TheLecher

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Wait, weren't you adamant in telling me that it was completely realistic and believable that she would give in to the blackmail in her situation?
Read through my posts again. I've been consistent on this point throughout my posts.

To restate my position clearly: I do find it believable and realistic that Lisa could be blackmailed in this situation with the material which Paul has on her. I do find it believable that Lisa would continue to submit until such time as she can find a way out, which she hasn't done yet. However, I think that Lisa's motives for submitting to Paul's blackmail have not been adequately explained in the game, which has led some people to the conclusion that her motives for submitting are insufficient. I think that PaleGrass should add more dialogue or internal monologue which will explain Lisa's motives more fully, instead of leaving them to subtext alone. Once that is done, my only criticism of the blackmail storyline will be answered.

Perhaps you are thinking of my argument that Lisa is motivated to submit by fear of the repercussions on her relationships with her aunt, her boyfriend, and Luca. I stand by that argument. But I drew that conclusion mostly from the subtext of the game. It's partially spelled out (where Danny, the boyfriend, is concerned) in dialogue between Lisa and Viv, and also Lisa and Paul, but I think it needs to be made clearer, as I don't think that subtext should be relied upon to support something as heavy as a blackmail storyline.
 

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Hi all, mac user here. can someone help?

First of all, for making the game run I had to run the command chmod -R +x .../.../Game.app/Contents/MacOS otherwise the system says there are permissions issues.

Secondly, for me it's impossible to change the settings, I keep getting this message, and the game crashes:

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Third, I can't save. When I get to the save menu, it keeps going back and forth between Save and the slot to be chosen, but nothing happens.

many thanks for your help
 

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First of all, for making the game run I had to run the command chmod -R +x .../.../Game.app/Contents/MacOS otherwise the system says there are permissions issues.
Do the same on the ".../Contents/Resources/" folder since this path is read-only too according to the error message.
 

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The only thing I have left to do that does not say "end of content Ch.2" in the journal is work with Moddy for the second time.
In the Replay Room, I see a ton of locked events I haven't found yet for both the mod shop and the hotel,
but they all say I have to either work with Moddy the 2nd time or complete the Moddy Gathering event.
I am on the route where boyfriend enjoys watching Lisa with other guys.

I have been to the damn mod shop about two dozen times, and Moddy is never there! Is who's working each day really just random? Because if that's the case, I have been having the shittiest luck ever. I feel like I'm going insane, going back and forth between the mod shop and home to sleep to the next day. Occasionally, I've also tried passing time to later in the day to see if he'll show up, but nothing. I've done everything with the hottub, Paul, all 10 instagram posts, Viv and Luca, etc.
I cannot figure out why I can't get Moddy to show up at his own damn shop! Am I missing something?

EDIT: OMFG! Okay, I got it. For anyone else having this problem, Moddy WILL NOT appear in the shop room. You have to put on the work clothes, enter the shop room, Lisa will have a thought about wondering where Moddy is, then you go back into the office, and all of a sudden he's sitting at the desk and the scene starts automatically. I had already done all the available work with Danny and Flat, so every time I walked in and didn't see Moddy there, I just left. The only reason I finally put on the work outfit was to see if I could trigger "secret shower scene" with Moddy that I only know exists from seeing it locked in the Replay Room. For the record, this was EXTREMELY frustrating and non-intuitive, and the in-game hints weren't helpful at all, except by the accident of looking for different scene.
 
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Read through my posts again. I've been consistent on this point throughout my posts.

To restate my position clearly: I do find it believable and realistic that Lisa could be blackmailed in this situation with the material which Paul has on her. I do find it believable that Lisa would continue to submit until such time as she can find a way out, which she hasn't done yet. However, I think that Lisa's motives for submitting to Paul's blackmail have not been adequately explained in the game, which has led some people to the conclusion that her motives for submitting are insufficient. I think that PaleGrass should add more dialogue or internal monologue which will explain Lisa's motives more fully, instead of leaving them to subtext alone. Once that is done, my only criticism of the blackmail storyline will be answered.

Perhaps you are thinking of my argument that Lisa is motivated to submit by fear of the repercussions on her relationships with her aunt, her boyfriend, and Luca. I stand by that argument. But I drew that conclusion mostly from the subtext of the game. It's partially spelled out (where Danny, the boyfriend, is concerned) in dialogue between Lisa and Viv, and also Lisa and Paul, but I think it needs to be made clearer, as I don't think that subtext should be relied upon to support something as heavy as a blackmail storyline.
Sorry, I just came in, and I'm not familiar with the history of this discussion. What exactly do you think is the subtext that is not explained well enough?
As far as I can tell, the nature of the blackmail is laid out pretty directly. I can certainly see someone thinking it's not logical to be so worried about what Sharon would think, but there are other people Paul mentions, like Luca and Danny. Again, I'm not sure Danny would care about Viv either (although I suppose that may depend on what path a player is on. I'm on the sharing route). If there is subtext going on, I would definitely love for it to be clearer, because I am oblivious to what it is.

Just for added clarity, I'm not trying to argue against you. I'm actually just asking what you think the subtext is, because I haven't noticed any and I'm curious.
 

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REQ: Could a kind patron please share the last message on Patreon about the new version? ... There are already pics for the next step in the Viv/Lisa connection in the pictures folder but the event isn't coded yet. And how do I get the alternative camping event with MF/MF, not MF/MM? Just the main strategy please. Thx
 

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where is ms short when i want to do the quest for aoife she isnt here in the college?
it was stuck for me for a lot of days as well. One day it triggered when leaving college even tho Shorts was not in her room. Maybe you have to finish other quests first - to me it felt like i needed to open the Brava Hotel jobs Quest for it to get triggered, but not really sure about this.
 
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Sorry, I just came in, and I'm not familiar with the history of this discussion. What exactly do you think is the subtext that is not explained well enough?
As far as I can tell, the nature of the blackmail is laid out pretty directly. I can certainly see someone thinking it's not logical to be so worried about what Sharon would think, but there are other people Paul mentions, like Luca and Danny. Again, I'm not sure Danny would care about Viv either (although I suppose that may depend on what path a player is on. I'm on the sharing route). If there is subtext going on, I would definitely love for it to be clearer, because I am oblivious to what it is.
Here's the subtext related to Paul's blackmail arc, as I see it. And, of course, a certain amount of subjective interpretation is unavoidable when discussing subtext. Bear in mind that I'm playing the Sharing route. Of course, it's necessary for Lisa to have cheated on Danny with Viv, in order to trigger the blackmail, so the Cheating route is also active in my playthrough, but the Sharing route is the primary route which I'm playing. The subtext of the game may be different on different routes.

  • Danny - Lisa's Relationship with Danny on the sharing route is pretty good, at the point in the game when the blackmail starts, and it has actually been getting better as the story progresses. So there is good reason to believe that Lisa wouldn't want to lose Danny, or to have their relationship damaged in any way. Also, it should be remembered that they have only engaged in sharing, not in any sort of open relationship in which they fool around with other people separately, and they have not even discussed an open relationship (so far). So Lisa has no reason to believe that Danny would be okay with her fucking other people when he isn't there, and especially not without his permission. Is it possible that Danny would be okay with what she and Viv have been doing? Yes, it's possible. But Danny has already shown his capacity for jealousy once, at the swim meet, so it's not a safe assumption that he would be okay with it, especially since Lisa didn't ask him about it before doing it, didn't include him, and hasn't told him about it after the fact. She has, in fact, kept it from him. She has cheated on him, and there's really no other way to look at it. And she clearly knows that she has cheated, because she hasn't told him and is afraid of him finding out. This is made clear in her dialogue with Viv in her bedroom, but I think that it should be made clearer and emphasized more, rather than just relying on subtext. If Lisa has been keeping this secret from Danny (She has.), and is afraid of him finding out (She is.), then this is definitely a motive - possibly a strong motive - for her to submit to Paul's blackmail.
  • Luca and Viv - Yes, I'm including Viv in this, and not only because she's Lisa's "partner in crime" in cheating on Danny. Lisa is becoming more and more invested in both Viv and Luca as the story unfolds. She thinks that Luca is a sweet kid, but that he lacks confidence and that he's too withdrawn. She recognizes that he's highly intelligent, and she wants to see him do well. She tries to encourage him, both in his studies and in physical exercise, and it almost certainly follows that she wants him to have a good opinion of her. She also has compassion on his and Viv's situation of apparently having been abandoned by Luca's father. She sees that Luca loves his mother and tries to support her through her feelings of abandonment and her drinking problem, and that he doesn't want his mother to be worried about him. And she also understands why Viv is worried about her son, given that he also feels abandoned and is shy and withdrawn. And, sex aside, she has also begun to care about Viv, even going so far as to stand up to Riggs on her behalf. So it should be easy to see why she wouldn't want Luca to find out about her affair with his mother. He might feel betrayed by her, and lose his good opinion of her, and all of the work she has done to encourage him and bring him out of his shell might be undone. So she needs to keep her affair with Viv a secret, in order to protect Luca, but also to protect herself and her investment in Luca. And, she also needs to protect Viv. Since she has no idea how Luca might react to finding out about her and his mother, she can't be sure that he wouldn't also feel betrayed by his mother, or might feel that his mother betrayed his father. Sure, he called his father a bastard, the one and only time in the game that he mentioned his father, but that doesn't mean that his feelings about his father aren't still very complicated. Lisa can't possibly be sure of how he would react, either to her or to Viv. And she knows that Luca is the only thing Viv has left, and pretty much the only reason she goes on living. She can't risk possibly being the cause of a breakdown in their relationship, not if she cares about both of them.
  • Jo - In the introduction to the game, we are told that Jo is Lisa's dearest friend (Though Gina is also a very close friend.), and that they have been friends for many years. And we also know that Jo is very close to Danny. At the swim meet, it was made clear that Jo does not look kindly on Lisa cheating on Danny. Despite her longstanding and close friendship with Lisa, she isn't going to tolerate Lisa turning into a cheat, assuming that she finds out about it. The swim meet also makes it very clear that Lisa values Jo's good opinion of her, and feels terrible at the thought of their friendship being harmed. Well, if Paul's blackmail route is active, then Lisa has cheated on Danny with Viv. She doesn't want Jo to find out, anymore than she wants Danny to find out.
So, in order to protect her relationship with Danny, her relationship with Jo, her relationship with Luca, Viv's relationship with Luca, and possibly her relationship with Viv (Since Viv might blame Lisa if Luca turns against his mother over the affair.), Lisa can't risk her cheating coming to light. She actually has a shit-ton to lose. She has to keep the affair a secret, and she has to do whatever is necessary to that end.

Of course, she's making the wrong choice. What she should do is to tell Danny and Jo and Luca the truth and take whatever consequences might come. But it's easy to understand (and completely believable) why she wouldn't choose that option. So now she has to go on submitting to Paul's blackmail, until she can come up with a plan to turn the tables on him and get free.

This is my reading of the subtext of the game. I could be reading it wrong, but I don't think I am. And I do think that this is more than enough motivation for Lisa's choice to submit to the blackmail. However, I don't think that this should be left in the subtext. I think that it should be spelled out more clearly in the dialogue and Lisa's internal monologue. Some of the explanation is there, in her conversations with Viv and Paul, but I think that it should be made clearer, for the benefit of anyone who may not have picked up on the subtext.

Just for added clarity, I'm not trying to argue against you. I'm actually just asking what you think the subtext is, because I haven't noticed any and I'm curious.
For the record, you should feel free to argue against me. I'm not allergic to people disagreeing with me. And, if I were, that would be my problem, not yours.
 

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There are several things gated behind larger events in ways that are not mentioned in the game. This is not an exhaustive list, but off the top of my head:

The hottub gets installed while you are away on the camping trip. So anything related to "after hottub" won't trigger until after the camping trip. This includes the Instagram photo by the pool and Viv coming to Lisa/Sharon's house when it says "find her in the kitchen."

Events at the hotel will stall until after you attend the gathering at Moddy's house.

I think a character graphic for Aoife appears at the college way sooner than it needs to, but you can't ever interact with it. Once you've done what you need to do, simply exiting the college will trigger the next event. I'm not sure what did it finally, but you cannot find and talk to Ms.Short directly again after completing the swim team trip (or close to there). For a long time I saw something say "you have to talk to Ms.Short" but she wasn't ever around to talk to, it was triggered by something unrelated.
 

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Here's the subtext related to Paul's blackmail arc, as I see it. And, of course, a certain amount of subjective interpretation is unavoidable when discussing subtext. Bear in mind that I'm playing the Sharing route. Of course, it's necessary for Lisa to have cheated on Danny with Viv, in order to trigger the blackmail, so the Cheating route is also active in my playthrough, but the Sharing route is the primary route which I'm playing. The subtext of the game may be different on different routes.

  • Danny - Lisa's Relationship with Danny on the sharing route is pretty good, at the point in the game when the blackmail starts, and it has actually been getting better as the story progresses. So there is good reason to believe that Lisa wouldn't want to lose Danny, or to have their relationship damaged in any way. Also, it should be remembered that they have only engaged in sharing, not in any sort of open relationship in which they fool around with other people separately, and they have not even discussed an open relationship (so far). So Lisa has no reason to believe that Danny would be okay with her fucking other people when he isn't there, and especially not without his permission. Is it possible that Danny would be okay with what she and Viv have been doing? Yes, it's possible. But Danny has already shown his capacity for jealousy once, at the swim meet, so it's not a safe assumption that he would be okay with it, especially since Lisa didn't ask him about it before doing it, didn't include him, and hasn't told him about it after the fact. She has, in fact, kept it from him. She has cheated on him, and there's really no other way to look at it. And she clearly knows that she has cheated, because she hasn't told him and is afraid of him finding out. This is made clear in her dialogue with Viv in her bedroom, but I think that it should be made clearer and emphasized more, rather than just relying on subtext. If Lisa has been keeping this secret from Danny (She has.), and is afraid of him finding out (She is.), then this is definitely a motive - possibly a strong motive - for her to submit to Paul's blackmail.
  • Luca and Viv - Yes, I'm including Viv in this, and not only because she's Lisa's "partner in crime" in cheating on Danny. Lisa is becoming more and more invested in both Viv and Luca as the story unfolds. She thinks that Luca is a sweet kid, but that he lacks confidence and that he's too withdrawn. She recognizes that he's highly intelligent, and she wants to see him do well. She tries to encourage him, both in his studies and in physical exercise, and it almost certainly follows that she wants him to have a good opinion of her. She also has compassion on his and Viv's situation of apparently having been abandoned by Luca's father. She sees that Luca loves his mother and tries to support her through her feelings of abandonment and her drinking problem, and that he doesn't want his mother to be worried about him. And she also understands why Viv is worried about her son, given that he also feels abandoned and is shy and withdrawn. And, sex aside, she has also begun to care about Viv, even going so far as to stand up to Riggs on her behalf. So it should be easy to see why she wouldn't want Luca to find out about her affair with his mother. He might feel betrayed by her, and lose his good opinion of her, and all of the work she has done to encourage him and bring him out of his shell might be undone. So she needs to keep her affair with Viv a secret, in order to protect Luca, but also to protect herself and her investment in Luca. And, she also needs to protect Viv. Since she has no idea how Luca might react to finding out about her and his mother, she can't be sure that he wouldn't also feel betrayed by his mother, or might feel that his mother betrayed his father. Sure, he called his father a bastard, the one and only time in the game that he mentioned his father, but that doesn't mean that his feelings about his father aren't still very complicated. Lisa can't possibly be sure of how he would react, either to her or to Viv. And she knows that Luca is the only thing Viv has left, and pretty much the only reason she goes on living. She can't risk possibly being the cause of a breakdown in their relationship, not if she cares about both of them.
  • Jo - In the introduction to the game, we are told that Jo is Lisa's dearest friend (Though Gina is also a very close friend.), and that they have been friends for many years. And we also know that Jo is very close to Danny. At the swim meet, it was made clear that Jo does not look kindly on Lisa cheating on Danny. Despite her longstanding and close friendship with Lisa, she isn't going to tolerate Lisa turning into a cheat, assuming that she finds out about it. The swim meet also makes it very clear that Lisa values Jo's good opinion of her, and feels terrible at the thought of their friendship being harmed. Well, if Paul's blackmail route is active, then Lisa has cheated on Danny with Viv. She doesn't want Jo to find out, anymore than she wants Danny to find out.
So, in order to protect her relationship with Danny, her relationship with Jo, her relationship with Luca, Viv's relationship with Luca, and possibly her relationship with Viv (Since Viv might blame Lisa if Luca turns against his mother over the affair.), Lisa can't risk her cheating coming to light. She actually has a shit-ton to lose. She has to keep the affair a secret, and she has to do whatever is necessary to that end.

Of course, she's making the wrong choice. What she should do is to tell Danny and Jo and Luca the truth and take whatever consequences might come. But it's easy to understand (and completely believable) why she wouldn't choose that option. So now she has to go on submitting to Paul's blackmail, until she can come up with a plan to turn the tables on him and get free.

This is my reading of the subtext of the game. I could be reading it wrong, but I don't think I am. And I do think that this is more than enough motivation for Lisa's choice to submit to the blackmail. However, I don't think that this should be left in the subtext. I think that it should be spelled out more clearly in the dialogue and Lisa's internal monologue. Some of the explanation is there, in her conversations with Viv and Paul, but I think that it should be made clearer, for the benefit of anyone who may not have picked up on the subtext.



For the record, you should feel free to argue against me. I'm not allergic to people disagreeing with me. And, if I were, that would be my problem, not yours.
this has gotta be a record for the amount of text in a porn forum comment :LOL:
 
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this has gotta be a record for the amount of text in a porn forum comment :LOL:
Nah, that looks fine to me. I've made some pretty long-ass posts, including an intentionally long post just to be sarcastic with a guy commenting on how long my posts are. :p
 

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Someone needs to create a proper walkthrough since this forum has become flooded with 'how do i do X' posts
Feel free to write a walkthrough, but I don't agree that one is needed. Between the quest log and the Recollections Room, it's pretty easy to find everything.

this has gotta be a record for the amount of text in a porn forum comment :LOL:
Not even close. There are literally hundreds of longer posts on this forum, including some longer posts which I've written. I've also seen plenty of longer posts on other porn forums.
 

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Here's the subtext related to Paul's blackmail arc, as I see it. And, of course, a certain amount of subjective interpretation is unavoidable when discussing subtext. Bear in mind that I'm playing the Sharing route. Of course, it's necessary for Lisa to have cheated on Danny with Viv, in order to trigger the blackmail, so the Cheating route is also active in my playthrough, but the Sharing route is the primary route which I'm playing. The subtext of the game may be different on different routes.

  • Danny - Lisa's Relationship with Danny on the sharing route is pretty good, at the point in the game when the blackmail starts, and it has actually been getting better as the story progresses. So there is good reason to believe that Lisa wouldn't want to lose Danny, or to have their relationship damaged in any way. Also, it should be remembered that they have only engaged in sharing, not in any sort of open relationship in which they fool around with other people separately, and they have not even discussed an open relationship (so far). So Lisa has no reason to believe that Danny would be okay with her fucking other people when he isn't there, and especially not without his permission. Is it possible that Danny would be okay with what she and Viv have been doing? Yes, it's possible. But Danny has already shown his capacity for jealousy once, at the swim meet, so it's not a safe assumption that he would be okay with it, especially since Lisa didn't ask him about it before doing it, didn't include him, and hasn't told him about it after the fact. She has, in fact, kept it from him. She has cheated on him, and there's really no other way to look at it. And she clearly knows that she has cheated, because she hasn't told him and is afraid of him finding out. This is made clear in her dialogue with Viv in her bedroom, but I think that it should be made clearer and emphasized more, rather than just relying on subtext. If Lisa has been keeping this secret from Danny (She has.), and is afraid of him finding out (She is.), then this is definitely a motive - possibly a strong motive - for her to submit to Paul's blackmail.
  • Luca and Viv - Yes, I'm including Viv in this, and not only because she's Lisa's "partner in crime" in cheating on Danny. Lisa is becoming more and more invested in both Viv and Luca as the story unfolds. She thinks that Luca is a sweet kid, but that he lacks confidence and that he's too withdrawn. She recognizes that he's highly intelligent, and she wants to see him do well. She tries to encourage him, both in his studies and in physical exercise, and it almost certainly follows that she wants him to have a good opinion of her. She also has compassion on his and Viv's situation of apparently having been abandoned by Luca's father. She sees that Luca loves his mother and tries to support her through her feelings of abandonment and her drinking problem, and that he doesn't want his mother to be worried about him. And she also understands why Viv is worried about her son, given that he also feels abandoned and is shy and withdrawn. And, sex aside, she has also begun to care about Viv, even going so far as to stand up to Riggs on her behalf. So it should be easy to see why she wouldn't want Luca to find out about her affair with his mother. He might feel betrayed by her, and lose his good opinion of her, and all of the work she has done to encourage him and bring him out of his shell might be undone. So she needs to keep her affair with Viv a secret, in order to protect Luca, but also to protect herself and her investment in Luca. And, she also needs to protect Viv. Since she has no idea how Luca might react to finding out about her and his mother, she can't be sure that he wouldn't also feel betrayed by his mother, or might feel that his mother betrayed his father. Sure, he called his father a bastard, the one and only time in the game that he mentioned his father, but that doesn't mean that his feelings about his father aren't still very complicated. Lisa can't possibly be sure of how he would react, either to her or to Viv. And she knows that Luca is the only thing Viv has left, and pretty much the only reason she goes on living. She can't risk possibly being the cause of a breakdown in their relationship, not if she cares about both of them.
  • Jo - In the introduction to the game, we are told that Jo is Lisa's dearest friend (Though Gina is also a very close friend.), and that they have been friends for many years. And we also know that Jo is very close to Danny. At the swim meet, it was made clear that Jo does not look kindly on Lisa cheating on Danny. Despite her longstanding and close friendship with Lisa, she isn't going to tolerate Lisa turning into a cheat, assuming that she finds out about it. The swim meet also makes it very clear that Lisa values Jo's good opinion of her, and feels terrible at the thought of their friendship being harmed. Well, if Paul's blackmail route is active, then Lisa has cheated on Danny with Viv. She doesn't want Jo to find out, anymore than she wants Danny to find out.
So, in order to protect her relationship with Danny, her relationship with Jo, her relationship with Luca, Viv's relationship with Luca, and possibly her relationship with Viv (Since Viv might blame Lisa if Luca turns against his mother over the affair.), Lisa can't risk her cheating coming to light. She actually has a shit-ton to lose. She has to keep the affair a secret, and she has to do whatever is necessary to that end.

Of course, she's making the wrong choice. What she should do is to tell Danny and Jo and Luca the truth and take whatever consequences might come. But it's easy to understand (and completely believable) why she wouldn't choose that option. So now she has to go on submitting to Paul's blackmail, until she can come up with a plan to turn the tables on him and get free.

This is my reading of the subtext of the game. I could be reading it wrong, but I don't think I am. And I do think that this is more than enough motivation for Lisa's choice to submit to the blackmail. However, I don't think that this should be left in the subtext. I think that it should be spelled out more clearly in the dialogue and Lisa's internal monologue. Some of the explanation is there, in her conversations with Viv and Paul, but I think that it should be made clearer, for the benefit of anyone who may not have picked up on the subtext.



For the record, you should feel free to argue against me. I'm not allergic to people disagreeing with me. And, if I were, that would be my problem, not yours.
I actually agree with all of that. I think for some of it I may have made the logical jump without thinking of it as subtext, but you're right that a lot of that is not made clear, especially in reference to why she puts up with the blackmail.

This may be a larger or associated complaint about the game, but I didn't actually realize for some time that I was on the "Cheating" path AND the "Sharing" path. Lisa had established first that Danny enjoyed hearing about guys flirting with and even groping her and that's what led to the sharing idea. She's learning about all this from Sharon, who clearly has sex without her husband around all the time. So, when I intentionally avoided the Cheating path and then hopped on the Sharing path, I initially thought that meant that all bets were off, that nothing would be considered cheating anymore. At some point, it came up that Lisa was cheating, and I was kind of surprised and disappointed.

I see in the Replay Room that Lisa has some really heavy emotional reactions to cheating when she is just on the Cheating path without Sharing active. Once you're on the Sharing path, I don't think it's clear enough that doing things without Danny around still counts as cheating, at least not initially. This may be affecting the impression players of the sharing path have about the blackmail as well. In scenes like on the beach with Byron, Lisa seems to be mildly uncertain how Danny would react to knowing what she's doing. That's a far cry from hating herself like she does in certain scenes on the cheating path, and in my mind it didn't really register as cheating. So when we get to the thing with Viv, it seemed kind of disjointed that Lisa was suddenly so worried about Danny finding out.

As for Sharon... frankly, after the thing she pulled over coffee helping Paul, I'm a little paranoid she won't even be angry at Paul or may even be in on it with him. I don't want to believe that, but she has been pushing Lisa to fuck anything that walks, and that kitchen scene was a little unnerving. At the very least, after molesting Lisa herself and seeming not the least bit possessive of Lisa, I'd think she'd be the last one to care about Lisa and Viv hooking up, which feels like the part most highlighted in the game in reference to the blackmail.

So, yeah. I would definitely agree that some of those other points you mention need to be made more clear, the focus should probably be more on those other things than on Sharon (unless we're being set-up for some hardcore heartbreak from Sharon siding with Paul (PLEASE god NO!) ), and I would add that the fact that Lisa is actually cheating also needs to be made more clear (and sooner) when on the Sharing path.

There are two or three times near the start of the blackmail that Lisa tries to resist and Paul keeps bringing up Sharon finding out. Maybe those moments could be re-written to have him mention a different aspects of these things each time. Although, as I say that, it might make Paul look much more intelligent and Machiavellian for him to even be aware of things like how Luca or Jo would feel. We don't know for sure how much he knows about all of Lisa's mundane activities and friendships. He might know Danny and Jo are close, but it's not mentioned. It sounds like at some point he hears from the other goons how close she is to Luca, but we don't know when he finds that out or how much he knows about Viv and Luca's situation.

Sidenote, while I applaud the efforts and skill put into writing the darker and more hard-hitting story-lines in this game, I think I might puke if Lisa ever has to have sex with Riggs, and I will be very frustrated if a few key people like Riggs and Paul manage to survive this game to the end without at least ending up in prison if not a grave. I'm an 80's kid. I still like it when the good guys win and the bad guys lose.
 
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As for Sharon... frankly, after the thing she pulled over coffee helping Paul, I'm a little paranoid she won't even be angry at Paul or may even be in on it with him. I don't want to believe that, but she has been pushing Lisa to fuck anything that walks, and that kitchen scene was a little unnerving.
I really don't think that Sharon would be on Paul's side. She raised Lisa and seems to genuinely care about her very much. I think that the scene of Sharon helping Paul to "prank" Lisa over coffee is just an indication that Sharon is naturally mischievous and genuinely has no sense of propriety, or at least rejects all notions of propriety.

Basically, I think that Sharon has a sort of "ethical blindness", but that she really loves Lisa. I think that, if she knew what Paul was doing to Lisa, she would probably give him the "Bobbitt Special".

At the very least, after molesting Lisa herself and seeming not the least bit possessive of Lisa, I'd think she'd be the last one to care about Lisa and Viv hooking up, which feels like the part most highlighted in the game in reference to the blackmail.
I kind of think that there's something which we don't know about that situation - some reason why Sharon would care or why Lisa doesn't want Sharon to know. I have the idea that there was supposed to be some more backstory there which got left out, maybe because PaleGrass wanted to fast track the blackmail content. That's just a guess on my part, of course. I'm just as likely to be wrong about that as I am to be right. But if I am right, then PaleGrass really needs to get that backstory added to the game.

Although, as I say that, it might make Paul look much more intelligent and Machiavellian for him to even be aware of things like how Luca or Jo would feel. We don't know for sure how much he knows about all of Lisa's mundane activities and friendships. He might know Danny and Jo are close, but it's not mentioned. It sounds like at some point he hears from the other goons how close she is to Luca, but we don't know when he finds that out or how much he knows about Viv and Luca's situation.
I really don't think that it matters how much Paul knows about Lisa's relationships with Jo or Luca. He doesn't have to know how much Lisa really stands to lose. It's really enough that he knows that she's cheating on Danny and doesn't want him to know. And he certainly does know that, because he overheard Lisa and Viv in Lisa's bedroom. The other consideration (Lisa's friendship with Jo, Jo's friendship with Danny, Lisa's involvement with Luca, Luca and Viv's family situation, etc.) will be present in Lisa's mind as reasons to give in to the blackmail, whether Paul knows about them or not. She has to be concerned about everything she stands to lose, not just what Paul knows. However, this supposition depends on my reading of the subtext being correct. If I'm wrong, then this argument crumbles. And if I'm right, then the subtext needs to be more clearly stated.

That being said, Paul definitely does learn about Lisa being protective of Luca from Conner and Mark. This is clear from the scene at the cinema. Regardless of exactly when he learned it, that knowledge is a factor for Paul now.

Sidenote, while I applaud the efforts and skill put into writing the darker and more hard-hitting story-lines in this game, I think I might puke if Lisa ever has to have sex with Riggs, and I will be very frustrated if a few key people like Riggs and Paul manage to survive this game to the end without at least ending up in prison if not a grave. I'm an 80's kid. I still like it when the good guys win and the bad guys lose.
I'm sure that any sexual content between Lisa and Riggs will be optional, just like Paul's blackmail content is optional.

And while I don't know any more than you do about what PaleGrass has planned, I'm confident that there will be a "good guys win" ending to the game.
 
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WARNING: There is a bug in the Mod Shop Gathering event that will put you on Sharing Route.
To fix this you have to delete the following files in game/scripts/credit events/Mod Shop
  • Mod Shop Gathering.rpy
  • Mod Shop Gathering.rpyc
and put the attached file in it. Load a save before Mod Shop Gathering event and restart it, if you already played it.
People who already were on Sharing Route can ignore this.
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Lisa - Episode 2 Chapter 2 v1.0 Final v1
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Any update to the RenPy version?
 
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