Hello.
I don't really know what to think of this game.
The worlbuilding is correct for this type of game. Some scenes in the street or in the cars, nice touch.
The characters are numerous and different. But they didn't really grow on me outside the MC and Alice, a little for Jayden and Tara and also Mr J.
The story itself is good, though there are some parts I don't like.
I'm not into 3dcg and it's not the art of this game that will make me change my mind though the quality is getting better the more we advance towards the party. The MC is the better realized. The girlfriend looks like a doll too much (her skin made me think of plastic). The environment is well done too.
I've tried to avoid as much as possible the incest path, the aunt and cousins didn't make me want to try.
I wanted to stay faithful to Cindy as much as possible and also because nobody made me want to try other options. I checked for Mr J (a fun scene directly at the private club) and Jayden (a blowjob for a bet). I tried Jason, Ginny and Miss Esperanza to have a better idea. I didn't go for Ms Richardson, she's too emotionally vulnerable. But I feel like everything progress too quickly, like you know them for less than 2 days and already cheat your girlfriend you supposedly love so much. I know it's a porn game but I feel bad if the signals are contradictory (if he didn't love her that much, I wouldn't have a problem to try more).
There should be a hint when he became aware he's also interested with boys, what made his mind switch (Jason's playtime, Ginny's revelation, Mr J physique, Jayden encounter). Because it's always strange for me when people go gay (it makes them bi then) without a thought process. It's normaly not easy to try new things, especially when it comes to sexuality. Though we know he isn't against it from Jason's coming out.
The first study session with a partner is immediately going for sex (it's like the MC only think about sex...). It put me off though I wouldn't have minded if it was more progressive (a hand on the thigh, then on the crotch if you let it happen, etc). You should be able to study by yourself too the first time like the other days. If you go see Mr J, you can't see the 4 different scenes. It's also strange that you can alternate (once you've choosen a tutor, you should be obliged to continue with her). Does studying have an utility in the game? If that's the case, we should be able to see some progress.
I don't know what to think about the private club. Lady Valenka should introduce each partner and their specialty. I think talking should be an option too. What I just said about the club is true if you miss Ms Richardson reward. Only 3 employees are available.
To continue with this idea, there are some events that shouldn't happen if you didn't encounter the previous one (for exemple, you shouldn't know Mr J yet when help you with the car if you didn't go to the club or you shouldn't know Joshua is Ginny's friend if you didn't go to the beach before ; there are others too so be careful).
The basket mini game was kinda cool, a little too long though. Plus we can gain bucks but will it have some use?
It's a good thing we can choose if we're voyeur or not. It was an obligation in another game and it was annoying.
You've included many footjob scenes. It changes a bit since it isn't your usual kink.
The night between the 5th and 6th day, we have to choose between Cindy and Jason. It's heartbreaking.
When we go to Cindy's home, we learn Jason has changed but how can we realize it if we don't know how he looked like before.
We have Kyle Jenkins as a classmate but why isn't there any interaction with him? Even the twins have their scenes.
The "Clank" that grow when you open a door is too much. I think it should be more discreet.
The overall story is full of spelling mistakes. it's still understandable but some sentences aren't clear enough, be careful. You left some french expressions. It doesn't bother me since I'm french but it could be difficult for someone that don't have notions of french (plus, don't forget that the people that come here are from all over the world).
When I do something and go back during the 7th day party, the game crash.
There are some errors in the naming of some characters (cf files).
Sorry, I'm not really helpful with my message. The game's mecanic are well thought. The global storyline is good, though some paths aren't for me and I think everything is too fast paced. And the art should be getting better in the first days since the overall quality isn't constant. I won't talk about the characters because I think it's a question of taste.
Good luck. I'll come back to see where it's going, especially for the few characters that grew on me and the music group.
Edit : added some precisions
Hello...
for start, I want to say to you it's good to receive a constructive comment...
I will try to answer you...
- for the graphics, sure the begining are really ugly (and I remake him once)... I work with a game called "Virt-A-Mate" because my computer isen't strong enough for run DAZ... "one night for one picture"... Plus, at the begining I was really a newbie so the game graphics are a little better now...
- for the english... My english are really basics... but for the day 1 to 7 (exept the party) a guy from US have rewrite the dialogue... so it's better than before but sure some french expression are still here...
- for study and money, no, it's not important, the mc diden't really can use it... (but I work a little in a new game and the skills, items and money will be really useful, you will be to able to buy item, became stronger etc, take a look on my patreon they are some news about it (for free ^^)
- for the "clank" i have already deleted them, it's done for the next update...
- for the private club, they are no a lot of option because i prefer work on the "regular" story, but i'll start to rework a little on it...
- for the backstory with Jason, cindy and the mc, I started to work on it too... it's on the way for the next update...
- for the "scrollback", I work on it a lot and now it's working, have you the last version the 0.6.5? more simple, in the party have you the "red arrow" or the little pics in the bottom for move in the house?
- for the "relation speed" it's totally my idea, i understand your feel, and I think that too, but like you say it's a porn game and I'm not sure if it's a good idea to make things too slowly, I have already deleted entire scene because I think she came too soon... so i don't know...
- about cindy... yes she look like plastic I agree, I need to work on her I think... for the "love" yes, sure the mc forget her a little too fast, i can just agree with you... I try to put some MC's toughts for explain it but maybe the "writing" it's not good enough.
and for stay faithful to her, it's a option I add late because some guy are already ask for it, so sometime it's weird in the game.
- in general, it's my first try to make a game, so I have made some mistakes, and it's hard to fixe them now, for some it's too late I think or need a lot and a lot of work, and I make the game on my free time (and I don't have a lot of free time...)
- for the mc becoming Bi... I think I need to rewrite a little some scene for make this more realistic...
- anyway, I appreciate that you are really interested in the story of the characters, that you take the time to read the dialogue, it's refreshing...
- if you speak french, don't hesitate to contact me by message, i can be more clear.