Just adding a few things that I noticed while playing the game:
Purely going off of the contents of the OP (i.e. I haven't downloaded and played)
The island:
- It's tiny and wouldn't take long to explore it entirely
You're right, but it's definitely even too little for them to explore anything (but each other :biggrin
, really.
- No fresh water source (they're fucked). I suppose there could be coconuts, but after a while with only coconut water, you're fucked
I'm guessing, you're talking about diarrhea, right? That would get really messy
- It's an abandoned island, yet has a fully in-tact pier and cabana (or whatever), at least going off of what I see in the preview images. This suggests that they're maintained (i.e. the island is owned by a resort that does excursions there)
Looks like we can expect some guests, maybe. Maybe not. (another "Erik battle" in this forum? Oh noes...)
Overall:
- Renders look decent
- Like others, I'm a little sick of unoriginal characters
- I'm not really a fan of breast implants...in other words her breasts don't look natural
They're better than DmD ginormous antigravity tits, but you're right, they still look like implants. So they're better but still personally I would also like natural looking boobs.
At least her head looks proportional to the body, she looks like a human being here, not a bubble-head from another planet. Here's a comparision of this girl to a random good looking real girl (Ava Sambora) and the bubble-headed and -boobed DmD daughter:
- The daughter's makeup looks remarkably flawless given the fact that she's just been in a plane crash and been washed up(?) on an island
You're right about that. They both should look way more messy. Having a plain crash and perfect hair at the same time doesn't make much sense.
- There seems to be a perfectly nice cabana on the island, but in one of the preview images you see the daughter sleeping out in the open directly on the sand
Cabana is supposed to be old and about to collapse - by the way they talk about it, not the way it looks, though.
Also, if that cabana is about to collapse, but there are water bottles and canned food in there, they seem to be in no hurry to rescue all the found supplies from there. Also, shouldn't they already be thirsty and hungry by the evening?
- It's v0.2 and already 700MB. Is it going to be like 3.5GB if it gets to v1.0?
All the images are full frame png-s with low compression. I can get them more than 10% smaller simply by setting png compression to maximum. This kind of full frame images without transparency could also be optimized by using jpg compression with decent quality settings and lose almost nothing. That could make it about 90% smaller.
To add a few things:
- there's an image missing, named dan1/65.png - that's supposed to be the look up inside the cabana. The roof from inside, I guess.
- In the beginning of the game that heart massage would probably kill the daughter, at least not start her heart. Hand placement is way too high on her rib cage.
There are more than a few (fun?) possibilities missed right here. The first one could be a technically correct way to do CPR. Should you fail, it could be a game over close to the start of the game that would not piss off many people, but give them an idea about the correct way, not the "Hollywood way" of doing CPR. That could be a really good thing. Doing it the wrong way is a possible killer.
The fun thing right here (for the player) is that the right way of doing CPR includes removing obstacles and tight clothes that could make breathing harder to the victim and blowing air into the lungs of the victim harder for you. It means opening or pulling up the shirt/top and unclasping a bra if there is one.
It also makes easier to find the right place to do heart massage.
In this game, it would make sense to remove her top, not just leave her boob out. Should she ask about why she is topless, there's a perfectly sensible explanation right there:
"Honey, you were
dead! You weren't breathing and your heart stopped!
I had to breathe for you and start your heart! You can't do that when there's something in the way! This isn't a movie, honey (it's a porn game! :winkytongue: )
What is more important - to be alive and breathing or wear a top? There's no reason to be embarrassed about it, cupcake! You're alive now, nothing else matters to me."
...Aand there's a big (topless) hug coming right there! :heartcoveredeyes:
And that's it, no reason for excuses or embarrassment to either of them. :biggrin: