Ren'Py Lessons in Love [v0.45.0] [Selebus]

[applesauce]

I had a bit of fun based on the expansion pack lines.

A World Without Bubbles

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A World Without Geoffrey's Family

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Selebus, did you know about Geoffrey's feelings?

That bit of silly fun aside, this seems like a wonderful project and if you need any help with skills in my wheelhouse (see: Adobe Photoshop, English writing, relatively basic coding (Javascript, Python) I'd love to help out. One thing I'm relatively competent at is adding cum to images. A quick example that only took a few minutes (other styles are also no problem):

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No worries if not, but this project definitely looks fun.

Minor continuity issue
First time going to bar is on a Monday
"Ami won't mind if I stay out a little late since it's the weekend"
in SanaEvents.rpy

 

[Deleted member 1697433]

Minor continuity issue
First time going to bar is on a Monday
"Ami won't mind if I stay out a little late since it's the weekend"
in SanaEvents.rpy

Oh snap! Good catch! The original plan was to only have the bar accessible on the weekend, so this slipped past me when I made the change. And thanks for offering your help as well! I'll definitely keep you in mind if I wind up needing some assistance with those things.

Sidenote: Loved the expansion bits. This adds a layer to Geoffrey that only the two of us had known until now.

 

[Kpoptarts]

Hey! Thanks for checking out the game! I'm looking into adding animations for replayable dorm scenes in the future. Just a matter of figuring out how to implement them since I've never used movies in RenPy before. Can't imagine it's that hard.

No problem! I'm not gonna lie this message convinced me to patron to you, and I don't do that very often for a game so early in development. But this game has so much meat already, I could justify it to myself. (Also side note, I messed up your perfect total number per month of $69. Forgive me. xD)

 

[Deleted member 1697433]

(Also side note, I messed up your perfect total number per month of $69. Forgive me. xD)

Don't worry! I made sure to screenshot it before it was too late! Thank you so much for your support. Things will only get better from here!

 

[Karnewarrior]

Well, the girls are all super cute. Okay, something about Futaba makes her seem more fat than thicc, but some people like that so no shaming here.

I'm a bit disappointed there isn't more lewdness in the game right yet, but hopefully that's going to be fixed fast. Thus far I'm gravitating towards the Bar Girl, Porn Shop girl, Niece and the blonde girl from the dojo. I like the rest of the class a lot, too, but those are my favorites.

Here's hoping the smut begins soon!

 

[Deleted member 1697433]

Here's hoping the smut begins soon!

We'll get there, no worries! The first release is mostly set-up and character building. Already working on a few H-scenes for the next build

 

[tazaaron]

I'm a bit disappointed there isn't more lewdness in the game right yet, but hopefully that's going to be fixed fast.

Here's hoping the smut begins soon!

Version: 0.1.0, lol

Nothing to fix. Developers should stick to HIS/HER story.

 

[Kpoptarts]

Version: 0.1.0, lol

Nothing to fix. Developers should stick to HIS/HER story.

I agree. It's the first version. No need to rush smut, especially when the story build up is as good as it currently is. Keep doing you Selebus

 

[Deleted member 1697433]

Man, I love you guys <3

 

[greednut]

this looks very much like koikatu

 

[Adabelitoo]

this looks very much like koikatu

Because this is Koikatsu.

 

[Canto Forte]

did you look long and hard in the avatar of dev?

I love you

Because this is

HEad over to complex society or the tutor game .. maybe the public sex life .. make some comparisons ..
then come back and give the right feedback on the power and wonder of games

 

[AB84]

i like that schools name :3

 

[Vydashal]

I enjoyed the game quite a lot.

The characters seem interesting enough, each one with their own discerning quirks but not as simple as they might seem, I'm interested in exploring their stories, way more than I am interested in the h-scenes, which is good, it means I'm enjoying the plot.

Some questions I have for the Dev:

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Now I wanna give my opinion about each girl...

Spoiler: Ami Arakawa

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Spoiler: Maya Makinami

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Now I wanna talk about the room with clocks....

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Overall it was a good first release, I'm showing interest in support you through patreon (tho that would be next month).
Good luck.

 

[FriendComputer]

Spoiler: Tick Tock Tick Tock Tick Tock

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[Deleted member 1697433]

How complete is the game at the moment?

Nowhere near finished! And if the subsequent builds are close in length to the initial one (Which I imagine they should be), we're looking at over doubling the current length before all of the dorm rooms are even open. The way I'm structuring the game leaves a lot of room for it to sort of 'keep going.' Sure, there's an underlying 'main' plot line, but I'm hoping the girls' individual stories are what wind up keeping everyone coming back at the end of the day- and there are already ten of those I'm in the process of writing.

Are you planning on doing different endings? or is it going to be linear?

As of right now, time is not finite. I'd like for the main plot and all subplots to work in tandem with one another so everyone can see everything the game has to offer. This doesn't mean, though, that everything will be linear in terms of an ending. Whenever the game does end (In the far, far future), your standing with certain girls will have some sort of impact. I've also toyed with another idea I'd like to explore in that regard, but I won't divulge any more information about that until I'm certain it can be done.

There is this spacial war or whatever it is going on, I wonder if you are going to implement more of it into the story or if it is just background information

That's a tricky question to answer, especially since you brought up Muv Luv. As of right now, I can't say that the whole war thing is going to get even half as crazy as ML, but it will come into play in some form or another.

Are there any other elements you are planning to introduced?

Yes! There are other systems and stats I'd like to introduce eventually, but I'd like to refine and perfect the ones we have now first. I know there are a couple stretch goals on the Patreon page that I set as sort of landmarks for telling myself "Okay, we all want this" but, like I said, I'm focusing more on what we have now at the moment.

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[Deleted member 1697433]

New content poll is up for Patrons! Currently voting on the dorm room that will be opened in the next build!
The dorm opening will come with 8 new events total (2 Dorm/2 Side for each girl in the room - similar to how Futaba and Rin are now)
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[Karnewarrior]

Wait, the Room with Clocks is implemented?

I couldn't find it and I thought it wasn't. How the heck do you even get there?

Version: 0.1.0, lol

Nothing to fix. Developers should stick to HIS/HER story.

I think you misunderstood what I was saying. Fix as in it's added soon, not as in I think it's a flaw that needs to be patched over.

 

[curtiskwong8]

Interesting game

 

[DanThaMan]

Game name instantly reminded me of this classic