Got a chance to play the current content.
The premise of the movie is solid and opens up good avenues for storytelling, you've done pretty good so far with them.
I know you snuck in the "Pheromones'" part of the pill as well when in the movie it was just because Bradly Cooper is just so fucking charming as to why he got so much tail.
I think the story needs a little bit of rearranging for it to work though.
MC looks like a homeless bum, why would any of these women get close enough to be affected by the pheromones?
Naomi is the most far fetched, this bum who doesn't even have a phone will hire me and give me a place to live?
Cindy's initial reaction is believable, nervous and cautious of the homeless man.
Meadow's is just not believable. Obvious homeless man comes into a expensive electronics store while she's alone and pregnant. Most women would be extremely wary in this situation but instead she's cheery and welcoming, I guess the pheromones work across the room and almost immediately? lol.
I feel like these interactions would be best moved in the story structure to AFTER MC gets cleaned up.
I cannot comment on the sex scene as I did not see it.
Don't get me wrong, fucking pregnant chicks is absolutely up my alley, I just have to have been the one to impregnate them. Meadow is still all good as a love interest for me though as she's a surrogate for her sis so everything was done through invitro, just needs to lose the baby bump so we can get started on a new one of our own.