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HTML Abandoned Lermose: McNiel Story [v0.1.2] [LeCreatore]

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mickster101

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Unavoidable NTR is an interesting hill to die on. I like NTR in games, as long as they are the results of specific actions. Is the story centered on the effects of this unavoidable NTR? That would be a plot device and understandable, but if not then I question the wisdom of this choice.

Most people will be cool if there is choice; without it, this page will be carpet-bombed by the anti-NTR crowd.
 
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darkblacklancer

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If I had a suggestion, and its up to you to decide what you want to do, I might move this from whatever 'game' engine you are moving to possibly twine/sugarcube. So far, it looks like everything you've done is something you can do in that rather than whatever you are using. To each their own though.
 
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the.creator

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Battymandingo said:
Yeah, Its like the other guy said before. I'll switch to the wife while she is jogging and it just goes to a white screen. I don't really know what else would trigger it, sorry. I've played as normal and triggered it earlier and later in the first month. It happened both times.

I don't know if this will help but in the console on both online and offline this error comes up:
TypeError: Cannot read properties of undefined (reading '')
at e.value (Place.js:25:47)
at Object.H.getCurrent (places.js:67:27)
at Object.callback (game.js:70:25)
at V (V.js:12:39)
at sa (react-dom.production.min.js:157:137)
at Vs (react-dom.production.min.js:267:460)
at Tl (react-dom.production.min.js:250:347)
at Pl (react-dom.production.min.js:250:278)
at Ol (react-dom.production.min.js:250:138)
at wl (react-dom.production.min.js:243:163)
cs @ react-dom.production.min.js:216
react-dom.production.min.js:123 Uncaught TypeError: Cannot read properties of undefined (reading '')
at e.value (Place.js:25:47)
at Object.H.getCurrent (places.js:67:27)
at Object.callback (game.js:70:25)
at V (V.js:12:39)
at sa (react-dom.production.min.js:157:137)
at Vs (react-dom.production.min.js:267:460)
at Tl (react-dom.production.min.js:250:347)
at Pl (react-dom.production.min.js:250:278)
at Ol (react-dom.production.min.js:250:138)
at wl (react-dom.production.min.js:243:163)
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that's perfect report, thank you
 
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the.creator

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rossbach451 said:
Unavoidable NTR is an interesting hill to die on. I like NTR in games, as long as they are the results of specific actions. Is the story centered on the effects of this unavoidable NTR? That would be a plot device and understandable, but if not then I question the wisdom of this choice.

Most people will be cool if there is choice; without it, this page will be carpet-bombed by the anti-NTR crowd.
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the game concept of this particular game is that main char will lost his wife's devotion not wanting it, just trying to fix his past solutions, so I think NTR is what it is
anyway thanks for opinion, will think about it.
 
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the.creator

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darkblacklancer said:
If I had a suggestion, and its up to you to decide what you want to do, I might move this from whatever 'game' engine you are moving to possibly twine/sugarcube. So far, it looks like everything you've done is something you can do in that rather than whatever you are using. To each their own though.
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Thanks for the opinion!
twine is not for me, it can't do some stuff that I need to (or it's on pure JS which is not for me), so I choose to make my own engine on React. After several of changes and bug reports it would be better I hope
 
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Airain07

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Sep 7, 2020
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So
i win 20dollar per day, i got 30 day before need to pay the owner, i need 50 dollar to advance in the storyline and for my wife work. But she dont give money so...Its impossible for me, very reptitive gameplay. Nothing to do , exept go to work, chat with your wife, again and again.
you need 50 relationship for have sexe or something, you can raise this by only 2 by day ...

i miss the game or the game its missed?
 
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xort

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rossbach451 said:
Unavoidable NTR is an interesting hill to die on. I like NTR in games, as long as they are the results of specific actions. Is the story centered on the effects of this unavoidable NTR? That would be a plot device and understandable, but if not then I question the wisdom of this choice.
Most people will be cool if there is choice; without it, this page will be carpet-bombed by the anti-NTR crowd.
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Having a thought here but if the NTR is avoidable is it actually NTR or just sharing? I mean like as a 4th wall break taking the perspective of the player?
With that said I need to consult with David Cage and talk about our new game that explores the relation between a player and a game.
 
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the.creator

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Battymandingo said:
Yeah, Its like the other guy said before. I'll switch to the wife while she is jogging and it just goes to a white screen. I don't really know what else would trigger it, sorry. I've played as normal and triggered it earlier and later in the first month. It happened both times.

I don't know if this will help but in the console on both online and offline this error comes up:
TypeError: Cannot read properties of undefined (reading '')
at e.value (Place.js:25:47)
at Object.H.getCurrent (places.js:67:27)
at Object.callback (game.js:70:25)
at V (V.js:12:39)
at sa (react-dom.production.min.js:157:137)
at Vs (react-dom.production.min.js:267:460)
at Tl (react-dom.production.min.js:250:347)
at Pl (react-dom.production.min.js:250:278)
at Ol (react-dom.production.min.js:250:138)
at wl (react-dom.production.min.js:243:163)
cs @ react-dom.production.min.js:216
react-dom.production.min.js:123 Uncaught TypeError: Cannot read properties of undefined (reading '')
at e.value (Place.js:25:47)
at Object.H.getCurrent (places.js:67:27)
at Object.callback (game.js:70:25)
at V (V.js:12:39)
at sa (react-dom.production.min.js:157:137)
at Vs (react-dom.production.min.js:267:460)
at Tl (react-dom.production.min.js:250:347)
at Pl (react-dom.production.min.js:250:278)
at Ol (react-dom.production.min.js:250:138)
at wl (react-dom.production.min.js:243:163)
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Thanks for info, fixed! Plus fixed some naming, I guess this is last quick-fix in the version

0.1.2 is already online
 
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the.creator

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xort said:
Having a thought here but if the NTR is avoidable is it actually NTR or just sharing? I mean like as a 4th wall break taking the perspective of the player?
With that said I need to consult with David Cage and talk about our new game that explores the relation between a player and a game.
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here's another question: if NTR is avoidable for player to see, but it's implied in the backstage w/o player knowing, is it avoidable NTR? :unsure:
 
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the.creator

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Airain07 said:
So
i win 20dollar per day, i got 30 day before need to pay the owner, i need 50 dollar to advance in the storyline and for my wife work. But she dont give money so...Its impossible for me, very reptitive gameplay. Nothing to do , exept go to work, chat with your wife, again and again.
you need 50 relationship for have sexe or something, you can raise this by only 2 by day ...

i miss the game or the game its missed?
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Yep, gameplay is poor, but it's 0.1 version! Will set up variables for better experience in the next verions
 
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Dante992

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Oct 6, 2020
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Seems like a similar concept to Wife Adventures, I'm interested to see how this one plays out but, as others have mentioned, it's a bit buggy atm but it is only a V1
 
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combige

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Looking from the pics, author has a decent taste, may be the one of the first I find appealing from real-porn games. The plot though... will watch till 0.3.
 
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Smellfire

Smellfire

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English is pretty bad. Really need someone to help the dev with it because, after awhile, you just zone out and don't bother reading any more.

Premise isn't original, but not to bad either. Pacing (grind) is fucking awful though. Doing 4 things over and over (sleep talk work talk) doesnot make a good game, its just boring. Very Boring.
 
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Smellfire said:
English is pretty bad. Really need someone to help the dev with it because, after awhile, you just zone out and don't bother reading any more.

Premise isn't original, but not to bad either. Pacing (grind) is fucking awful though. Doing 4 things over and over (sleep talk work talk) doesnot make a good game, its just boring. Very Boring.
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thanks for your opinion, working on translate and on main loops
check the next versions :)
 
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