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In other news, great narrative and great storytelling for Ch.3, even though I'm beginning to understand the plotline revolving the mother's passing and that guy (me remembering names 1577447485256.png ) who got fired. If there's no twist, it may end up predictable, but it's still a great story with a lot of legitimate emotions, you could feel the tension when Macy went berserk on Brooke. Well done.
 

TommyTuba

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naughtyroad, just wanted to let you know you're doing absolutely great. Your writing is among the best I've seen in terms of giving characters a real voice. Too many writers in the genre I think lean too heavily on the cheesy porn flick (which is fine I suppose, comes with the territory) but your writing really helps suspend disbelief.
Agree. The writing is very clever. This is the only game where I actually enjoy reading the dialog and don’t just skip through to get to the next scene.
 

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I have played the last update and this is what i was saying about the reason for such behavior in Macy and i was no disappointed the reason is strong enough for her being mad at herself and maybe "blaming a bit" his father cuz her obsession with him, damn can't fucking wait for the next update if all goes well i will support you in January you are definitely one of the best developers in here. UvVukMYygtu5XYOyes.gif
 

Dude505

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naughtyroad Hey let me start of first by congratulating you with this great game. I personally really love it, it's obvious that a lot of work has been put into it and it really paid off. However I do have one question, and it really is a question ( no criticisms or recomandation). Is there a possibility, a choice that I missed or one that will be available in a future update, to NOT have Macy and Denise get sexual? Or is it essential to the story you wish to tell that they will always atleast experiment with eachother?
 
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One of the few VNs here that actually have a great backstory and script.

Also one of the few VNs that i really dont care if MC will fuck anyone. My main concern is to see the story progression.

Strange huh?


I ve said that before and i ll say it again, this developer has a talent in storytelling and i really hope he/she/they will make something out of it other than creating porn VN.

Regarding the update, it was a perfect connecting chapter to the starting scene of the game, it did a full circle and explained some of the characters true intentions and back story.

Also, this was a VERY, VERY, VERY LENGTHY UPDATE. A HUGE UPDATE IN TERMS OF PLAYTIME.

There is nothing else one could ask for.

Congratulations naughtyroad for this amazing VN.
 

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naughtyroad Hey let me start of first by congratulating you with this great game. I personally really love it, it's obvious that a lot of work has been put into it and it really paid off. However I do have one question, and it really is a question ( no criticisms or recomandation). Is there a possibility, a choice that I missed or one that will be available in a future update, to NOT have Macy and Denise get sexual? Or is it essential to the story you wish to tell that they will always atleast experiment with eachother?
Them 2 together or sexual with the dad.

If sexual with the dad yes but it will be a very short VN because most of the content is centered around the daughters.
The 4 in the office are only side dishes.
 
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Dude505

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Them 2 together or sexual with the dad.

If sexual with the dad yes but it will be a very short VN because most of the content is centered around the daughters.
The 4 in the office are only side dishes.
Yes I meant them two together. It's not that I perceive it as some kind of ntr, I'm just not that much into lesbian or threesome stuff.
 

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Miðgarðsormr

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This game is ... just wow ... the writing , the characters ... my new favorite by far.
Oddly creators previous work is quite bad which makes this massive jump in quality even more impressive.
I don't see it that way. "First Contact" was hillarious in my eyes and the writing was already good. But the models etc. could have been better. However i still think that good writing overrules any render or animation you can think of simply by the immersion you creating. And that was already present in "First Contact" at least in my eyes.
The best writer in the world can't show you what he is capable of when he has to visually show it to you through renders. Cause thats a skill that doesn't come with writing and is something different entirely.

So i assume (Naughtyroad will surely correct me if i am wrong) that when making this game he practiced alot with how to make his renders etc. better before starting a new project.
Because when i think about "First Contact" i can't stop laughing at one Scene when u get killed because you try to fuck and despite seeing the female who is big enough to simply rip you apart with one hand you just HAVE to go with the option. And then you die xD (Worth it)

My first book was bought and published by around 2000 copies. I got 1,50€ (the euro didn't exist back then) for a selled book. If all would have sold i would have made 3k! But not even half of them did so i ended up making around 1.2k and lost all hope as i wrote 6 months for it to be finished. So i made 206€ in a month and knew this shit will get me nowhere.
Now i can live from writing with mostly no problem.

But a VN is similar. You can work literally for months and present it to the world and even when it sells good (many patreons) if you just can't make a living of it, that just hurts as you invest weeks or even months of your free time to create something and when you don't make at least a bit of money you feel like it is a failure.

It is exactly when u fail that you can improve and if "First Contact" was a failure (i just assumed that) in naughtyroad eyes then he took his time to analyze why and tried to improve for his next project.

If that was actually the case then i am glad he failed the first time cause this game is simply put amazing.


When you finish Chapter 3 and gotta wait another 6 months for chapter 4.
I don't think it will take that long this time as his patreons will surely increase after this update :)
 
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