RPGM Completed Life With a Flirty Step-Sister [Final] [Girl Cafe -KeyTail-]

[KIRA.]

Nothing wrong with getting inspired. Your best work comes from it!
Learning stuff can feel like a waste of time but you never know how it will come back and help you one day. I think it helped a lot with the details on the missionary scene. When i first saw it im like, wow this guy upped hes game a lot.

Yeah im glad i took the time to actually reply... If you look at my low post count i dont make it a habit to interact very often.. But its actually been fun following a long with this project.

Those sketches?drawings are nice. As wincepter said, you have the fundamentals. Take it from someone who can't even get anime eyes right I was terrible at faces in general tbh.
Also btw, that first image is hot, i love cleavage shots and petite body's. And 2nd and 3rd images details are damn good, well drawn stuff. Thanks for sharing those.



It was a good yap Im also a fucking yapanator.

I didnt take drawing more seriously since i never planned to use it as a job, tho its fun if u have nothing else to do and to pass time. yeah about that, when im comparing my first release i want to cover my face lmao, as i said above im only a copycat, i probably copied an AI image XD

yeah, your acc is older than mine but way less comments xD im still grateful tho, to be honest im dissapointed by the lack of criticism or advice (after i told them not to hold back) i actually wanted to hear an outside perspective so i can improve it more.

Maybe try doing the eye first? thats what i always do, tho sometimes i would ended up fckng up the face shape xD too bad i cant find my old drawings, im pretty sure 95% of it is nsfw, i usually backed it up but i change my phone every 1-3 years, i probably fkcd up somewhere, i tot it was still there on my backup folders -_-

welp, thanks again for the suggestions and advice! and o please can u ping the author or something for the 100% uncensored, i ended up covering up his reply, im new to this so i dont know how to do it.

 

[shmurfer]

Woah, somebody already finished it xD i just finished the boobjob and thighjob scene, im still missing the handjob and some of the male penis night crawling scenes and yeah, i have no reason to continue this now (no hard feelings, and im sorry, the uploader above mightve already started way earlier then i butted in -_- or he is just really fast lol) ill still upload my last update.

It was pretty fun and i learned a lot, i still need to learn about colors, pussy and penis variations, (i actually wanted to add more details to the penis but i would ended up redoing all of it so i didnt bother xD) also the shadow directions depending on the light, looking for the pussy and penis reference iss a pain when the net is filled with AI images (i dont really mind AI at first, but now im annoyed at them xD)

Added boob job and thigh job
Added more color on the blowjob bath scene.

Mega

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Don't know about the others but I'd prefer if you finished yours. The other patch has a very dull brown penis and huge thunder cock veins which just doesn't look as good.

 

[KIRA.]

Don't know about the others but I'd prefer if you finished yours. The other patch has a very dull brown penis and huge thunder cock veins which just doesn't look as good.

oh well... lets see

 

[mazick101]

Woah, somebody already finished it xD i just finished the boobjob and thighjob scene, im still missing the handjob and some of the male penis night crawling scenes and yeah, i have no reason to continue this now (no hard feelings, and im sorry, the uploader above mightve already started way earlier then i butted in -_- or he is just really fast lol) ill still upload my last update.

It was pretty fun and i learned a lot, i still need to learn about colors, pussy and penis variations, (i actually wanted to add more details to the penis but i would ended up redoing all of it so i didnt bother xD) also the shadow directions depending on the light, looking for the pussy and penis reference iss a pain when the net is filled with AI images (i dont really mind AI at first, but now im annoyed at them xD)

Added boob job and thigh job
Added more color on the blowjob bath scene.

Someone may have finished before you, but to be honest yours fits the the games art style better and i prefer it. Not to say the other ones bad, i don't wanna diss hes hard work but i think yours is higher quality. I think it would be a complete waste if you didn't finish now. People can pick which one they prefer...

Yeah AI has taken over the internet. Although you can avoid it pretty easy as well. Places like

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and

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which have a ton of anime pictures and have ai images tagged as ai generated. Another place that is focused more on doujinshi/gamecgrips/artistcg is

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, although if you were to go to e-hentai i would really try to get into

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which is the sister site that that has more content. It's fairly easy to get into, i can't down play how good this site is Although if you take that route and can't figure out how to get in with a little googling, you can direct message me here and i can help.

Now with that big old yap over...

The newest images i noticed the extra details you have added to the penis You really notice it in the boobjob image, its really well done and you still keep outdoing your self each post. Also.. Damn that thighjob scene is hot right?

Im finding it hard to even try to critique you now but ill try... In the blow job scene the shaft texture is different to the boob job's scene, the boob job shaft looks better, it looks less flat because it has better texturing? I am being nitpicky here and wouldn't notice it if i didn't see both scenes side by side so it would look fine in game. You asked for cirque and i still try to give you some where i can since you asked for it

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I didnt take drawing more seriously since i never planned to use it as a job, tho its fun if u have nothing else to do and to pass time. yeah about that, when im comparing my first release i want to cover my face lmao, as i said above im only a copycat, i probably copied an AI image XD

yeah, your acc is older than mine but way less comments xD im still grateful tho, to be honest im dissapointed by the lack of criticism or advice (after i told them not to hold back) i actually wanted to hear an outside perspective so i can improve it more.

Maybe try doing the eye first? thats what i always do, tho sometimes i would ended up fckng up the face shape xD too bad i cant find my old drawings, im pretty sure 95% of it is nsfw, i usually backed it up but i change my phone every 1-3 years, i probably fkcd up somewhere, i tot it was still there on my backup folders -_-

welp, thanks again for the suggestions and advice! and o please can u ping the author or something for the 100% uncensored, i ended up covering up his reply, im new to this so i dont know how to do it.

Does not need to be serious, even as a hobby is fine right. You have been making good use of it here lol.

Yeah the lack of comments may because of people have played a moved on from the game. I happen to have it on "watch" which notifys me of new comments to this thread. Other wise i could have just as easily missed your first post. But i also dont doubt there are some people watching but are just being lazy, most are probably lurkers like i normally would be. I reckon there are quite a few people liking what your doing and not saying anything.

Ah yes the eyes, even starting with them the end up all cross eyed. Maybe one day i will go back to trying to draw.. But i feel like its to late, i have to much other stuff i need to do these days and not enough time to learn new things...

 

[KIRA.]

Someone may have finished before you, but to be honest yours fits the the games art style better and i prefer it. Not to say the other ones bad, i don't wanna diss hes hard work but i think yours is higher quality. I think it would be a complete waste if you didn't finish now. People can pick which one they prefer...

Yeah AI has taken over the internet. Although you can avoid it pretty easy as well. Places like

You must be registered to see the links

and

You must be registered to see the links

which have a ton of anime pictures have it tagged as ai generated. Another place that is focused more on doujinshi/gamecgrips/artistcg ect is

You must be registered to see the links

, although if you were to go to e-hentai i would really try to get into

You must be registered to see the links

which is the sister site that that has more content. It's fairly easy to get into, i can't down play how good this site is Although if you take that route and can't figure out how to get in with a little googling, you can direct message me here and i can help.

Now with that big old yap over...

The newest images i noticed the extra details you have added to the penis You really notice it in the boobjob image, its really well done and you still keep outdoing your self each post. Also.. Damn that thighjob scene is hot right?

Im finding it hard to even try to critique you now but ill try... In the blow job scene the shaft texture is different to the boob job's scene, the boob job shaft looks better, it looks less flat because it has better texturing? I am being nitpicky here and wouldn't notice it if i didn't see both scenes side by side so it would look fine in game. You asked for cirque and i still try to give you some where i can since you asked for it

You must be registered to see the links

Does not need to be serious, even as a hobby is fine right. You have been making good use of it here lol.

Yeah the lack of comments may because of people have played a moved on from the game. I happen to have it on "watch" which notifys me of new comments to this thread. Other wise i could have just as easily missed your first post. But i also dont doubt there are some people watching but are just being lazy, most are probably lurkers like i normally would be. I reckon there are quite a few people liking what your doing and not saying anything.

Ah yes the eyes, even starting with them the end up all cross eyed. Maybe one day i will go back to trying to draw.. But i feel like its to late, i have to much other stuff i need to do these days and not enough time to learn new things...

all right then, ill finish, but ill take my time on this one, im tired of reuploading this on mega xD i will finish everything first for the final release.

woah, now that is an expert talking lmao, i usually just check reddit if it has dedicated sub for that singular position,i also like that most sub i visit there doesnt alllow ai, about gelbooru and danbooru i think its the same as r34 that i use (ai for poses is fine but the details like clit is trash), looking for h doujins is fine too, but looking for the specific pose is a pain, even with the tags, i dont want to look on 30-300 pages for that single page that i want, as for the cg im using hitomi, now ive never heard of exhentai, im gonna check it out.

as for the boobjob, i found an image exactly with that pose, and i copied everything even the shadows lol, i really need to learn more about it, i tried imagining the direction of the light, but i think the art itself is a mess, some parts im not sure why there is shadows in it (or maybe im just dumb). at the thighjob scene, i got difficulties on the head, i redraw it multiple fuckng times, and kept looking for the right image, im quit surprise myself to learn something new every pose lol. i also want to follow the original so her pussy exposureon this scene is limited, i added more like exposing the clit but i decided to redraw it and follow the orignal pattern based on my imagination and that fuckng white censorship (good thing its the right choice, cause the next scene has the cum/wet exactly at that position, if i changed i, it woudnt match and i would need to alter it again.

alright then lol, thanks, im trying to match the dudes current color for the texture but i guess it its not enough, ill try to match it to the boob job texture. (i think i followed every suggestion u made lol, and i learned to save the file(psd) so i wont be tracing it again by scratch, should be easy to change its texture).

i usually like that too, but i dont hesitate to ask questions when i need to, like when im stucked in the game, if its worth it, or if there is ntr lmao. would be nice if they liked it

yeah, when we got older we dont really have time even tho we wanted to do it, ive got like 300gb of unwatched anime, and games here that i collect but majority of those is still untouched. but its never too late, as long as youre having fun, thats all that matters.

now im sorry for the long yap xD but what do u think about this? im stucked on this and ive already redraw it multiple times, ive tried adjusting the shape of the pussy lips and reshaping it and currently stucked with this state. im still thinking if should change the shape before adding more details in it. ive also redraw the penis in cowgirl scene. about the shadows, the light shoud be in the front but if i remove it the penis would look flat -_-