
I’ve started scripting Part 2, which I expect to include 6 events.
Right now, I'm working on first event and so far, 30 static renders have been rendered.
In the next days I will start coding and create graphic for the "Gallery" and add cool features!
I’m really motivated for this project, and every time I get back home I can’t wait to work on it — thanks to you and your support!
Wishing you a beautiful Sunset!