In my opinion the whole premise the game relied on was very weak from the start. The MC's background felt odd and I thought the whole story would've worked better if he was someone Mary's age and they are living together through other arrangement other than "Hi, I'm your best buddy! We haven't seen each other in ages, but let my hot daughter live with you for absolutely no fucking reason other than the fact I might very well be a sociopath!". Also, the fact the MC, who is a very rich and successful middle-aged man mind you, seems to have no life, no personality and no drive whatsoever was a very big dissapointment. He's like a teenager who seeks validation from his high school crush.
The writing and characters are bland. There are no choices that influence the story that much and overall I thought the game isn't bad, but it lacks the spark to make it special like Haley's Story, for example, which is another similar VN currently in development.
The writing and characters are bland. There are no choices that influence the story that much and overall I thought the game isn't bad, but it lacks the spark to make it special like Haley's Story, for example, which is another similar VN currently in development.