To
naughtyroad :
I just want to say how much I am impressed by your VN,
Light of my Life, and completely addicted to it. And that, for many reasons.
I had so many surprised since I have played for the first time, Chapter I, but with the last update, Chapter II, I was more than excited to see how it is brilliant and intelligent ! I never saw a VN like that, as far as by the characters, the story itself, than by the cultural references.
As I already said about the characters, they are more than amazing. Please don't care too much about those who said that they look bad, ugly or anything bad. In fact, they are beautiful in my eyes. The shapes (specially the boobs !), the faces, the body positions that they took, everything is great ! Without forgetting that they are unique as design ! No one (from what I know - I am not the more knowing person on this forum) used this kind of graphics before. So for me, it's a big turn on.
From what I saw of the story until the end of Chapter II, the romance, relationship and proximity between characters are at a good pace, evolving well, and intelligently introduced. I can be a little bit tainted in my opinion by the fact that I am more attracted (really much) by the youngest. But, at the end of the Chapter II, we already see that she will introduce the older in her plan. And this is great how you have created the bond until now.
I really like the innocence of the youngest, but in the same time she is intelligent and not dumb at all.
I like the fact that you come back the mother to life, through dreams (this is brilliant and rare). Wish she could magically come back really to life ! But seriously, I appreciate her, how she spoke to her youngest (ref: good intention), and....yeah....her body is awesome !
I am less attracted by the story with the main co-worker honestly. But, I am very intrigued by the S-3 (or S-2 and Z) ! They have their own charm, and cannot wait to see how this plot will evolved. About the main co-worker, I just hope I didn't went in a direction that will fuck my relationship with the older daughter.
On the Chapter II, you caught me totally with the museum visit, and the cultural references. THIS WAS EXCEPTIONAL !!! Maybe it's because I am well educated and I know well paintings, arts and artists of the Renaissance, religions and Bible stories, as much that I have visited so many museums in the world (probably spent 2 full weeks of my life on the second and third floor of the Musée du Louvre in Paris, just for admiring the Renaissance paintings). But this way to introduce the future story was just brilliant ! Please, just continue to be so intelligent in this VN !
I have appreciated the long update that you gave us. I don't know if you are going to continue in this way, but it was perfect. I played for hours yesterday, taking my time to read (and not fapping like other usual VN), appreciate, laugh at some moments, and yeah...fantasize on the youngest daughter. Oh man that I wished that the towel drops on the ground when the MC was facing her !!
Speaking about fantasy...your characters are awesome ! Just want to say that I like girls with pubic hair !
Leave it to you ! Oh, and if you want to introduce the grandmother in the story, oh my...you got me !
Enough said, I just want to confirm that I will pledge you on Patreon. I don't know for how long, but for sure, you deserve it now. I hope I will continue to enjoy this VN for a long time. Bravo!