ptahn

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Lauren lying in bed with her husband is normal, the MC spying on her is the transgression (player choice, easily avoided). MC gets blackmailed by Dave & doesn't like the panty deal at all - in fact does everything he can to get out of it & soon has the chance to kill Dave for that. Ron and MC walking in on topless Iris happens at a time when there is no sexual relationship with MC (and Iris is shocked, not seductive). Maybe your perception is modified since you already played the game before, so you view girls in the Prologue at LIs when they are definitely not (yet) seen as such by the MC.

After the prologue, when the girls slowly turn into LIs, the dad is divorced & away, the relationship with Ron is stained by the end-of-prologue event (so he doesn't show up at MCs home anymore) and Dave is dead with the MC a (possible) responsible party. Even in the relationship with Karen - which started out with her husband calling the shots - said husband is no longer part of their next encounter(s).

Long story short, if you get past the prologue and the MCs starts to think about them as LIs, there is no more competition
Yes, I get the changes in the story. I just wonder if anyone who may have been involved in this thread at the time of the changes might know why these changes were made. Logically, just because MC starts to see these women as LI's should not mean that the men who were competition in the Prologue suddenly are not in Part One. Yes, Billy is out of the family but we also find the photo of him which could mean that he and Lauren were never having sex (I thought Billy was the stepdad.) Phil was calling the shots and now he is not, why? Lauren's possible activities with other students seem to have disappeared from the story. I'm just curious if anyone knows if the developer was getting negative feedback during the Prologue phase and made adjustments to make the game more profitable.
 

hermesh

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Yes, Billy is out of the family but we also find the photo of him which could mean that he and Lauren were never having sex (I thought Billy was the stepdad.)
Having no more sex after a long long marriage i could maybe understand (although very implausible with an hottie like Lauren). But no sex, never - why would the husband have married her in the first place? Usually marriage involves sex...

Phil was calling the shots and now he is not, why?
Karen has a very different fantasy (Mommy roleplay) regarding the MC than him (takes very reluctant opportunity for controlled sharing). Which is why the MC has to flee when Phil arrives home early later on - they are pursuing Karens fantasy, so its a secret affair out of Phils control and knowledge.

Lauren's possible activities with other students seem to have disappeared from the story.
That was slanderous BS, made up (or rather willfully misinterpreted) to push her out: She was investigating the two pupils dealing drugs from the school toilet, the conspirators use the made up sexual allegations against Lauren to stop her investigation. Big part of the MCs research is finding out about this and attempting to clear her reputation. And she divorced Billy exactly because he didn't stand up for her despite knowing better...

I'm just curious if anyone knows if the developer was getting negative feedback during the Prologue phase and made adjustments to make the game more profitable.
Idk, i just started recently. But from a storytelling perspective the current progression makes sense to me.
 
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ptahn

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Having no more sex after a long long marriage i could maybe understand (although very implausible with an hottie like Lauren). But no sex, never - why would the husband have married her in the first place? Usually marriage involves sex...
You ARE a newbie. That scenario is not uncommon in these stories. Perhaps Lauren was his beard so no one would know he was gay. Does the story even mention how long they were married?

That was slanderous BS, made up (or rather willfully misinterpreted) to push her out: She was investigating the two pupils dealing drugs from the school toilet, they use the made up sexual allegations against Lauren top her investigation. Big part of the MCs research is finding out about this and attempting clearing her reputation. And she divorced Billy exactly because he didn't stand up for her despite knowing better...
What about the incident with the other student which Lauren does not deny? As I said, I remember (rightly or wrongly) that when I first played the game, I had the impression that something definitely happen with Lauren and the two students. I think that scene was changed in some way to create a different impression.

Look, you're telling me what has happened in the story; I know what happened in the story. I'm not criticizing the game. I am just wondering if the story was headed in a particular direction and was altered because of player complaints.
 

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You ARE a newbie. That scenario is not uncommon in these stories. Perhaps Lauren was his beard so no one would know he was gay.
I may be a newbie, but i do know there are several VNs where the MC is the only male in the universe/island/girl-only school etc. So i know the lengths some devs are willing to go just to avoid any hint of competition. But the devs for this game don't seem to do it, at least not in a crude way.

What exactly is up with the husband seems like an (intentional) mystery - from the hints we get, my money would be on him being a kinky guy that took part in a secret sex club with all kinds of forbidden crazy/illegal/blackmail/conspiracy stuff. Just him being gay with Lauren as a beard would be a rather meaningless secret in modern day california.

Look, you're telling me what has happened in the story; I know what happened in the story. I'm not criticizing the game. I am just wondering if the story was headed in a particular direction and was altered because of player complaints.
I cannot tell you whether they changed direction and if so for what reason. My point was just about the game&story being consistent, which you seemed to question in previous posts. Tried to answer those specific questions since story in its current state is still quite present to me (after writing the walkthrough this week)
 

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I may be a newbie, but i do know there are several VNs where the MC is the only male in the universe/island/girl-only school etc. So i know the lengths some devs are willing to go just to avoid any hint of competition. But the devs for this game don't seem to do it, at least not in a crude way.

What exactly is up with the husband seems like an (intentional) mystery - from the hints we get, my money would be on him being a kinky guy that took part in a secret sex club with all kinds of forbidden crazy/illegal/blackmail/conspiracy stuff. Just him being gay with Lauren as a beard would be a rather meaningless secret in modern day california.



I cannot tell you whether they changed direction and if so for what reason. My point was just about the game&story being consistent, which you seemed to question in previous posts. Tried to answer those specific questions since story in its current state is still quite present to me (after writing the walkthrough this week)
stop wasting ur time with his nonsense
 

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Guys, i just completed lisc, but seems no sex between lauren and mc. Or did I miss any path???
There is no full on sex scene yet. However there is a very sensual foot massage with the main character progressing into holding her from behind, removing her top, starting a breast massage and Lauren is getting very excited. Its only stopped from going further due to Iris surprise return. Talking with lauren later it was no mistake - she fully realizes where they are going with the relationship.

So my guess, you won't have to wait much longer...:cool:

stop wasting ur time with his nonsense
After a discussion takes off, it's often hard for me to stop even when its obviously the better move. Sunk cost fallacy and all that jazz...^^
 
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cold_arctus

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No it doesn't.
Rollback is still blocked BEFORE choices.
Works fine for me.

Please check file "core.rpy" inside game/script has "config.rollback_enabled" set to "True".

Unren should have create a new file called "unren-rollback.rpy" inside the game's "game" folder which overwrites all rollback back settings.
init 999 python:
renpy.config.rollback_enabled = True
renpy.config.hard_rollback_limit = 256
renpy.config.rollback_length = 256
def unren_noblock( *args, **kwargs ):
return
renpy.block_rollback = unren_noblock
 

ptahn

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This is from a review of this game written in May 2021:

4.00 star(s)
desmosome
[v0.2]
This is actually quite a bold project. The dev didn't shy away from controversial material just to play it safe. I will say it outright that people who are really sensitive to anything resembling NTR should not play this. Honestly. No, seriously. Don't play it if you get erked by the usual stuff that sparks NTR discussions in these game threads. This game has those questionable material story elements. It really isn't an NTR story, but neither is it a game that intentionally caters it's story to the harem/romance crowd.

EDIT: BIG CHANGES in the narrative in the latest update (v0.3.1). If you stick with the game, you will find that the MC does turn into a kind of chad that can stand up for himself and take all the women. NTR vibes were nonexistent in this update, and the story developed in a direction where there probably won't be any more situations that make anti-NTR people nervous.

edit: Version v0.3.1 makes a drastic change, both in terms of the tone of the story and in the gameplay. It's absolutely much higher quality in terms of production value. It adds a pretty good sandbox system if you manage to not pull your hair out at all the hidden item searches. The story does away with the bumbling idiot MC and all the "not NTR but kinda NTR vibes" situations and develops into a standard "alpha MC" going for all the chicks. To the people that are squeamish about anything resembling NTR, you might be rewarded with a more straightforward story you can enjoy if you can get through the early parts.

So, I'm not the only one that noticed a change in tone. I'm not criticizing the game, actually, I kind of like it. I was just asking if anyone knew if the original bathroom scene had been altered since it's not how I remembered it and if the developer had received a lot of negative comments about NTR-ish (there was absolutely no NTR ever in the game) content in the game? As for the second question, I will just go look at the comments around May 2021. Perhaps a post at that time will answer the first question.
 
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Works fine for me.

Please check file "core.rpy" inside game/script has "config.rollback_enabled" set to "True".

Unren should have create a new file called "unren-rollback.rpy" inside the game's "game" folder which overwrites all rollback back settings.
That part is almost identical to my personal unlock script which I drop into every renpy game before launch.
It unlocks rollback only partially.
Rollback is still blocked at arbitrary places. Especially before some decisions. But it works for others.
 

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So, I'm not the only one that noticed a change in tone. I'm not criticizing the game, actually, I kind of like it. I was just asking if anyone knew if the original bathroom scene had been altered since it's not how I remembered it and if the developer had received a lot of negative comments about NTR-ish (there was absolutely no NTR ever in the game) content in the game? As for the second question, I will just go look at the comments around May 2021. Perhaps a post at that time will answer the first question.
last version (3.1) it was still the same and i don´t think it got change with the latest update. some ppl here are just very sensitiv. if a guy just looks at the grils around you they scream ntr. there was and there is never going to be ntr here. and that discussion is already over so no need to bring it back.
 
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o...my....god... what a stuck-up little bitch just say no or yes and think about it later. the mc always finds excuses that I do not strongly agree with. just listen to your mom and do the thing you want to do later... I know you want to act like a chad but hero behind a mask is better than a stubborn teenager so annoying XD

even tremolo is not that stubborn he gives the ladies some time to prosses/thing
 

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This is from a review of this game written in May 2021:

4.00 star(s)
desmosome
[v0.2]
This is actually quite a bold project. The dev didn't shy away from controversial material just to play it safe. I will say it outright that people who are really sensitive to anything resembling NTR should not play this. Honestly. No, seriously. Don't play it if you get erked by the usual stuff that sparks NTR discussions in these game threads. This game has those questionable material story elements. It really isn't an NTR story, but neither is it a game that intentionally caters it's story to the harem/romance crowd.

EDIT: BIG CHANGES in the narrative in the latest update (v0.3.1). If you stick with the game, you will find that the MC does turn into a kind of chad that can stand up for himself and take all the women. NTR vibes were nonexistent in this update, and the story developed in a direction where there probably won't be any more situations that make anti-NTR people nervous.

edit: Version v0.3.1 makes a drastic change, both in terms of the tone of the story and in the gameplay. It's absolutely much higher quality in terms of production value. It adds a pretty good sandbox system if you manage to not pull your hair out at all the hidden item searches. The story does away with the bumbling idiot MC and all the "not NTR but kinda NTR vibes" situations and develops into a standard "alpha MC" going for all the chicks. To the people that are squeamish about anything resembling NTR, you might be rewarded with a more straightforward story you can enjoy if you can get through the early parts.

So, I'm not the only one that noticed a change in tone. I'm not criticizing the game, actually, I kind of like it. I was just asking if anyone knew if the original bathroom scene had been altered since it's not how I remembered it and if the developer had received a lot of negative comments about NTR-ish (there was absolutely no NTR ever in the game) content in the game? As for the second question, I will just go look at the comments around May 2021. Perhaps a post at that time will answer the first question.
The prologue versus the what we see now is night and day, so you’re not off. And yes, the tone has changed quite a bit, in the prologue there was no choices the MC went along with anything, and yes, there was heavy NTR vibes that even Stevie Wonder could see. So yeah, the tone has changed quite drastically since then.
 
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Bibifoc

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Why don't you guys use unren to enable rollback? Works just fine. :whistle:
Oh I didn't know that this feature of unren also inhibits the renpy.block_rollback function.
But in the end it's not so good because when you rollback during free roams you're rollbacked too far. Still better than nothing.
 

cold_arctus

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Oh I didn't know that this feature of unren also inhibits the renpy.block_rollback function.
But in the end it's not so good because when you rollback during free roams you're rollbacked too far. Still better than nothing.
Use rollback during free-roam with caution. It's easier to trigger scenes through dev-console.
 
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