VN Ren'Py Light of My Life [Ch. 8 v0.8.1] [Naughty Road]

[FlarpCommander]

It's because of Patreon, no incest policy. Aka anti freedom of speech

I get that, but the title is overly formal, addressing the MC by name or anything other than sir is just more natural in casual conversation with someone you know.

 

[RogueKnightUK]

I get that, but the title is overly formal, addressing the MC by name or anything other than sir is just more natural in casual conversation with someone you know.

Depends where you are from. There are still many places where 'Sir' is a normal term of respect for any male, and it derives from Sire, literally 'Father'. In many parts of the USA sons and daughters will address their fathers as 'Sir' in a formal situation or when showing respect - such as if being chided or castigated, or given stern instruction.

 

[naughtyroad]

(...) Only thing that's odd to me is calling the MC "sir" , like, I know it's a thing among some Indo/Paki people, but it's a bit weird considering the level of familiarity these characters are supposed to have with one another. (...)

True that, and it does sound awkward, but like others have pointed out there are technical reasons the game releases with those defaults. Luckily, as of v0.2.1, those are just defaults that you can modify in the preference screen, so if you want your girls to address the main character as papá or maybe pitah-ji, you can now.

(...) but pls, dont take months to update ur game

I promise to do my best, but I must be honest in telling you that the work has to be done in my spare time, and it's a lot of work actually...
It may be solved by putting out smaller bits at a time, but personally I hate updates that get me all worked up and then offer 15 minutes of additional content leaving me staring at the main menu thinking "where's the rest?". I need to think on it...

 

[Vasy]

I really, really enjoyed this. The story is sweet, occasionally heartbreaking, and just very well written overall. Also, I really like the character models. It's a nice change of pace from the same 15 tired presets featured in the majority of the VNs here, and the more stylized faces had a level of expressiveness not often seen in these games.

Kudos to the dev, can't wait to see more.

 

[naughtyroad]

@naughtyroad please read all the reviews

I have, and I'm blown away, honestly. For a short game first chapter with, as someone rightly pointed out, little or no fappable content, getting that much good vibes is more than I'd hoped for.

On the other hand... no pressure for the next chapter, right...

 

[Deleted member 396172]

This story caught me completely by surprise and hit very close to home. Years ago, I lost my wife at a very young age and was left on my own with a 2 year old to raise. I have to say, this story is so very well written to the point where it made me a bit sad at certain parts and brought me back to those days after my loss.

I was so captured by the writing and these two young girls that it honestly makes no difference to me what they look like. The protective and nurturing parent was brought to the forefront. If this game turns out to be more of an "Adult" as opposed to a "Porn" game; that's alright by me.

Thank you for a very rare game and for being able to bring out such an emotional response. Keep up the excellent work and don't let anyone change your mind.

sorry for you lost .

 

[Deleted member 396172]

NOT bad gj , i am looking for the next update !

 

[Hermit76]

Of course tastes are different. But let's be honest: The best written story does not help, if you choose to create a graphic game or novel and the characters are that ugly like they are here. I mean, the girls look like someone combined a goblin from the deepest valley in southeast Anatolia, an orc from the most outlying mountains of northwest Nagorno-Karabakh, a roadkill and a possum placenta and then added 20 generations of inbreeding to it - probably makes us incest&pregnancy lovers here rethink our fetish...
As a story (or even text adventure) it might be fine, but as soon as it is supported by this character design:

 

[TheNobster]

I am soooo loving this game. The girls may not be everyones cup of tea, but I for one find them both refreshing (not the same old generic Daz supermodel sisters) and somewhat beautiful in their own way. The story is great and the writing is well above par bordering on superb.

When I logged in and saw an update I don't mind saying there was a certain skip in my step ^_^

 

[dx_boost]

I promise to do my best, but I must be honest in telling you that the work has to be done in my spare time, and it's a lot of work actually...
It may be solved by putting out smaller bits at a time, but personally I hate updates that get me all worked up and then offer 15 minutes of additional content leaving me staring at the main menu thinking "where's the rest?". I need to think on it...

I like the way you think. Keeping updates to a short release schedule tends to produce shorter updates so I'd recommend just developing till you feel there is a good amount of content ready to release.

 

[Deleted member 527775]

what the heck is wrong with their eyes and eyebrows? are they from chernobly or something?

 

[edomoega]

Interesting story... I will wait for next update.

 

[rspkers]

Of course tastes are different. But let's be honest: The best written story does not help, if you choose to create a graphic game or novel and the characters are that ugly like they are here. I mean, the girls look like someone combined a goblin from the deepest valley in southeast Anatolia, an orc from the most outlying mountains of northwest Nagorno-Karabakh, a roadkill and a possum placenta and then added 20 generations of inbreeding to it - probably makes us incest&pregnancy lovers here rethink our fetish...
As a story (or even text adventure) it might be fine, but as soon as it is supported by this character design:

LOL

Their faces are a bit painful to look at, yeah, and it's probably the kind of porn Pinocchio would fap to, but the dev deserves some serious bonus points for using his own models rather than copypasting the same 5 or 6 fucking daz3D models found in all of these other games. Also the writing is pretty damn good for what it is.

I have to say though, the asses on these models are on point.
Nice and thicc.

I also think this may have been the hardest choice in the game so far.
Do I lie to her, or tell the truth by saying nothing and break her heart?


Jokes and memes aside, I think the dev shouldn't really change much. This is a unique and refreshing experience from the cookie cutter garbage being churned out regularly here. Would I appreciate sexier faces? Absolutely. Could their tits be less terrifying? You bet. But, I still think it has its own bit of charm. Great writing, unique models, and choices that have effect. Keeping an eye on this one.

 

[Joshua Tree]

Of course tastes are different. But let's be honest: The best written story does not help, if you choose to create a graphic game or novel and the characters are that ugly like they are here. I mean, the girls look like someone combined a goblin from the deepest valley in southeast Anatolia, an orc from the most outlying mountains of northwest Nagorno-Karabakh, a roadkill and a possum placenta and then added 20 generations of inbreeding to it - probably makes us incest&pregnancy lovers here rethink our fetish...
As a story (or even text adventure) it might be fine, but as soon as it is supported by this character design:

Just because they are ugly for you, doesn't necessary mean they are ugly for everyone else. If you don't like it, it's plenty of other games around that will suit you better. Smearing on thick as you do here, feels more like provoke than simply express you find the models undesired.

Maybe a shocking truth to you, but these models in this game, probably represent "everyday" people much better than the "runway" plastic models you find in most other games around here.

 

[botc76]

I don't know. I find the older sister not unattractive, including her face. I mean, it's a bit over the top, a bit caricature like, but it's not like I can't appreciate her.

The younger sister is sweet and cute, but not even with the most generous and forgiving eyes could I call her beautiful or even pretty.

But if I'm honest, it's not that much the face that bothers me, it's the body.
I know tits like hers are natural and exist, but well, this is a game so fuck realism and just give us some nice beautiful, perky tits.
I mean, there were moments while playing, where I thought their faces were too much, but the only moment I was really tempted to stop playing was when we see her tits completely for the first time.

I can live with thick thighs and a phat ass, even if that's not my fetish (it's better than supermodel like bony ghosts), but I am a tits man and I want them to be beautiful. I like them small and big, in all colours and sizes, but they have to look as if I want to suck and bite them and fondle them to my hearts content and that's just definitely not happening with the younger girl.

 

[Jiraz]

I loving the game, story is great !.
See many are complaining how they look, and will say at first they did kinda look "different", feel they had more of a exotic arabian look, but got used to them and liking them more as time go, fell like it gives them their own look and character, tired of all the Lisa or dmd characters out there
Cant wait for the next release !

 

[Rince556]

From my point of view the fact that the characters in this game do not look like in any other game is one of the reasons why I think that has has been one of the best new releases in recent times. If people do not like it go play other games - me I´m hooked and I´m waiting eager for the next release. And the writing is more than promising as well. Thumps up!

 

[trdx]

I like the game, good writing so far. The girls are not ugly and they actually look better then I thought they would be looking from the first post. The art style is refreshing.

If someone doesn't like their more "ethno" look - fine. But there is no way that's not an above average girl in any country, especially in countries where majority of population is obese.

 

[zephnm]

I really like the change of pace the girls have in their look. It's not the same facial assets used over and over by so many games. Very nice work.

 

[yaalzaruth]

Nice seeing something else than the standard 3D models, like every other game. And tattoos are always a plus for me.