I don't remember seeing his bedroom though. However Clay didn't seem like a character who would stay down, even with an illness (unless it really would make him unable to stand).
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- Mar 13, 2021
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Honestly, I think the opposite. The "double-twisters" are the ones who don't show intelligence, bro.
This is a whole generation totally twisted and damaged by all this twisting plot crap, grown up with this soap operas' tropes shit.
They have no clue of what good literature and fiction is.
- Dec 8, 2024
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This cannot be a serious comment?
Plot twists have existed in popular literature since, at least, as early as Oedipus Rex finding out that he'd married his Mother.
Alfred Hitchcock used one in his film adaptation of the Winston Graham novel, Marnie, in the 60's.
There have been too many to count, in literature, including classics such as Jane Eyre.
When you say "this whole generation", I presume you're not referring to Generation Alpha - which is "this" generation - or Beta.
Even if we take Generation Z out of the equation, you're still casting a pretty wide & uninformed net when you make that statement.
The fact that you're bunching everyone who thought that there could be a double twist into whichever generation you're making your disparaging remark about, with zero knowledge to support that assumption, is pretty silly.
- Nov 18, 2018
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here's the thing tho, is it true?
We know there's this covert ops assassin guy running around interfering with things. Now we have the MC trying to find out if he's related to Hobbs, and if he is and it's discovered that Hobbs is alive, then the cops get to Hobbs and Avaro's son has a harder time killing him. So he messes with the DNA results, makes it look like the MC is related to one of the other Orcs (the other white one, making him the most plausible) and keeps the MC and the Cops from having direct evidence that Hobbs is Clay.
We know there's this covert ops assassin guy running around interfering with things. Now we have the MC trying to find out if he's related to Hobbs, and if he is and it's discovered that Hobbs is alive, then the cops get to Hobbs and Avaro's son has a harder time killing him. So he messes with the DNA results, makes it look like the MC is related to one of the other Orcs (the other white one, making him the most plausible) and keeps the MC and the Cops from having direct evidence that Hobbs is Clay.
- Apr 8, 2021
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Just finished Episode 4, and I have some thoughts.
First off, fuck you Impious Monk for making me feel things.
Second, fuck you Impious Monk for that bombshell at the end of the episode.
Third, fuck you Impious Monk for taking Jamie away just as Rockford realizes his feelings.
Fourth, fuck you Impious Monk. That was an amazing update, and I'm now the proud owner of a copy of Leaving DNA on Steam. Can't wait to see what comes next.
First off, fuck you Impious Monk for making me feel things.
Second, fuck you Impious Monk for that bombshell at the end of the episode.
Third, fuck you Impious Monk for taking Jamie away just as Rockford realizes his feelings.
Fourth, fuck you Impious Monk. That was an amazing update, and I'm now the proud owner of a copy of Leaving DNA on Steam. Can't wait to see what comes next.
- Apr 23, 2022
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Played the update.
What I liked:
1) That Rockford met Koch without Emmeline being present. She's got enough pain from him. But I'm kinda disappointed in Malena over the whole situation: why frequent a place where you sometimes meet the asshole who raped your friend? I wouldn't set my foot there if I were in her place.But I still want Koch to meet Valentine from Unbroken in the cage and get a career-ending concussion
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2) When Rockford finally snapped out of the whole "but I want my asshole Daddy!".
3) The Roger Smith character. That's IM's username on Reddit, so he's kinda an author avatar? A far cry from the tall, young Black guy from the first extra .
4) The plot twist. While I'm not interested in Em as a LI, I like her a lot as a character and a person, so to me, she actually works better as a sister: my Rockford won't have to grow too distant from her when he finally gets with Jamie. Also, while I never suspected Em to be MC's sister, I did strongly suspect Jamison to be his father early on, because c'mon, Rockford's a spitting image of him but younger. When he named Hobbs as MC's dad, I was very surprised, but my suspicions layed dormant. Now I'm very satisfied they were true after all. Also, mad respect to IM for sticking with the twist further down the road rather than simply make it a cheap cliffhanger.
5) The extra scene. I knew I couldn't trust Vega! Also, it sorta explains why Rockford won't have sexy dreams after that: they're gonna become nightmares!
Neutral:
1) Do Armin and Aghavni ever discuss the fact that they're both Armenians in the US?
2) Jamie (my fav; I know, I'm not original) apparently leaving for work. Well, I didn't see anything except the offer being made, because I fell onto the "Detached" path, but from what I've learned here, I'm disappointed; but mildly so. Rockford doesn't exactly give her any reason to think that their relationship's gonna progress any time soon, being obsessed with Solomon and all, and she's not the first or even the second person he goes for help to, so her leaving is justified. And I'll make sure to blueball my Rockford for as long as Monk wishes, because I'm not interested in the other MGs long-term anyway. So, while it's unfortunate, Jamie doesn't end up losing much in my case.
What I disliked:
1) Falling onto the "Detached" Path which I'll probably have to replay the whole game to get rid of. And I have to, because it killed my Jamie run. Being a Sigma focused on the grind is nice and all, but it's an AVN after all.
What I liked:
1) That Rockford met Koch without Emmeline being present. She's got enough pain from him. But I'm kinda disappointed in Malena over the whole situation: why frequent a place where you sometimes meet the asshole who raped your friend? I wouldn't set my foot there if I were in her place.
2) When Rockford finally snapped out of the whole "but I want my asshole Daddy!".
3) The Roger Smith character. That's IM's username on Reddit, so he's kinda an author avatar? A far cry from the tall, young Black guy from the first extra
.4) The plot twist. While I'm not interested in Em as a LI, I like her a lot as a character and a person, so to me, she actually works better as a sister: my Rockford won't have to grow too distant from her when he finally gets with Jamie. Also, while I never suspected Em to be MC's sister, I did strongly suspect Jamison to be his father early on, because c'mon, Rockford's a spitting image of him but younger. When he named Hobbs as MC's dad, I was very surprised, but my suspicions layed dormant. Now I'm very satisfied they were true after all.
Also, mad respect to IM for sticking with the twist further down the road rather than simply make it a cheap cliffhanger. 5) The extra scene. I knew I couldn't trust Vega
! Also, it sorta explains why Rockford won't have sexy dreams after that: they're gonna become nightmares! Neutral:
1) Do Armin and Aghavni ever discuss the fact that they're both Armenians in the US
?2) Jamie (my fav; I know, I'm not original) apparently leaving for work. Well, I didn't see anything except the offer being made, because I fell onto the "Detached" path, but from what I've learned here, I'm disappointed; but mildly so. Rockford doesn't exactly give her any reason to think that their relationship's gonna progress any time soon, being obsessed with Solomon and all, and she's not the first or even the second person he goes for help to, so her leaving is justified. And I'll make sure to blueball my Rockford for as long as Monk wishes, because I'm not interested in the other MGs long-term anyway. So, while it's unfortunate, Jamie doesn't end up losing much in my case.
What I disliked:
1) Falling onto the "Detached" Path which I'll probably have to replay the whole game to get rid of. And I have to, because it killed my Jamie run. Being a Sigma focused on the grind is nice and all, but it's an AVN after all.
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I think so far she "leaves" regardless of your path, atleast according to URM.
- Feb 8, 2019
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This is probably one of the most well written well-rounded stories I have ever read.
I am sincerely impressed some parts are really disturbing but once you get past that it's a really good story
I'm almost through the fourth chapter and I'm looking forward to continuing the journey
Well Done
I am sincerely impressed some parts are really disturbing but once you get past that it's a really good story
I'm almost through the fourth chapter and I'm looking forward to continuing the journey
Well Done
- Feb 19, 2021
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I just wanna say that I knew there was something fishy about the Em path. Glad I stayed a way that can of worms and focused on Jamie.