VN Ren'Py Abandoned Life behind the Wall [Ch. 1 Public] [KarmaStudio]

[szieve]

Translations need a lot of work..

 

[V&M]

Group sex, female domination, male domination, slavery (partly), adventure And more will be added in the future.

It's usually that "much more" that worries people, you know, those tags that some people turn up their noses at.
As for rule 7, if you want to add it in the future, just make a separate patch, like other developers do.

 

[Moosica]

Graphically it looks great.
Thank you and good luck with the development.

 

[Furkan Aydemir]

n a land where justice did not prevail and economic conditions created class divisions, walls were built between the rich and the poor.

the moment i read this line i realized that he was turk

 

[Hyperserver]

Karma3D
Congrats to your new/first project.
I may suggest that you swap from using .png codec to .webp
It will massively help to keep download size low.
Most devs use .webp nowadays

Also may we kindly ask for planned future tags? Most of us don't want to be "negatively surprised" one day after grown on your project

Anyways - good luck

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Looks good. Thanks, karmastudio

 

[dengl]

Great start of the story! But there are indeed a lot of issues with the translation though.
And I do like how you kickstart the story by sending MC on a killing spree

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[DIKnemero]

Interesting story, storytelling not bad. The characters and rendering look good. Animation needs improvement. I think he did a good job to start with. We are waiting for the continuation. Good luck

(Madem Türksün göster ürksün.. Yok yok o başka bir şeydi ( : Oyuna Türkçe eklerseniz güzel olur.)

 

[noblone]

Gl

 

[yossa999]

Hey, I just started the game and they always refer to Clara as "he." Dad calls “him” daughter. I'm confused, should I expect a HARD surprise from him/her?

 

[Blither]

Daddy issues the game...

 

[modo200]

good start and promising story but you need to work on your translations alot .....good luck

 

[longjohngold]

Clara is hot, I always enjoy seeing her model pop up in game.

There are some language issues, Cara is repeatedly referred to as him/he (and it's not a trap situation, she's introduced as the guy's daughter)... and sometimes it's just got that clear vibe of not being a native speaker...
"Let it be an advance for you to start ahead of me; I will outshine you; I will buy all your assets and make you my employee!"
"I am effective with you, but I have little validity with him."
...It's totally understandable, but at the same time not enjoyable to read.

 

[submissive -Ben83]

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female domination

I am in when this happens for now i will wait

 

[Fate stay]

Will give this game a try
Thanks

 

[holaje12]

I'm not thinking of adding one of those tags at this moment. What might happen in the future is a complete surprise. Thanks for your comment!

No one is going to like a surprise like that.
Better let people know if its going to be in the game so they can expect it and it doesnt turn into a shitshow later.

 

[rKnight]

"Life Behind The Wall"

In a land where justice did not prevail and economic conditions created class divisions, walls were built between the rich and the poor.

THX for sharing...

 

[DrakoGhoul]

The story sounds wonderful. Visually, it looks pretty good, too. I'll play this game.

 

[Alextsai]

this looks good, but i wished there was also a dark path for the MC to follow