VN Ren'Py Leaving DNA [Ep. 4.3a] [Impious Monk]

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Canto Forte

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The victim of attempted rape - threatened with violence asks MC,
who is a victim of stabbing and attempted murder
(the intent is murder as audibly ordered by the gangster boss)
to NOT REPORT THE INCIDENT AND BASICALLY DO NOTHING.
Doobiedoobiedoooo said:
I came looking for a reason the basketball court scene makes no sense
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That scene made no sense from the get go, from anybody”s career point of view:
prosecutors are politicians who need to stand up to gansters, or else.
Assitent attorneys are lesser politicians, but they still cannot afford to be literally
stabbed and bullied, almost murdered by gangsters looking to threaten/rape
public deffenders. The other friend playing basketball was a for proffit lawyer,
who did absolutely nothing ... basically obliging to the request from the
public deffender to not call anyone: no cops/no FBI/no rival gang/no hospital/no swat.

There is a huge disconnect about MC looking to tomb raid cold cases turned to dust,
while, at the same time, sweeping under the rug of not only himself,
but that of a public deffender and a high profile lawyer,
actual currently taking place bullying+stabbing+beat downs+attempted murder
and attempted rape both running rampant on the streets. What good are any of those
careers if they do absolutely fkking nothing about any of that?

If it gets out he or any of the other victims of that beat down+stabbing+attempted murder
and attempted rape are as good as gone from their careers,
they covered up all those crimes and their crediblity is in shambles.
 
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Doobiedoobiedoooo

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Canto Forte said:
The victim of attempted rape - threatened with violence asks MC,
who is a victim of stabbing and attempted murder
(the intent is murder as audibly ordered by the gangster boss)
to NOT REPORT THE INCIDENT AND BASICALLY DO NOTHING.


That scene made no sense from the get go, anybody”s career point of view:
prosecutors are politicians who need to stand up to gansters, or else.
Assitent attorneys are lesser politicians, but they still cannot afford to be literally
stabbed and bullied, almost murdered by gansters looking to threaten/rape
public deffenders. The other friend playing basketball was a for proffit lawyer,
who did absolutely nothing ... basically obliging to the request from the
public deffender to not call anyone: no cops/no FBI/no rival gang/no hospital/no swat.

There is a huge disconnect about MC looking to tomb raider cold cases turned to dust,
while, at the same time, sweeping actual attempted murder and attempted rape on the streets
under the rug of not only himself, but that of a public deffender and a high profile lawyer.

If it gets out he or any of the other victims ob that beat down/stabbing/attempted murder/attempted rape
are as good as gone from their careers, they covered up all those crimes and their crediblity is in shambles.
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Would've been a good spot for a choice when they hear the screams and one says something like "Those guys!" and the other says something to the effect of "That girl!"

One choice could be to have the friend hang back and call 911 while you delay whatever's happening.

I don't get a school teacher running away like a little girl because you greeted her with "Hey." It's not like he pulled the leg of his shorts up and wiggled it at her.
 
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Doobiedoobiedoooo

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Kassandara said:
So let's say you don't get into the investigation, what is the point of the story then? :WaitWhat:
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You want me to write this guy out of a heinous story idea? MC keeps tabs on the case through the lieutenant as a side story to a main story that an ADA might experience.

Boom. Done.

Wanna get a little Hollywood cliché? Something the ADA is working on in the main story ends up looping around and connecting with the case the ex is working on. Ends up having to see the ex more and he's not following her around like a loser.

This also avoids a scene where a lieutenant in Homicide walks into the office of an ADA who's not prosecuting the case and dumps a file box full of evidence from an active investigation on his desk.
 
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Jericho85

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Doobiedoobiedoooo said:
You want me to write this guy out of a heinous story idea? MC keeps tabs on the case through the lieutenant as a side story to a main story that an ADA might experience.

Boom. Done.

Wanna get a little Hollywood cliché? Something the ADA is working on in the main story ends up looping around and connecting with the case the ex is working on. Ends up having to see the ex more and he's not following her around like a loser.

This also avoids a scene where a lieutenant in Homicide walks into the office of an ADA who's not prosecuting the case and dumps a file box full of evidence from an active investigation on his desk.
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Nah, I feel like if there was a choice whether or not to join the investigation, then choosing "No" should lead to a short humorous non-canonical game over. Like the darkest timeline where the MC slips on a banana peel which leads into a series of unfortunate events and ends with the whole building exploding. GAME OVER! You should have picked "YES!".


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Jericho85 said:
Nah, I feel like if there was a choice whether or not to join the investigation, then choosing "No" should lead to a short humorous non-canonical game over. Like the darkest timeline where the MC slips on a banana peel which leads into a series of unfortunate events and ends with the whole building exploding. GAME OVER! You should have picked "YES!".


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I'll take it! I'd rather blow up in a building than follow an ex around like a wounded puppy.

I saved and closed when the evidence hit the desk. Figured I'd play something else for a while and think about whether to continue or delete.
 
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Doobiedoobiedoooo said:
I'll take it! I'd rather blow up in a building than follow an ex around like a wounded puppy.

I saved and closed when the evidence hit the desk. Figured I'd play something else for a while and think about whether to continue or delete.
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Something tells me that you let her drive in your playthrough...

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Doobiedoobiedoooo said:
I don't get it. You were trying to tell a joke at my expense, right?
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Things are different with Aghavni if you choose to drive instead of letting her drive in EP1. She likes the MC to be assertive and take control. I only assume that because you characterized the MC as "following his ex like a wounded puppy" that you chose differently.
 
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Jericho85 said:
Things are different with Aghavni if you choose to drive instead of letting her drive in EP1. She likes the MC to be assertive and take control. I only assume that because you characterized the MC as "following his ex like a wounded puppy" that you chose differently.
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Oh, okay. I didn't get that far. I saved and closed when the evidence hit MC's desk. Right after MC begged in on the investigation. Begging in on the investigation is what I was characterizing as him following his ex around like a wounded puppy.
 
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Made a compressed Android port of Leaving DNA Episode 2 with the walkthrough mod.

Got some basic gestures loaded in: swipe up for save menu, swipe down to hide UI, swipe left to rollback and swipe right to skip.

Please let me know if you encounter any issues with the port and I'll see what I can do to get them sorted.

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Ah, already split up in opposing factions. Ima compromise here and say I am team ctrl-skip previoulsy read content see all of the ladies! After having the first playthrough focused on Jamie though.

And now time to
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Ah, all so very intriguing. Really great work Impious Monk. I am totally digging this AVN.

On a not so serious side note: With all of the AVNs where the fathers die, this one here sure has a high mother bodycount.
MC's mother, the alleged sister's mother, the foster mom, Jimena. The evil dev even killed a puppy!!!!!
 
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Kitchentable said:
Ah, already split up in opposing factions. Ima compromise here and say I am team ctrl-skip previoulsy read content see all of the ladies! After having the first playthrough focused on Jamie though.

And now time to
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Ah, all so very intriguing. Really great work Impious Monk. I am totally digging this AVN.

On a not so serious side note: With all of the AVNs where the fathers die, this one here sure has a high mother bodycount.
MC's mother, the alleged sister's mother, the foster mom, Jimena. The evil dev even killed a puppy!!!!!
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Gunna go out on a limb an say The present-time hitman is Jimena and Andras's son
 
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The quality of renders and animations keeps getting better and better in modern games. This game is one of the best on this front. Both Aghavni and Jamie are *chef's kiss*, the MC is great, too, the two new LI's are a bit vanilla-looking, but still good.

Plus, it knows Black people aren't uniformly brown all over. Another point scored.

I like the plot, too. I think the mysterious voice directing the hitman is the dad, who's also behind the rest of the fatal beatdowns. But I think the biggest plot twist is going to be Armin, who's totally lying about being Armenian.
 
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Updated my LDNA Fan Signatures with the recently introduced...

Malena
300 x 124 px / 0,82 MB (Gorse)

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LINK: https://attachments.f95zone.to/2023/07/2817226_LDNAsiG4.gif


Get her for your personal signature... she's a darned hot & buff latina (do I need to say more ?!) :sneaky:​

-> My fan sigs of all four main LIs in LDNA can be found . . . h e r e.

-> Additionally, all fan sigs (incl. the nice original sigs made by Impious Monk) are collected in the OP.

So make them yours and support this great game!


[ Impious Monk: feel free to add my Malena Fan Sig to the collection in the OP. And thanks for the great update! ]
 
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