Hey Palegrass,
At First,A big Thumps Up and Appreciation for the work u have done, u have put a lot of hardworking for the first update without any expectation and now u r getting ur rewards for it,I feel happy for you that u are getting ur due criticism and appreciation for it.people acknowledging your work is the one of the big feat for creators.i hope this game gets big viewership and recognition due it, I can see the potential for it in the story.
Okay coming to my opinion/Review:
I was sceptical about the game after seeing that its in RPG Format,was hesitant but after seeing the renders(especially The bar scene) decided to give it a shot,
And oh man what a wild ride it has been,loved the characters build up, music and the emotional character development u done with it, only thing I disliked was the half baked/half renders mixed with rpg map like what happened in Theo’s bar.hope u don’t make like that in further updates.
Some Of The scenes are really well done like the forest adventure scene, swim trip and drunk bar scene(my fav though).
Your renders are really great when its in darker situation during nights and bar scene like that u have a great details like the sweat and fear look in Lisa eyes…renders are really beautiful and have matured a lot from the start of the game.
And Lisa is really hot btw,like to see her in very skimpy outfits in the future updates.
Dialogues are great,with building up the narrative so that people get engaged with the story line and acts as a great add up to the beautiful renders
The Mix of renpy and RPG is the best thing to happen in the game, and that’s why people like it due to its format, neither too old stylish nor to visual novel style ,acts as middle man between both.
My Suggestions (let me know your thoughts on it)
1.I Hope u can add sex sounds to the sexual acts happening in the game, not for everyone but for specific scenes like threesome and gang bang scenes(u can attach some porn audios to it if u can),so that it gets a lot immersive experience to the player.
2.Coming to the Anal Play,i Really liked how Danny Teased Lisa by licking her rosebud hoped that the tease will continue a little bit over before her first anal fuck,but anal fuck in bar was suprise ..though loved it, i hope it will be great tool for teasing audience before her first anal fuck now though see doesn’t remember it, people can tease her and touch her ,and play with her bum as she refuses to every move of it.will act as a great blackmail thing as people tease her ,as she refuses but her body says another things wish there would a lot teasing with her anal play before her first anal sex(With her Consciousness).
3.BLACKMAIL!BLACKMAIL!
I wish a lot of people wish to see Lisa getting cornered and told to do naughty things,
-Like Paul gets to know Lisa’s dirty fantasies of gangbang and anal sex,and one night Paul is partying with his friends (his aunt/landlady out of town),drunk and heavily aroused watching some dirty porn of girl being gangbanged/Blowbang,lisa walks in surprise to see the boys heavily aroused and shocked to see the porn and gets away but Paul and his friends have noticed her,paul decides to use this opportunity to lure her into the party blackmailing her do the some fashion walk infront of his friends with some skimpy outfits, and turns out they try to grope her and Paul uses his opportunity to tease her rosebud …and shocks her that she is such an anal freak, and it turns to be some heavy gangbang/blowbang party.
-I Hope Duncan and Peter will return, though Peter is kind of soft character ,hope Duncan has a lot of plans and lot more merciless friends with him who will eventually get Lisa and do some extreme stuffs in the future.
-I hope aoife’s Father will be great character and Lisa gonna mess with him who is directly connected to Duncan and his clan, think this will be the extreme path Lisa takes out ,and gets really messed up.
-as Lisa started her first photoshoot, hope Markus introduces her to one of his friends as a model who does shoots for playboy magazine and some porn shoots…and uses for her as a model for some porn shoots..one of porn director sets his eyes on her who is known for extreme gangbang stuffs.
I Hope u have lot of ideas too, love to see Lisa getting slowly transformed as a depraved and kinky girl..