K2SO

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generally I don't get into arguments like this but Maya...educate yourself. The Hebrew (Jewish is one of those words that is an insult only when its used that way) don't depict themselves that way. I know I am one.
Art: It grew on me. I would have liked the younger one to have a little wider up top and less... long, like her mother, but I understand where the author is going. And I would have liked the older one to have a little less jewelry, and she looks better without the makeup.
Story: The story is touching and intriguing, and might progress a little faster than some others on this site. There is more of a reason here why the MC and the daughters will make the choices that they do.
I will be watching this one. Great work.
 

Jack-ish

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Jul 12, 2018
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I don't know whether to assume the dev has really bad eyesight or really bad taste.
 

Banish

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So, I have played this.

It is a well made, good rendered thing. Yes, the girls look like, you know, humans. Who happen to be a bit off of what is expected from a bimbo, before surgery and all. I am more into northern european girls, doesn't stop me from being really interested in them. The story is a good one. The decisions were interesting to make. And the caring for the girls (I play with them being my daughters) is very good transported, so I even felt to compelled to knock at the door every single time. Well done.

On the not so good side, it is a bit monocausal. I'd like a bit more variation than being the girlkeeper. I really hope the company, the coworker and other stuff happen to be more present. Did I just say I miss work in this game?!

I want more of this!
That's where you realize it's actually really well written, because i did the same thing with the doors.
First time, i went in without knocking. I mean, the girl is yelling..you'd rush and just open thinking something is wrong.
Then after being more engaged into the story..and with what happened to her..i care for her..i thought i didn't want to weird her out she doesn't need it, i am gonna knock doors.

If a game on its first release make you feel for the characters like that to the point you change your behavior..
it probably means you nailed it (y).
 

Een Vieze Vent

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Aug 5, 2017
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Wow, this was a great first release and a breath of fresh air all together. The models look great and are unique compared to most stuff that's coming out these days. Also compliments to the writing since it kept me hooked from start to finish, gave me a 'awww' moment when it reached the end hoping that there would be even more, plus I spotted zero grammatical errors which is always nice in my book.

I hope @naughtyroad can keep this quality up with further installments and that it will reach an even bigger audience. That being said, it already managed to grab my attention and I can't wait for a new release, so off I go to give the dev some support.
 

TheKryptonian

Truth, Justice, and TheKryptonian way...
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Nov 22, 2018
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Whoever said dad simulator summed it up perfectly. This might be the first porn game where I actively try to avoid any sexual content with the 2 girls. Besides the fact they are just not at all attractive but they are just to sweet where it only triggers my dad instincts and I just go into protective/supportive mode. I hope there will be multiple paths where you can just be the good dad and not creepy uncut vegetables wiener dad.
 

botc76

The Crawling Chaos, Bringer of Strange Joy
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There's a lot to like about this.

Good renders, good story, good writing.
I have to admit I don't quite get why all the women have faces that look a bit like caricatures (even a bit racist ones).
I like that they don't look like every other rendered woman, but especially the younger one borders on being really ugly, including her godawful looking tits.

Apart from that I really like this one.
 
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Avaron1974

Resident Lesbian
Aug 22, 2018
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In a sea of generic Daz characters we've seen many times before to the point of absolute boredom I welcome any variation in character.

The dev should absolutely not change anything.

Not all games are for everyone and there are plenty of other games out there.
 

TheKryptonian

Truth, Justice, and TheKryptonian way...
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Nov 22, 2018
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There's a lot to like about this.

Good renders, good story, good writing.
I have to admit I don't quite get why all the women have faces that look a bit like caricatures (even a bit racist ones).
I like that they don't look like every other rendered woman, but especially the younger one borders on being really ugly, including her godawful looking tits.

Apart from that I really like this one.
I really like the story and the writing for the characters but when all I see written about the looks of the 2 main girls is "different" and " breath of fresh air" you are instantly cutting off a huge chunk of potential support. If this is just a hobby for the dev and has no interest making a little change then more power to the dev, you do you. If he IS trying to make a few bucks with this game it definately lacks any curb appeal that unfortunately is required...
 
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jamdan

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Sep 28, 2018
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I would probably assume that people who play games for the fap wont like this game, people who play for the story will.

I dont mind the characters looks. Cartoonish, almost like more realistic sims or something. Thats probably not a good description, but its the only one I can think of lol.
 

D3ssel

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Nov 15, 2016
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This is actually pretty good!

Graphically speaking, looks are, always, utterly subjective, but I don't believe anyone would say they aren't original. And that's a HUGE thing nowadays.
It's none of that "copy-paste" Daz model nonsense we become used to. Maybe it's just me, but there's a "latina" vibe to them that I haven't seen done before. And, while I do believe that the rendering and lights could have a few improvements, I think it's pretty well done, overall. Kudos.

Most importantly: the story is actually pretty engaging and well written. The characters apparently have some depth to them. Pretty refreshing, if you ask me.

And there were quite a few interactive meaningful choices! I dig it. Little things, like the type of coffee you choose being remembered, etc... These "little" details are what great games are made of, imho.

And, to top it off, finally! An incest mod that feels like the person behind it actually took the time to make it, and not just changed the RenPy "names" and was done with. So sick of those...

All in all, this is probably a gem in the making. And I do so love finding them here in F95.
How much did I love?

Enough to become a patron. ^^

Gratz again to the developer, and please, keep up the great work, mate.
 

rodneyeatme

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Jul 19, 2017
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Well, that's not what I expected when I looked at the sample pics.

The good:
  • Models that are instantly recognized as different from the usual. Big thumbs up for doing the work.
  • That dark sun/black hole scene with the nihilistic entropy dialog was fucking great
  • The personalities are fun. Denise is adorable. Macy gets fun if you pick unwise choices.
  • I like the two emotions scoring. Not too ambitious that it makes the game unworkable, and the emotions seem important to manage for the girls.
The critique:
  • When Denise is laying on the couch, the side of her tit pokes through her nightshirt in a couple renders. Need to take it into PS and heal brush that bitch. I know it's small, but it drives me nuts.
  • Some of the glass surfaces aren't rendering past the point where they are just black speckles. Need more light and probably a different glass shader.
  • This is really nitpicky, but the most important picture in the living room is obscured by an opposite window's reflection on one of the camera angles. I'd plane it off for that camera if turning off reflections for the picture's glass surface doesn't do the trick.
  • I worry about this getting Our Fate-itis, where you wind up just caring about the girls like a real dad instead of acting like some degenerate pervert.
I really hope this gets some traction and some patrons so the guy can get himself a 1080 ti or two. He's done a lot of work and deserves to be able to show it off.
 
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