VN Ren'Py Abandoned Legend of the Red Falcon [v0.3.2] [Skeep]

[hyco2]

I have played it, and...

I liked it. Some coming of age, general boding is happening , and it seems, maybe different groups of interest or different paths to go?
The art is fine. The engrish is sometimes a bit distracting (said the german). Russian developer?

Of course there is critic: The mc seems a bit to naive sometimes, and the whole exposition is sometimes heavyhanded. I don't give a fuck. It has potential, and there is hope.

 

[♩♪♫ ŤЦ尺尺ØЛ ♫♪♩]

I liked it!:FeelsGoodMan: I always have a stange attraction to bizarre drawing styles!:tf:

 

[YelloOldFellows]

can you make this for mac os systems please too!

 

[bearclaw01234]

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ye should seriously learn what the word "bosom" refers to. Because in the game ye make it refer to a woman's vagina, when in fact a woman's bosom IS NOT her vagina. Bosom= Breasts. Nice idea of story, if a little weak.. but ye should do your homework on the lingo before ye use it for something that it isn't because as it stands- it makes ye look very foolish and unintelligent using words to refer to something that those words have NOTHING to with. LOL

 

[bas]

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ye should seriously learn what the word "bosom" refers to. Because in the game ye make it refer to a woman's vagina, when in fact a woman's bosom IS NOT her vagina. Bosom= Breasts. Nice idea of story, if a little weak.. but ye should do your homework on the lingo before ye use it for something that it isn't because as it stands- it makes ye look very foolish and unintelligent using words to refer to something that those words have NOTHING to with. LOL

Use the @ before a username to tag someone, and if you'd read the OP, you'd realize I didn't write this game, I just posted it.

But thanks for the helpful tutorial on how to keep myself from looking foolish. Good stuff.

 

[Jackblack55]

can you make this for mac os systems please too!

I can create game for mac os, but i can't guarantee its playability because I don`t have mac os

 

[bearclaw01234]

Fair Enough.

 

[Salius Ketman]

It's look interesting,but i'm don't be fan of harems.

 

[bloodxd]

It's look interesting,but i'm don't be fan of harems.

>harem
>incest family game
please be normal my m8

 

[Mystic7]

Wow looks interesting..
Gonna try it

 

[UpSized]

Oh hey another male protagonist with a cowl hiding his face and his harem.​

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This ought to be good

I think its so the people playing the game can easily self insert lol

 

[warbird]

i loved the story and i cant wait for the next update.

 

[Bagabagasenpai]

Yeah this game rocks! hope for continue too!

 

[Bloodxdd]

>harem
>incest family game
please be normal my m8

that's right

 

[YelloOldFellows]

I can create game for mac os, but i can't guarantee its playability because I don`t have mac os

Ok no prob don't waste your time on making a game that might not even work. And do what you do best, I hope your works in the future.

 

[thecardinal]

I enjoyed this 0.1, and had high hopes, but some of the art is traced.

 

[Hazard Zone]

Are the sex scenes animated? Or its only pictures

 

[Aoiru]

Is this a bug or this game still has no sound ?

 

[Crawdaddy]

Looks promising so far, however, as others have mentioned, the English translation needs some reworking. For example, the "Book of Summon" should probably either be "Book o Summoning" or, perhaps more poetically, "Book of Summons".

The word "bosom/busom" is used a lot for varying parts of the body. It usually refers to the chest area.

Lastly, art-wise, Arthur's face looks older than what he is supposed to be in-story, and his dick seems to change size between scenes.

 

[Drafox]

Abandoned?