After replaying this update, I think Sel really fumbled the Maya decapitation reveal by telling, then showing instead of showing and not telling. After Nao's warning in the previous update and Tsuneyo's comment about something happening in the background. If he were to cut Tsuneyo's line and left Nao's warning, it would've been enough to set it up. The constant beating over the head of "something is going to happen", so pay attention isn't necessary. He basically gave us an exposition alley-oop to know something bad was going to happen. After playing this game for so long, you start to hone in on what Sel is doing with his writing. His writing is still good, but I feel like he has already shown the majority of his tricks, with 0.35 being his greatest one.