VN Ren'Py Light of My Life [Ch. 8 v0.8.1] [Naughty Road]

[apnea111]

Just finished it abd here are my thoughts

Amazing dialoques and atmosphere. Music Is a plus. Top class in renders quality, facial expressions etc.
Clearly the developer Is capable of producing a top notch game.

But bare me with unique models. The characters are ugly and thats it. An ugly fetish tag should be impemented.

Clearly being able to produce a top game and you choose to start with a big handicap. And you have to overcome this with dialoques story and atmosphere. Some like this uniquenes, Some can bare it, Some dont like it at all. And you narrow your audience from start.

And you limit youself from start. Its a shame because besides the ugly models your game Is among the best i have seen.

Good luck with getting patrons, financing and developing this.

 

[Cervantes123]

Just finished it abd here are my thoughts

Amazing dialoques and atmosphere. Music Is a plus. Top class in renders quality, facial expressions etc.
Clearly the developer Is capable of producing a top notch game.

But bare me with unique models. The characters are ugly and thats it. An ugly fetish tag should be impemented.

Clearly being able to produce a top game and you choose to start with a big handicap. And you have to overcome this with dialoques story and atmosphere. Some like this uniquenes, Some can bare it, Some dont like it at all. And you narrow your audience from start.

And you limit youself from start. Its a shame because besides the ugly models your game Is among the best i have seen.

Good luck with getting patrons, financing and developing this.

I think that the looks of the characters gives a lot of realism to the story and also gives the game a lot of uniqueness because seing this characters they will instantly get your attention.

 

[ThunderRob]

Just finished it abd here are my thoughts

Amazing dialoques and atmosphere. Music Is a plus. Top class in renders quality, facial expressions etc.
Clearly the developer Is capable of producing a top notch game.

But bare me with unique models. The characters are ugly and thats it. An ugly fetish tag should be impemented.

Clearly being able to produce a top game and you choose to start with a big handicap. And you have to overcome this with dialoques story and atmosphere. Some like this uniquenes, Some can bare it, Some dont like it at all. And you narrow your audience from start.

And you limit youself from start. Its a shame because besides the ugly models your game Is among the best i have seen.

Good luck with getting patrons, financing and developing this.

the problem with "ugly" tag is..a good many of us do not find them ugly...so that remains a personal preference thing and not tag-worthy.
i mean..i always thought Farrah Fawcett was ugly..with her buttcrack chin thin pointy nose and reedy eyes when not makeup'd...millions thought she was most beautiful woman alive(i was a Jaclyn Smith guy ) its so subjective..thats why it cant be tagged.

 

[goatwhisperer3]

not sure how people can find this kind of faces "realistic"... there is still a lot of grey area between "plastic barbie" and clicking "randomize" in the character creaton screen ( ' -')
apparently dev puts work into the game tho, thats a good thing so gl hf to anyone deciding to follow this

 

[Joshua Tree]

Just finished it abd here are my thoughts

Amazing dialoques and atmosphere. Music Is a plus. Top class in renders quality, facial expressions etc.
Clearly the developer Is capable of producing a top notch game.

But bare me with unique models. The characters are ugly and thats it. An ugly fetish tag should be impemented.

Clearly being able to produce a top game and you choose to start with a big handicap. And you have to overcome this with dialoques story and atmosphere. Some like this uniquenes, Some can bare it, Some dont like it at all. And you narrow your audience from start.

And you limit youself from start. Its a shame because besides the ugly models your game Is among the best i have seen.

Good luck with getting patrons, financing and developing this.

Should be careful with such. Who knows, maybe the creator is of heritage/ethnicity that such critique could hit close to home.
Don't be ugly on the inside man The world is a big place with lots of variations, shapes and forms. How would you feel about being labeled ugly because you part of a specific ethnicity? People get draw to other people of certain features and traits similar to their own. But don't think its fair to go around and call everyone outside that sphere for ugly, undesired and so forth.

 

[AntonioGustavo]

Just found this game and played through. I love it! Please don't listen to the naysayers, the girls are super cute and I love that they have a different look. Great job so far. The pics don't do them justice, actually, they are very cute.

 

[ThunderRob]

i'm just gonna say it..this first release ranks with the first release of AL and DA..and is close to the first release of BaDIK and CoBD in terms of quality in renders and writing..the reason i say this is..because Philly and DrPinkCake do NOT waver from their visions..so stick to your vision completely..ignore naysayers..focus on the tale you want to weave..before anyone jumps on me using THOSE games as reference..i said the FIRST release of each...if @naughtyroad matches or surpasses the beauty of this first release in future releases then this could rank right with them in totality as the finest on this site...also..i said quality..not "personal opinion of beauty" not the same thing..whether you like the dames or not..they are really well done.

 

[CoffeeDrinker]

This story caught me completely by surprise and hit very close to home. Years ago, I lost my wife at a very young age and was left on my own with a 2 year old to raise. I have to say, this story is so very well written to the point where it made me a bit sad at certain parts and brought me back to those days after my loss.

I was so captured by the writing and these two young girls that it honestly makes no difference to me what they look like. The protective and nurturing parent was brought to the forefront. If this game turns out to be more of an "Adult" as opposed to a "Porn" game; that's alright by me.

Thank you for a very rare game and for being able to bring out such an emotional response. Keep up the excellent work and don't let anyone change your mind.

 

[Patpong]

Fabulous game already - will follow this one very closely. So refreshing to not see the same old, same old, cut and paste characters from 40 other games.

 

[kopiluwaq]

Story 10/10, the ladies 10/10.
Good job Mr. NaughtyRoad! I will follow this game till the end!

 

[trippleK]

This story caught me completely by surprise and hit very close to home. Years ago, I lost my wife at a very young age and was left on my own with a 2 year old to raise. I have to say, this story is so very well written to the point where it made me a bit sad at certain parts and brought me back to those days after my loss.

I was so captured by the writing and these two young girls that it honestly makes no difference to me what they look like. The protective and nurturing parent was brought to the forefront. If this game turns out to be more of an "Adult" as opposed to a "Porn" game; that's alright by me.

Thank you for a very rare game and for being able to bring out such an emotional response. Keep up the excellent work and don't let anyone change your mind.

Larp

 

[naughtyroad]

This story caught me completely by surprise and hit very close to home.

Thank you, that means a lot to me. When writing this, I was honestly most concerned with finding the right tone for that part of the story, and being respectful of it. Not have it be just a quickly glossed over excuse to spend a lot of time alone with an equally unphased live-in teen.

Having said that, the characters are heading in a certain direction and I've not yet settled on how avoidable certain developments will be. And if they are avoidable, it may just be a fast track to an quick alternative ending. I'd like to offer as much agency as I can to the player, but I can only create a limited amount of content in the time available and branches tend to tack on time exponentially.

But, I've prepared a service update/patch (absolutely no new story content) where you can easily change the relationship labels in the game through the preferences menu, so if it turns out some future content is too close for comfort, you can dial in some emotional distance. I'll have it up for download soon.

 

[User_1217780]

I think anyone would love this game... even the quick fappers... if they actually allowed themselves a chance to play it. I just finished it, and it's one of the better games with some seriously hot (but subtle) content. Also, the daughters are the type of gals who's looks grow on you, especially with the charm of their personalities. And imo the wife is smoking regardless.

(Also trust me when I say the vast majority of those commenting about their looks would drop their pants in an instant if either one of them showed up in their rooms right now.)

If one of those "things" show up in our room tonight, I will shoot them in the head. Trust me.
Hope You love gipsies, mate.
About the cover... welll, this cover is too bad for my taste.
And that´s all. Chars are ugly as fuck. Im not gonna argue. You love it? Great for You. Im just saying what I think.
Have a good day. Or night.

 

[naughtyroad]

If one of those "things" show up in our room tonight, I will shoot them in the head. Trust me.
Hope You love gipsies, mate. (...)

I mostly try to stay out a discussion that's mostly about personal tastes, because really, who am I to tell you or anyone what they should or shouldn't like.

Having said that, I really don't get the gipsies slur that's being thrown around, and it's especially jarring at this time of the year, when the place I live near at this moment is preparing for a national day of remembrance for, among many others, about a million or so of that particular ethnicity that perished. So, respectfully, pipe down mate.

To anyone else who's been critical of my work, thank you for taking the time to respond and give feedback, even though you disliked it, I really appreciate it and I hope I can do better by you if and when the next project comes along.

 

[Truckstopcowboy]

Looks good, kinda a tease right now lol

 

[FlarpCommander]

I dig it, especially the uniqueness, it's refreshing to see something that isn't yet another stock DAZ/Honey Select assets bore that goes from 0 to 100 with zero build up and frankly no real characters either. Only thing that's odd to me is calling the MC "sir" , like, I know it's a thing among some Indo/Paki people, but it's a bit weird considering the level of familiarity these characters are supposed to have with one another.

 

[Truckstopcowboy]

I dig it, especially the uniqueness, it's refreshing to see something that isn't yet another stock DAZ/Honey Select assets bore that goes from 0 to 100 with zero build up and frankly no real characters either. Only thing that's odd to me is calling the MC "sir" , like, I know it's a thing among some Indo/Paki people, but it's a bit weird considering the level of familiarity these characters are supposed to have with one another.

It's because of Patreon, no incest policy. Aka anti freedom of speech

 

[Tatittyana Withebutt81]

It's because of Patreon, no incest policy. Aka anti freedom of speech

Aka China~~~~~~

 

[123qwet12]

This game has some amazing writing, I can't even beat it because I'm too busy holding back tears

 

[gramaton]

wow... i am actually reading the dialogs! thats a rare. it's a nice game and art style is quiet original, girls are very cute. keep it up dev, but pls, dont take months to update ur game