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Miðgarðsormr

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I'm not sure about the 3 office amigos, but I could see Brooke become a "step-mom" type figure for Denise and Macy, that could be a 3-person harem.
I could see that happening but Macy would have to be already in the sheets with the MC and Denise multiple times for that to work (to realize she can't satisfy his needs alone), cause otherwise there is no way in hell her personality will allow that women even near the MC.
She has a dominant personality so in a harem like scenario potential threats to her are eliminated instantly.

Those women (dominant ones) are the kind that when another women is talking with their man in a club get either a drink thrown in their face (even when just asking where the restroom is) or straight up beaten up for trying to hook up with her possession.


But a nice idea for people who would want a harem kind of thing ^^
 
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a1fox3

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If I accept Brooke invitation to a date earlier (chapter 1) will it block anything? Or is it like another path that you can take or not later?
And I kinda assume if you go with "the joke" with her there will be consequences,just wondering how much content will be permamently (for the run) locked
No, she and the other 3 in the office are just side dishes.
The main story and most of the content will be centered around your daughters.

If you do not go for your daughters then it will be a very short VN for you.
 

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naughtyroad, just wanted to let you know you're doing absolutely great. Your writing is among the best I've seen in terms of giving characters a real voice. Too many writers in the genre I think lean too heavily on the cheesy porn flick (which is fine I suppose, comes with the territory) but your writing really helps suspend disbelief.
 

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In other news, great narrative and great storytelling for Ch.3, even though I'm beginning to understand the plotline revolving the mother's passing and that guy (me remembering names 1577447485256.png ) who got fired. If there's no twist, it may end up predictable, but it's still a great story with a lot of legitimate emotions, you could feel the tension when Macy went berserk on Brooke. Well done.
 

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naughtyroad, just wanted to let you know you're doing absolutely great. Your writing is among the best I've seen in terms of giving characters a real voice. Too many writers in the genre I think lean too heavily on the cheesy porn flick (which is fine I suppose, comes with the territory) but your writing really helps suspend disbelief.
Agree. The writing is very clever. This is the only game where I actually enjoy reading the dialog and don’t just skip through to get to the next scene.
 

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I have played the last update and this is what i was saying about the reason for such behavior in Macy and i was no disappointed the reason is strong enough for her being mad at herself and maybe "blaming a bit" his father cuz her obsession with him, damn can't fucking wait for the next update if all goes well i will support you in January you are definitely one of the best developers in here. UvVukMYygtu5XYOyes.gif
 

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naughtyroad Hey let me start of first by congratulating you with this great game. I personally really love it, it's obvious that a lot of work has been put into it and it really paid off. However I do have one question, and it really is a question ( no criticisms or recomandation). Is there a possibility, a choice that I missed or one that will be available in a future update, to NOT have Macy and Denise get sexual? Or is it essential to the story you wish to tell that they will always atleast experiment with eachother?
 
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One of the few VNs here that actually have a great backstory and script.

Also one of the few VNs that i really dont care if MC will fuck anyone. My main concern is to see the story progression.

Strange huh?


I ve said that before and i ll say it again, this developer has a talent in storytelling and i really hope he/she/they will make something out of it other than creating porn VN.

Regarding the update, it was a perfect connecting chapter to the starting scene of the game, it did a full circle and explained some of the characters true intentions and back story.

Also, this was a VERY, VERY, VERY LENGTHY UPDATE. A HUGE UPDATE IN TERMS OF PLAYTIME.

There is nothing else one could ask for.

Congratulations naughtyroad for this amazing VN.
 

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naughtyroad Hey let me start of first by congratulating you with this great game. I personally really love it, it's obvious that a lot of work has been put into it and it really paid off. However I do have one question, and it really is a question ( no criticisms or recomandation). Is there a possibility, a choice that I missed or one that will be available in a future update, to NOT have Macy and Denise get sexual? Or is it essential to the story you wish to tell that they will always atleast experiment with eachother?
Them 2 together or sexual with the dad.

If sexual with the dad yes but it will be a very short VN because most of the content is centered around the daughters.
The 4 in the office are only side dishes.
 
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Dude505

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Them 2 together or sexual with the dad.

If sexual with the dad yes but it will be a very short VN because most of the content is centered around the daughters.
The 4 in the office are only side dishes.
Yes I meant them two together. It's not that I perceive it as some kind of ntr, I'm just not that much into lesbian or threesome stuff.
 

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(...) Is there a possibility (...) to NOT have Macy and Denise get sexual? Or is it essential to the story you wish to tell that they will always atleast experiment with eachother?
Sorry no, that part is beyond your control as MC. It would also
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