What a fantastic update. Excellently crafted. Specifically:
1. This scene
was probably my favorite in the entire update. These slow pan shots are usually pretty lame, but this one worked amazing. The dress built up tension and expectation for how her hair would look - and then the picture on the right (which I had totally forgotten about until it moved into the shot) really made everything very explicit. Outstanding composition.
2. The office Moirae were overall my favorite characters. Just silly enough, just creepy enough. I know they will be minor characters but I really liked them a lot. I'm kinda digging the mythology thematics overall.
3. I have no idea how much work it is to have all the characters blink but honestly it adds a lot to the overall feel. I hope you keep it up.
4. The character movements are done well. I liked the scene where Denise was nervously circling Macy. All that movement really added a lot to the feel of the scene.
Only complaint is that if you could add something to the day transitions so they don't get skipped without their own mouse press? I missed a few of these and was kind of confused before I went back and saw that for those you had to wait for them to show up.