VN Ren'Py Abandoned Laws of Love [v0.1] [TaleWizz]

[dolfe67]

I think grammar receives more hate than NTR nowadays.
And this is why i usually dont like narrators on games, here the narrator actually blocks the view, this is the perfect example of "show, dont tell", and maybe the player doenst have the same opinion.
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That preview is ridiculous. Such a censored view indeed

 

[AlBetGam]

I know this is a minor gripe but then again I'm a guy who watched the first X-Files movie and decided that this is completely unrealistic since Mulder didn't have a wool cap on in the Antarctic.

That's perfectly realistic because if there's one thing watching the show taught me, it's that Fox Mulder has precisely zero self-preservation instincts.

 

[CoffeeSaint]

I think grammar receives more hate than NTR nowadays.

I second you on that, Mr. Kond.
peeps who [in the recent past] used to scream with all their guts and glory (and rectums) against Normal Trade Relations became a bit more forbearing;
nowadays they just go with a blunt "Yikes" — or even a humble "Meh" — instead of pages and pages of contumacious and aggressive arguments and questionable compliments about others' relatives.
National Trauma Registry might have become an acceptable kink; Grammar (or the lack of it) is a totally different matter: it is really infuriating.



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cheers.

 

[Dr Secz]

Haven't try it yet. Looking from this point of view I hope it's something new, excited and refreshing.

 

[BarbarrossaNA]

Decent effort.. nice girls and story. A proofreader to clean it up a bit would be a big plus. Not hating on the writing but just a bit lacking in the attention to detail.if you know what imean. Still a worthy body of work for a first release.

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Can you handle the highest levels of law....and love?​

Yes, For I Am The Love Lawyer,
They say Justice is blind. That may be true, but she is horny as fuck, I tell ya!

Bad reviews be Dammed. I just see for myself.

Post comment... comment Yeah, It's as bad as they say. Spelling, grammar, and copied story.

Damn you, lady Justice

 

[BaasB]

Yes, For I Am The Love Lawyer,
They say Justice is blind. That may be true, but she is horny as fuck, I tell ya!

Bad reviews be Dammed. I just see for myself.

Snowflakes Reviews

 

[Ashen Bunny]

I don't know the degree of plagiarism since I have played none of those games, but in this website there are tons of examples of ripoff games, fan-made games, developers stealing each other's stories, games made with real porn, games made with AI... I haven't seen anyone giving them 1 stars for this reason.

I don't think it's morally right to steal other people's creative work but... Does this gentleman really deserve a 1 star after his hard work with those stunning renders? Maybe a little encouragement would steer him into creating more original work in the next update, he certainly looks capable to me...

 

[BangB420]

IDGAF WHO COPIES WHO! GIVE ME TITTY AND ME HAPPY!

 

[ghosthog]

I don't know the degree of plagiarism since I have played none of those games, but in this website there are tons of examples of ripoff games, fan-made games, developers stealing each other's stories, games made with real porn, games made with AI...

It's 99.5 % copied directly. -.5 for spelling/grammar errors during the copy. And yea I get a lot of stories here are based off other works, but with this much it should at least be labelled a fan made remake and give credit to the original.

 

[Ashen Bunny]

It's 99.5 % copied directly. -.5 for spelling/grammar errors during the copy. And yea I get a lot of stories here are based off other works, but with this much it should at least be labelled a fan made remake and give credit to the original.

That cracked me up

I agree, he should credit the original in here and on his Patreon

 

[RPDL]

Do the patreon and itch links go to the original work or the plagiarism?

 

[Before I Forget]

In dev's defense it's not exactly the same, is just 100% similar

Is it possible that it's the same Dev just under a different name? It happens all the time.

 

[ghosthog]

Is it possible that it's the same Dev just under a different name? It happens all the time.

If that's the case, the dev doesn't know how to copy/paste even, so guessing not.

 

[SecretSal]

Damn... leaving the fugly default Renpy textbox in place, not having a textbox opacity slider, AND having code that conflicts with the Penfold patch? That's a paddlin'. And yes, it seems like a very stripped down version of Laws of Attraction, but that's a whole other can of worms.

 

[Before I Forget]

If that's the case, the dev doesn't know how to copy/paste even, so guessing not.

Is the OG Dev still active?

 

[Rasturac]

Laws of Love
you say,

well,
time to fuck the Law

Joking aside it's short but looks ok and could be interesting.
I do like MC's hairstyle , however it's not typical for a lawyer,
it would be cooler if he was more like Patrick Bateman .

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Snowflakes Reviews

After playing, they've got a point, spelling, grammar, and copied from another game. (not sure about that one.) But quite a few have mentioned it.
Is the DEV active here?

 

[BaasB]

After playing, they've got a point, spelling, grammar, and copied from another game. (not sure about that one.) But quite a few have mentioned it.
Is the DEV active here?

Nope

 

[Aristos]

If I were a native English speaker, I'd want to throw my laptop out of the window and gouge my eyes out with a butter spoon after seeing those preview renders. Apart from some machine-translated Japanese games, I've never seen any worse Engrish in my whole F95 porn adventure.