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honestly this feels like the weird dream of a 12 year old after watching his first hardcore flick he found on the internet.
There is no build up to anything, innocent girl comes to school, first day gets bullied and immediately wants to suck cock ... the end.
There is no build up to anything, innocent girl comes to school, first day gets bullied and immediately wants to suck cock ... the end.
- Nov 2, 2017
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I feel like this kind of story would be much more plausible and significantly less shitty if the protagonist was a femboy at a charter school full of jocks. In no scenario could I imagine a normal girl ending up at an all male college and they all just happen to be rapist assholes. Even Karryn's Prison made more sense than that.
- Mar 6, 2018
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Well valid points, but it's an ero-game right?! Does it have to make sense? It's not like we're bunch of game critics. If you watch some porn half of it doesn't make any sense, so seeing this game or more like concept proof is kinda good.
Yeah but a porn I don't have to click through slow and endless dialogs and can simply skip to the action and be done with it^^
- Nov 20, 2018
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She is a cute unique looking character. I think she'd be better suited to a slow burn corruption AVN rather than a cum dumpster.
I'll never knock another dev. It's harder than it looks to produce an AVN. Hopefully the dev will not get discouraged and keep trying to gain skills.
I'll never knock another dev. It's harder than it looks to produce an AVN. Hopefully the dev will not get discouraged and keep trying to gain skills.
- Apr 29, 2018
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Interesting game but like some people said before I think it would be MUCH more fitting if the game was developed in Ren'Py instead of Unity. Unity is like for more advanced games with REALLY specific mechanics that you wouldn't be able to achieve in Ren'Py or unless you are making a 3D game. Plus, Unity is awfully really bloated for some reason (for newer versions at least)
And personally I feel that the protag should be a femboy too. I know people are going to disagree with me because not everyone wants to see gay shit (which is understandable) but I cannot think of any reason that a woman just suddenly ends up in a men's only college. There are definitely a lot of wacky porn plots but how does a woman suddenly get into a male-only college? Why a male only college specifically? A femboy protag would be much more explainable or maybe even a trans-masc protag.
..good luck dev? Also, the "story based on real life" part is really, REALLY concerning to me, maybe the dev took this from a cheesy porn plot from some YouPorn erotica, but a woman ending up in a men's college (which is kind of unlikely since single-sex colleges are not that common, well at least for me since I'm in Canada) in real life would cause.. a LOT of problems.
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And personally I feel that the protag should be a femboy too. I know people are going to disagree with me because not everyone wants to see gay shit (which is understandable) but I cannot think of any reason that a woman just suddenly ends up in a men's only college. There are definitely a lot of wacky porn plots but how does a woman suddenly get into a male-only college? Why a male only college specifically? A femboy protag would be much more explainable or maybe even a trans-masc protag.
..good luck dev? Also, the "story based on real life" part is really, REALLY concerning to me, maybe the dev took this from a cheesy porn plot from some YouPorn erotica, but a woman ending up in a men's college (which is kind of unlikely since single-sex colleges are not that common, well at least for me since I'm in Canada) in real life would cause.. a LOT of problems.
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Would really recommend you switch to Renpy its the standard, easy and multi platform. Many others who use linux, mac, android would be able to play it and sub to your patreon.
It's possible to do it with Unity but I can't comment on it since I haven't used it much and I haven't really exported a GAME with it... Ren'Py is MUCH easier for visual novel making, with Unity you have to make your own code or find code off the internet to make a visual novel framework (unless there is like a built in example or something)
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I wouldn't come to call it shit, but yes, her being a cis-girl is the whole point and while trans/futa is a quite popular tag, it's still appealing to a minority that likely doesn't include the dev.
Let's see... 3am, here, but out of my hat I think it's quite easy to justify the plot:
Principal addressing the school's Council:
"My dear colleagues, as many of you regrettably already know, yesterday the State Senate ratified law 12345, despite our strenuous lobbying against it. This is a sad day, but from now on, all-male schools are illegal in this State and we'll be forced to accept female students."
<Outraged murmurings>
The Student's President stands up:
"Mr Principal, rest assured... Spread the news: If a silly girl will ever even try to join our proud school, she'll be seriously sorry!"
<All the council roars in approval>
<Cuts to the unaware MC moving into the school>
- Nov 20, 2018
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And starts shouting along with everyone to be a part of things . . . until, well, anyway....
Dafuq kind of male student body is going to be upset over girls coming to their school? That sounds gayer than any given femboy scenario and even dumber than the one random girl somehow being there.
Narrating your own description is mega cringe. Holy crap! First time I've ever seen this honestly. The adjectives/adverbs are the Chef's kissReally? Seems like she's having a great time to me.
"Greedily"The text is SO SLOW. Really wish this was in ren'py so the text speed could be adjusted.
I'll check back in with the game in a few versions to see if it gets better.
I'll check back in with the game in a few versions to see if it gets better.