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Congratulations, you have created a perfect game. The characters are beautiful, the main character is not only handsome but also smart. Finally in a game we have an opponent to compete with our minds without punching. Also in the future I think we will see our biological family, possibly school owners.
The Miranda character is a great touch to the game and I hope we get to interact with her more.
And most importantly, please don't end the episodes like this again, it's not a series, it's a game, it almost got on my nerves.
The Miranda character is a great touch to the game and I hope we get to interact with her more.
And most importantly, please don't end the episodes like this again, it's not a series, it's a game, it almost got on my nerves.
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Nice game. Definitely has potential
Ps: Just that this is the first game I came across where 0x52 doesn't work for the choices
Edit: After playing some more, the game is awesome and I am loving it.
Kudos to the Dev!
Ps: Just that this is the first game I came across where 0x52 doesn't work for the choices
Edit: After playing some more, the game is awesome and I am loving it.
Kudos to the Dev!
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Intro with LI talking to "player" not the character (not on black background)
cant skip even if you choose the options that you understand how clicking your mouse works
dream sequence at start to show off sexual animation quality without "sacrificing" romantic buildup
I know I am just a douche (ignore the fact that the game is still open and im planning to finish this update) but that intro is literally one step (the black intro screen) away from being the most generic intro you can do..... combine that with the insulting tone here and it does not paint a good picture. Like the other person said the "graphic" talent is clearly there but when the first few minutes of your game are literally from the "avn intro textbook section A" and then you try to say "uhm no you didnt read the whole thing douche" Sure you could have an amazingly written story tucked away behind the most generic possible intro but why not apply any of that amazing wirrting to the intro? Its not even a parody of those types of intros its literally just one of them complete with a "joke" advertising your other game.
also is it even an insult to say something is unoriginal? The most financially successful AVNS are pretty unoriginal (gods chosen mc, never fails, gets all the girls without issue, huge dick, they want harem etc), and that extends to pretty much any entertainment which makes more money an arthouse film that someone worked on with nothing but passion or a marvel crossover movie that people worked on with nothing but vfx crunch? A marvel crossover trying to claim its an arthouse movie? Well that isnt going to please any side now is it?
Good thing this is an AVN and coomers will pay as long as they get visually pleasing tiddies
cant skip even if you choose the options that you understand how clicking your mouse works
dream sequence at start to show off sexual animation quality without "sacrificing" romantic buildup
I know I am just a douche (ignore the fact that the game is still open and im planning to finish this update) but that intro is literally one step (the black intro screen) away from being the most generic intro you can do..... combine that with the insulting tone here and it does not paint a good picture. Like the other person said the "graphic" talent is clearly there but when the first few minutes of your game are literally from the "avn intro textbook section A" and then you try to say "uhm no you didnt read the whole thing douche" Sure you could have an amazingly written story tucked away behind the most generic possible intro but why not apply any of that amazing wirrting to the intro? Its not even a parody of those types of intros its literally just one of them complete with a "joke" advertising your other game.
also is it even an insult to say something is unoriginal? The most financially successful AVNS are pretty unoriginal (gods chosen mc, never fails, gets all the girls without issue, huge dick, they want harem etc), and that extends to pretty much any entertainment which makes more money an arthouse film that someone worked on with nothing but passion or a marvel crossover movie that people worked on with nothing but vfx crunch? A marvel crossover trying to claim its an arthouse movie? Well that isnt going to please any side now is it?
Good thing this is an AVN and coomers will pay as long as they get visually pleasing tiddies
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if you don't want to play games then wtf are you doing here then?
anyways use universal renpy gallery unlocker.
Enjoying the avn so far, the models are mostly beautiful and the renders are looking good, the humour fits for me too.
The only thing i dislike is the "bullying", it feels so out of place at a law college or a college in general, these girls behave like they are 12 year olds (it gets even called out in the avn), it doesnt make any sense.
And a picture of a kiss is the lamest blackmail attempt i ever heard of
But so far great start, i hope it doesnt end like the entrepreneur.
And stop being dramaqueens and give the dev some slack, hes not the worst guy alive just because he called a annoying f95 whiner a loser, get some grip, devs are only humans and there are so many annoying crybabies here.
The only thing i dislike is the "bullying", it feels so out of place at a law college or a college in general, these girls behave like they are 12 year olds (it gets even called out in the avn), it doesnt make any sense.
And a picture of a kiss is the lamest blackmail attempt i ever heard of
But so far great start, i hope it doesnt end like the entrepreneur.
And stop being dramaqueens and give the dev some slack, hes not the worst guy alive just because he called a annoying f95 whiner a loser, get some grip, devs are only humans and there are so many annoying crybabies here.
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- How can you prove it is the girls bathroom?And a picture of a kiss is the lamest blackmail attempt i ever heard of
- MC is the one pressed up against the wall.
Add these together and it looks like she is the aggressor.
I know he's a first year, but... c'mon. Dude wants to be the best but can't get himself out of that?
Good game otherwise, but that plotline has me rolling my eyes.
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Yup, and too easy to be manipulated I think being a Lawyer is not his strong suit.
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I liked the first episode and it was quite lengthy for a first release which surprised me in a good way. I realize this being more dialogue heavy than your typical VN might not be the cup of tea for everyone but I enjoyed every moment. The characters are very well written and the group dynamic is intriguing. The chemistry between them is also great even between the so called antagonists so that's a plus for me because they do not feel uni-dimensional.
As for LIs I have to say there are quite too many. I feel like Aurora, Rose,Elsa and Taylor are the best so far. The rest have a long way to catch up to these 4. I hope to see a nice redemption arc for Aurora because she seems the most interesting in my eyes. The renders are top notch, the attention to detail is consistent through the episode, the phone mechanic was very intuitive and free roams sections were simple enough to not be annoying and not so many so they did not feel like they were a chore, so that's another plus.
For a first release I have to say I'm impressed, it took me about 4-5 hours to reach the end and it was so good that I finished it in one sitting which is very rare nowadays. That speaks volumes about the quality of dialogue and the care that was put into making this. The dev took the best things that made Entrepreneur so enjoyable and brought them a new layer into this one. Hopefully we will see better ending epilogues at the end of the project because that was the weakest part of the last game (but that's a long way ahead so no worries about that for now).
I will follow this new project with interest and good luck MisterMaya and hope we say another project brought to the end.
As for LIs I have to say there are quite too many. I feel like Aurora, Rose,Elsa and Taylor are the best so far. The rest have a long way to catch up to these 4. I hope to see a nice redemption arc for Aurora because she seems the most interesting in my eyes. The renders are top notch, the attention to detail is consistent through the episode, the phone mechanic was very intuitive and free roams sections were simple enough to not be annoying and not so many so they did not feel like they were a chore, so that's another plus.
For a first release I have to say I'm impressed, it took me about 4-5 hours to reach the end and it was so good that I finished it in one sitting which is very rare nowadays. That speaks volumes about the quality of dialogue and the care that was put into making this. The dev took the best things that made Entrepreneur so enjoyable and brought them a new layer into this one. Hopefully we will see better ending epilogues at the end of the project because that was the weakest part of the last game (but that's a long way ahead so no worries about that for now).
I will follow this new project with interest and good luck MisterMaya and hope we say another project brought to the end.