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Don't sell yourself short mate your writing is really good.
Definitely better than a lot of games I have played.
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Definitely better than a lot of games I have played.
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It's a good Update but I can't help it but point out how glacial of a pace the story is moving.
Nun? There is no nun on the gameneeds nun foot licking!
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Could be a masterpiece of poorly missing something since as far as I recall that was a dream sequence, I do not recall any other scenes like the one you mentioned except that one which was a dream.
I like how "sharing" route splits into "open relationship" and "cuckoldry" two directions. What I kinda wanna see is Mallory to has more involvement, emotionally or romantically, with the mc, it will definitely intensify the jealousy element in both paths. She also plays the corrupting role quite well, I will suggest to make it even more prominent, she can either make Arianna wanna compete with her or help mc explore his submissive side more. It seems ntr path has much less progress, cheating just feels wrong with fmc's personality anyway.
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How to describe it, it started out really good, I love the option sharing path, sadly the longer I played it wasn't really sharing, but more pure NTR, prologue was perfect, MC having a dream of his gf close to his rival, but it was a dream.
In chapter 1 the dream suddenly became a fetish, though to the MC it was still a dream, when he talked his gf she and her friend made it sound like it was a fetish, which isn't really through, because between liking a dream and having a fetish is still a big difference, but that wasn't the worst, his gf suddenly went on full cheating and did things with Tyrone she doesn't want to tell her bf, that no longer sharing either anymore that pure cheating.
In chapter 2 it was a complete mess, how it switched from present to past to future to past to present it was crazy to follow the story, it would been a lot better if there was a flow like him talking about the past to his gf or someone else, but no that wasn't really there. Though the gf decide somewhat to make up and ask now permission to do things with Tyrone, but also out the blue she suddenly started liking being a cuck herself by letting her friend have sex with MC, while she before that gave a bj to his best friend behind his back before doing a threesome.
I'm not sure where this is going but the paths are literaly a crap mess, should have made 3 paths vanilla, sharing and pure ntr, but not mix up sharing and pure ntr, coze sharing is more ntrs/ Netorase. All I can say is a very solid start which was good and then when started with chapters the game became utterly a mess up of cheating/sharing and timelapses with no sense. Unless this doesn't get fixed I can only say, you went from a 9/10 game to a 4/10 game.
In chapter 1 the dream suddenly became a fetish, though to the MC it was still a dream, when he talked his gf she and her friend made it sound like it was a fetish, which isn't really through, because between liking a dream and having a fetish is still a big difference, but that wasn't the worst, his gf suddenly went on full cheating and did things with Tyrone she doesn't want to tell her bf, that no longer sharing either anymore that pure cheating.
In chapter 2 it was a complete mess, how it switched from present to past to future to past to present it was crazy to follow the story, it would been a lot better if there was a flow like him talking about the past to his gf or someone else, but no that wasn't really there. Though the gf decide somewhat to make up and ask now permission to do things with Tyrone, but also out the blue she suddenly started liking being a cuck herself by letting her friend have sex with MC, while she before that gave a bj to his best friend behind his back before doing a threesome.
I'm not sure where this is going but the paths are literaly a crap mess, should have made 3 paths vanilla, sharing and pure ntr, but not mix up sharing and pure ntr, coze sharing is more ntrs/ Netorase. All I can say is a very solid start which was good and then when started with chapters the game became utterly a mess up of cheating/sharing and timelapses with no sense. Unless this doesn't get fixed I can only say, you went from a 9/10 game to a 4/10 game.
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I voted yes.
I really liked that Christmas special you did.
I really liked that Christmas special you did.
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Can the animations be as good as in this game though? I imagine animating the 2d stuff is much harder.
It is, but I'm trying various things to make it work... I didn't like what i did with the animations in the christmas special, for example
Traicing or not doesn't really matter, as long as the final product's sexy.
But the pics themselves still would benefit from some easy improvements.
You can look at some manga/webtoons - the most popular styles for sexy pics. Notice how their lines only imply form, fading very quickly, instead of hugging it all around (look how they draw lips, for example, or cute noses - it's a very easy fix).
Also you can find a reference from some manga/webtoon with a good art-style that you like - for the exact same pose/face position you are doing right now - and look at the major differences between yours and theirs.
Pay attention to the individual lines.
And you can straight up copy colors from webtoons you like. It's flat color, so it would be a very straightforward and easy improvement too.
Don't neglect shadows.
Also, if you want to draw a cuter girl - a very easy rule of thumb is to draw her features from a top-down perspective (like when she looks up to you). Make a bigger forehead, bigger eyes, smaller nose and smaller mouth. Or trace the features looking down on them and then apply them to the face from a different pose. With some adjustments maybe.
For men do the opposite - like you look up to them.
That's a fundamental law of all 'anime' styles and it works for a reason. If someone drawing porn - they do it in this style.
And you can always just play with transform after tracing if you don't want to draw it yourself. Look what you'll get.
Can there be a cheating or revenge path? It would be amazing for Mallory to slide herself between the MC and Ariana.