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https://f95zone.to/threads/law-school-ep-1-mistermaya.184252/post-13949026My small criticism is that for a game that said it upfront about the two types of choices that would shape the MC, there are quite a lot of times where it's unclear which choice is which type. While it can be great to play blindly (therefore allowing my MC to be shaped really by "my choice"), it's frustrating when I want to have the opposite path MC. If it's important design to hide these choices, IMO it's best for the game to come with gallery unlocked.
For a broader general criticism, I'm not a big fan when college games have too many male characters just because I always feel like the bro scenes would take away development time that could've been used on building the female characters instead. This is a little bit amplified in this game where they forced a main group and they consist of 3 guys and 2 girls, the closest friend outside the group is a guy, and the rival is another guy too. This relegated the other girls to mostly interact individually with MC which is kind of a shame because it would've been nice for a game with good overall female cast to interact more as a group.
The game is still good and definitely worth to keep an eye on. Hopefully it will only get better as we go.
unless spends small fortune on daz asset packs or is really good with modifying assets then that can happen.Brother, it's 2024 and MisterMaya is an experienced developer, so why do girls look alike as if they were born from the same mother?
And most of the models have already been used many times
Gotta agree with that. MC doesn't look imposing enough for the frame that he is suppose to have. He gives Rose the nickname of "shrimp" but her head clears his shoulders more often than not.As I said, I'm invested in your story and I appreciate your work. That doesn't stop me from promoting more accuracy in projecting a strong main character (which is what I think you intend). Man, I just wanted to back that bitch the hell up so bad... Jus' Sayin'
I agree and my conclusion is that this avn is supposed to be very light-hearted. The conflicts or drama like the scene you mentioned with the prof spanking the libarian and forgetting to close the library and having the nerve to scold the mc about it or the weird blackmail attempt with the kiss picture ...Come on, MisterMaya. I love your writing for the most part and I'm invested in your story but... That tongue lashing Professor Caroline subjects the MC to over her own indiscretion? Give our MC a spine, dude! Yeah, I get it. He's still just an 18 yr old kid and she's a sophisticated dominatrix who likes spankin' the librarian's bare ass in public... Bullcrap! He's supposed to be smart. He's 6' 4" and she's 5 foot nuthin'. Oh, yeah... Some of the renders are believable... too many are not. People 6' 4" tall tower over 98% of the rest of the human race (whether they wear stripper heels or not) and are even more intimidating when they have a large athletic build.
As I said, I'm invested in your story and I appreciate your work. That doesn't stop me from promoting more accuracy in projecting a strong main character (which is what I think you intend). Man, I just wanted to back that bitch the hell up so bad... Jus' Sayin'
Yeah... Well, you may be correct. There is a lot of "law and order" goin' on so, maybe some of the buffoonery is meant to lighten the air. Still, IRL, Caroline comes at me like that only to find out the true meaning of "make you my bitch". Jus' Sayin'I agree and my conclusion is that this avn is supposed to be very light-hearted. The conflicts or drama like the scene you mentioned with the prof spanking the libarian and forgetting to close the library and having the nerve to scold the mc about it or the weird blackmail attempt with the kiss picture ...
I dont think were supposed to take this stuff too seriously, its just some goofy fun imo and its fine like that if there arent huge and dire consequences for these "plots". The MC being so overly worried about being able to study at the library at late hours or running back to the reception because he cant stand sharing a room with such a horrific bully girl who laughed about the teddy is a similar thing lmao.
Its kinda switching a bit back an forth between serious and super goofy.
But i enjoyed it so far.
google/whatever helps on those.some walktrough would be apreciate,some mini games have actual law based questions,hell we all can answer some of them but not all and they unlock special renders and is annoying to google stuff about those questions
other than that,the game seams nice and hope it will get updates and not another abandoned good game
Bella is at the library, therefore he has excellent priorities. Wait, wrong gameIt's crazy how it seems like the main character in this game is more interested in gaining access to the library after-hours, than he is in the women in the game.
I loved MrMaya's previous game, especially the sweet and gorgeous LIs there, but here, I have to agree. Never understood the appeal in public sex in reality, what would that be ?? And why bitch about it and try to make ridiculous excuses if you get caught ?? If someone gets excited soo much by doing it outdoors, they should be just as excited when having to deal with the consequences of their stupid decisions. Ridiculous and plain stupid.That tongue lashing Professor Caroline subjects the MC to over her own indiscretion? Give our MC a spine, dude! Yeah, I get it. He's still just an 18 yr old kid and she's a sophisticated dominatrix who likes spankin' the librarian's bare ass in public
Same here, bro'. Love the story, but all the potential mistress-dominatrix vibe she gave off pissed me off a lil, cuz every reasonable man with a decently-sized dick in his pants would've reminded that bitch that HE is in charge and that she should check her tone when threatening him to his face. I'm not surprised the librarian turned out to be a sub, but I don't know why I'm suspecting she's only submissive with the bitchy professor, not with the MC.I just wanted to back that bitch the hell up so bad... Jus' Sayin
Wouldn't be surprised if that turned out to be true, but I'm suspecting the current college owner is his bio dad.Hopefully MC's real parents aren't part of a mafia or something and ruin my favorite part of the AVN.
Lol, those are not OP character traits man, they're just a few traits a lot of real persons have making the MC sound and act realistic, something that's severely lacking in adult games for whatever reasons. We don't have enough information so far to say this with certainty, but I don't think Mike's too OP either. And the MC does have flaws, the fact that he's adopted is still a delicate subject for him, the rest, hopefully not too many, remain to be seen in the next updates.MC does feel too OP tho: handsome, intelligent, kind, charismatic, etc - hopefully we would notice some of his flaws soon. A perfect MC is boring imo.
Do they supply the MC with pasta and endless bread sticks?Excellent first chapter and the ending was a great cliffhanger. I'm definitely hooked enough to await the next release. I loved the grounded aspect of the portrayal of a college. You don't see that in AVNs often. Hopefully MC's real parents aren't part of a mafia or something and ruin my favorite part of the AVN. The LIs are all being fleshed out at a healthy pace. The only ones that I would say that I truly disliked were Andrea and Jessica but I suspect that Andrea would have her own growth. The MC is such a nerd and I'm all for it. It's not a common archetype among AVNs (unless if he's a creep at the same time). MC does feel too OP tho: handsome, intelligent, kind, charismatic, etc - hopefully we would notice some of his flaws soon. A perfect MC is boring imo.
Only two criticisms: 1. Olive Garden is such a silly name lmao. 2. The game mentions that the MC can be altruistic or selfish, but the choices aren't obvious in this matter. Perhaps, the choices could be marked and there could be an option to toggle the visibility of these markings.
While I can understand your point, I have to say that it's isn't an accurate portrayal of MC. You're right that he's smart, but it's exactly because he's smart that he knows that it isn't in his best interest to start conflict with a professor. Yes, he has the advantage, but he doesn't need the win because the professor is not his enemy. Fighting would only lead to both sides suffering losses. Yes, he's bigger than her, but bullying is something that he doesn't do. The interaction has nothing to do with him being 18 and her being a dominatrix. He didn't fight back because there's no reason to fight. It's much more beneficial for them to work together. Professor got to keep her secret, MC got the professor's support on obtaining key to the library.Come on, MisterMaya. I love your writing for the most part and I'm invested in your story but... That tongue lashing Professor Caroline subjects the MC to over her own indiscretion? Give our MC a spine, dude! Yeah, I get it. He's still just an 18 yr old kid and she's a sophisticated dominatrix who likes spankin' the librarian's bare ass in public... Bullcrap! He's supposed to be smart. He's 6' 4" and she's 5 foot nuthin'. Oh, yeah... Some of the renders are believable... too many are not. People 6' 4" tall tower over 98% of the rest of the human race (whether they wear stripper heels or not) and are even more intimidating when they have a large athletic build.
As I said, I'm invested in your story and I appreciate your work. That doesn't stop me from promoting more accuracy in projecting a strong main character (which is what I think you intend). Man, I just wanted to back that bitch the hell up so bad... Jus' Sayin'
Spoken like a true pacifist. I don't mean that derogatorily. It's just different from my taste. I didn't say anything about fighting and the age difference and lack of professionalism along with her demonstrated sexual proclivities has everything to do with everything. This story is about a charismatic young lad with a talent for argument and persuasion. My argument is simply that passivity (in this particular conversation) does not suit the character. IMO. Wouldn't it have been better if the Prof had acted reasonably rather than coming at an 18 year old with sexual innuendo, barely veiled humiliating and condescending attitude and top it off with an actual threat?While I can understand your point, I have to say that it's isn't an accurate portrayal of MC. You're right that he's smart, but it's exactly because he's smart that he knows that it isn't in his best interest to start conflict with a professor. Yes, he has the advantage, but he doesn't need the win because the professor is not his enemy. Fighting would only lead to both sides suffering losses. Yes, he's bigger than her, but bullying is something that he doesn't do. The interaction has nothing to do with him being 18 and her being a dominatrix. He didn't fight back because there's no reason to fight. It's much more beneficial for them to work together. Professor got to keep her secret, MC got the professor's support on obtaining key to the library.
If you're looking for an aggressive MC, I don't think this game is it.