RPGM Ren'Py Laura: Lustful Secrets [2024 Special] [Dark Anu]

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

I played a few minutes. Here's my thoughts.

Pros:
1. Isometric graphics of the map is refreshing
2. Amount of locations on map shows ability to create a believable world (at least physically)

Cons:
1. Writing is poor - (more later)
2. Proportions of women is off - Kim Kardashian's ass is not a good indicator of a good hot body. Go look at the Olympics athletes in Tokyo if you want to see what perfect female asses should look like. Kim's ass is all fat and plastic surgery, which is gross. It's not natural. Go to reddit /r/gonewild if you still can't figure out. There's no excuse for not knowing what a shapely ass should look like)

Writing is the core of any narrative driven game experiences, such as the ones here in h-games. There's a lot of issues with the writing in this game, I will list them in order of pressing matter.

1. Lack of characterization for wife, daughter, and husband - Who are they? What does wife do? What does daughter do? Where are they living? What kind of neighborhood is it? What does wife want in her life? Is she a homemaker (unemployed leecher)? Is daughter a student? Does she have a job? Does she have a boyfriend? What is wife scared of? What makes her happy? etc. etc. Learn how to do it:

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. Google "How to write a good character"
2. Lack of real meaningful dialog between characters - Biggest examples being the conversation that the MC had with his wife when he told her "Hey babe, without asking you, I am going to have some stranger live in our house". You need more life experiences or watch more TV if you think the way you portrayed that conversation is how real people talk. It's completely bogus
3. Too many side characters - I don't give a shit about the neighbor when you can't even get the 4 characters you have correct: MC, wife, daughter, and Marketing Consultant. Too many characters don't make your game better, well developed characters do.

Overall the writing in this game is just poor. It sounds like someone with no life experiences trying to emulate real life. The first thing that jumped out to me was when the Boss chewing MC out in the office. It's 100% not believable and not how real corporate BS meetings go down (at least here in America where I work).

 

[Jungles70]

I played a few minutes. Here's my thoughts.

Pros:
1. Isometric graphics of the map is refreshing
2. Amount of locations on map shows ability to create a believable world (at least physically)

Cons:
1. Writing is poor - (more later)
2. Proportions of women is off - Kim Kardashian's ass is not a good indicator of a good hot body. Go look at the Olympics athletes in Tokyo if you want to see what perfect female asses should look like. Kim's ass is all fat and plastic surgery, which is gross. It's not natural. Go to reddit /r/gonewild if you still can't figure out. There's no excuse for not knowing what a shapely ass should look like)

Writing is the core of any narrative driven game experiences, such as the ones here in h-games. There's a lot of issues with the writing in this game, I will list them in order of pressing matter.

1. Lack of characterization for wife, daughter, and husband - Who are they? What does wife do? What does daughter do? Where are they living? What kind of neighborhood is it? What does wife want in her life? Is she a homemaker (unemployed leecher)? Is daughter a student? Does she have a job? Does she have a boyfriend? What is wife scared of? What makes her happy? etc. etc. Learn how to do it:

You must be registered to see the links

. Google "How to write a good character"
2. Lack of real meaningful dialog between characters - Biggest examples being the conversation that the MC had with his wife when he told her "Hey babe, without asking you, I am going to have some stranger live in our house". You need more life experiences or watch more TV if you think the way you portrayed that conversation is how real people talk. It's completely bogus
3. Too many side characters - I don't give a shit about the neighbor when you can't even get the 4 characters you have correct: MC, wife, daughter, and Marketing Consultant. Too many characters don't make your game better, well developed characters do.

Overall the writing in this game is just poor. It sounds like someone with no life experiences trying to emulate real life. The first thing that jumped out to me was when the Boss chewing MC out in the office. It's 100% not believable and not how real corporate BS meetings go down (at least here in America where I work).

 

[killa_b]

Hi all. Can someone please tell me how to access the gallery? I used the code 50315 in one of the rooms but nothing happens. I'm at the beginning after Laura cleans the house. Thanks.

Edit: Nevermind!

 

[ELFAMOSOJOSE2049]

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viejo amigo has jugado las verciones anteriores?..
quizas eso te explique todo

 

[jonikage]

We need a hero. I tried to subscribe to the subscribestar, but when I tried to pay, I got the error "This card is declined. Error code 0674.". I've already tried 2 cards and I'm tired of waiting for breaks of 15 minutes after unsuccessful attempts.

 

[Alexxx888]

The game should be renamed ‘Dumb and Dumber.’

 

[Obranyi]

We need a hero. I tried to subscribe to the subscribestar, but when I tried to pay, I got the error "This card is declined. Error code 0674.". I've already tried 2 cards and I'm tired of waiting for breaks of 15 minutes after unsuccessful attempts.

Subscribestar have issues with cards that's true, try Patreon.

 

[jonikage]

Subscribestar have issues with cards that's true, try Patreon.

The problem is that on Patreon a post costs $25, while on Star a post starts at $2. I tried to choose a subscription for 5 dollars, because for me this is an acceptable amount, but I could not make the payment. On Patreon he needs to update the cost of the post and then it will be ok.

 

[Obranyi]

The problem is that on Patreon a post costs $25, while on Star a post starts at $2. I tried to choose a subscription for 5 dollars, because for me this is an acceptable amount, but I could not make the payment. On Patreon he needs to update the cost of the post and then it will be ok.

You can access post now being VIP Patron, it's not 25 bucks.

 

[sekoso6]

The game should be renamed ‘Dumb and Dumber.’ The Special update is View attachment 4430010

could you elaborate ? im curious

 

[jkgsokdsoadpas]

somebody post the new christmas special

 

[Rorikstead]

The problem is that on Patreon a post costs $25, while on Star a post starts at $2. I tried to choose a subscription for 5 dollars, because for me this is an acceptable amount, but I could not make the payment. On Patreon he needs to update the cost of the post and then it will be ok.

Don't bother yourself with that, it's intentionally confusing. Most of the posts are locked behind tier 3 subscription and above .

 

[fisquinhox2]

we need heroes

 

[casanovasex]

i love this game many thx!!!!!!!

 

[whiteanu]

When will the Christmas special be shared publicly?

 

[phantom_done]

LIS Special

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[Xiba21]

question how can this have ntr when we play as a female protag who the fuck cares who the bf bangs and that is if she has one tbh

 

[Wolbachia]

Ah, yes. A plenty of time without releasing a update, to waste the time working in a non-canon special that is not very good.
I bet you developer gonna release another special before the actual update of the main game.

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

Ah, yes. A plenty of time without releasing a update, to waste the time working in a non-canon special that is not very good.
I bet you developer gonna release another special before the actual update of the main game.

He just released a normal update just a little over 3 months ago.... and before that the same amount of time and before that, the same amount of time... Dev is much better than 95% of most devs around these parts...

 

[T ☯ K Y ☯]

Honestly, I think it's much better to invest time and resources focusing on the main campaign rather than on side stories. The previous Christmas special was just okay, and this one that was released now managed to be worse than the last one. But anyway, if he's still releasing this type of content, it's because the people supporting him want it to continue.